Pyar ka Panchi

by nishi gahlaut on August 28, 2012, 04:20:57 PM
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Maine socha tha kya ho kya gaya,
Maine jise chaha tha wo kaha gaya,
Pyar ka panchi pinjara tod kar ud gaya,
Hum dekhte he reh gaye wo kahin aur mud gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2012, 06:55:01 PM »
Maine socha tha kya ho kya gaya,
Maine jise chaha tha wo kaha gaya,
Pyar ka panchi pinjara tod kar ud gaya,
Hum dekhte he reh gaye wo kahin aur mud gaya.



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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2012, 08:04:11 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 12:56:10 AM »
bahut khoob nishi ji
Aap pinjare ka darwaja khula rakhiye
Subah ka bhula ghar ayega yahi sochiye
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 03:59:38 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 06:05:37 AM »
nishi ji bahut khoob
Pyar ka panchhi to urhne ko hota hai bekaraar
Wo to urhta hai aur dhoodhta hi rahta hai apna pyaar

Pyar ke panchhee ko pinjra nahi use pyar chaheeye
Urhne ki na soche usko aaye itna sara pyaar chaheeye


Jis ko apne paas chaho use itna pyaar aur itna pyar do
Pyar ki tamanaa uski bharhtee hi rahe kabhi poori na ho

Kabhi na chhorh kar wo jayega kahin
Pyar kiyon ki utna usko milega nahin

Galti se agar kahin urh bhi gayaa
To wapas zaroor aa jayega wahin
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 06:07:26 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 06:13:56 AM »
Maine socha tha kya ho kya gaya,
Maine jise chaha tha wo kaha gaya,
Pyar ka panchi pinjara tod kar ud gaya,
Hum dekhte he reh gaye wo kahin aur mud gaya.


bahut accha likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2012, 06:14:50 AM »
nishi ji bahut khoob
Pyar ka panchhi to urhne ko hota hai bekaraar
Wo to urhta hai aur dhoodhta hi rahta hai apna pyaar

Pyar ke panchhee ko pinjra nahi use pyar chaheeye
Urhne ki na soche usko aaye itna sara pyaar chaheeye


Jis ko apne paas chaho use itna pyaar aur itna pyar do
Pyar ki tamanaa uski bharhtee hi rahe kabhi poori na ho

Kabhi na chhorh kar wo jayega kahin
Pyar kiyon ki utna usko milega nahin

Galti se agar kahin urh bhi gayaa
To wapas zaroor aa jayega wahin


wah waah
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 06:46:57 AM »
suman ji shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 07:00:52 AM »
BOHUT KHUB SUMAN JI
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2012, 10:10:27 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka.... Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2012, 10:13:56 AM »
Pyar ka panchhi to urhne ko hota hai bekaraar
Wo to urhta hai aur dhoodhta hi rahta hai apna pyaar Pyar ke panchhee ko pinjra nahi use pyar chaheeye
Urhne ki na soche usko aaye itna sara pyaar chaheeye Jis ko apne paas chaho use itna pyaar aur itna pyar do
Pyar ki tamanaa uski bharhtee hi rahe kabhi poori na ho Kabhi na chhorh kar wo jayega kahin
Pyar kiyon ki utna usko milega nahin Galti se agar kahin urh bhi gayaa
To wapas zaroor aa jayega wahin

Bahut khub Bansi ji.... Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2012, 05:54:33 PM »
nishi ji bahut bahut shukriya

Aap ka likha parh kar kuchh vichaaar ayaa
Maine bhi kuchh socha aur  likh diaya

Kis tarah bataaoon mujhe kitna achha laga
Jo aap ko aur saatheeyon ko pasand aaya
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2012, 10:52:31 PM »
Wah!!!
Woh kahi aur mud gaye....
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