pya.r kee har kaHaaNee ajee.b hotee hai,.........

by laaiba on April 20, 2013, 01:00:54 AM
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aafTe naagahaaNee ajee.b hotee haI
apno kee badgumaaNee ajee.b hotee haI

baarishen rooth jaatii hain jub zameenon se
dash.t meIn ik veeraaNee ajee.b hotee haI

dil meIn jub bhi baseraa too kar letaa hai to,
dar.d kee bas rawaaNee ajee.b hotee hai,

dil ye jub bhee sulagtaa hai aanch detaa hAI
hij.r kee  bhi nishaaNee ajee.b hotee haI

too.te  dil ujdi  aankhen o bewafaayain hain
pya.r kee har ka haaNee ajee.b  hotee haI
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 01:25:33 AM »
Behtreen Shayari Hai Apki.Like It.
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 01:40:41 AM »
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!



Badi hi gehri aur khoob kalaam kahi hai jee.. kafi umdaa ashaar rahe..
Amuman sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par huamri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2013, 01:53:44 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on April 20, 2013, 01:00:54 AM

aafTe naagahaaNee ajee.b hotee haI
apno kee badgumaaNee ajee.b hotee haI

baarishen rooth jaatii hain jub zameenon se
dash.t meIn ik veeraaNee ajee.b hotee haI

dil meIn jub bhi baseraa too kar letaa hai to,
dar.d kee bas rawaaNee ajee.b hotee hai,

dil ye jub bhee sulagtaa hai aanch detaa hAI
hij.r kee  bhi nishaaNee ajee.b hotee haI

too.te  dil ujdi  aankhen o bewafaayain hain
pya.r kee har ka haaNee ajee.b  hotee haI



3rd sher khoob raha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2013, 02:33:08 AM »
khubsurat peshkash bahut khub laaiba ji...

Intezar !
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laaiba
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2013, 03:57:44 AM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 20, 2013, 01:25:33 AM
Behtreen Shayari Hai Apki.Like It.
bohat shukria aapkaa sagar ji,...........
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2013, 04:01:00 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 20, 2013, 01:40:41 AM
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!



Badi hi gehri aur khoob kalaam kahi hai jee.. kafi umdaa ashaar rahe..
Amuman sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par huamri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



bohat bohat shukria aapkaa parwaaz ji ,........
khush rahen
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2013, 04:01:20 AM »
sach meN ye saare ehsaash aur aise guzre pal, dono hin ajeeb hote haiN.... Ahcha likha hai laaiba ji, aage v yuNhi likhti raheN...
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2013, 04:05:14 AM »
Quote from: adil bechain on April 20, 2013, 01:53:44 AM

3rd sher khoob raha Applause Applause Applause
bohaT Shukria aapkaa ab ji,......
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2013, 09:46:22 AM »
bhut khub........
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2013, 12:44:03 PM »
 Applause
  bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2013, 01:16:12 PM »
bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2013, 02:23:56 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
mujhe behad pasand aayi aapki yeh kalaam laaaiba ji. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. dheron daad.
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2013, 02:30:28 PM »
Bahut hi pyari peshkash laaiba jee
yun hi likhti rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2013, 08:04:38 PM »
Quote from: Taish on April 20, 2013, 04:01:20 AM
sach meN ye saare ehsaash aur aise guzre pal, dono hin ajeeb hote haiN.... Ahcha likha hai laaiba ji, aage v yuNhi likhti raheN...
shukria taish ji,................
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