pyarr toot gaya!!!

by nice_off_me on July 01, 2005, 08:27:03 AM
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aaj ashkon kaa taar toot gayaa
rishtaa-e-intazaar tout gayaa

youn vo Thukaraa ke chal diye
ek khilaunaa thaa pyaar toot gayaa

rote reh reh kar hichkiyaan lekar
saaz-e-Gam baar baar toot gayaa

aap kii beruKhii kaa shikavaa kyaa
dil thaa naa-paaidaar toot gayaa

dekh lii dil ne besabaatii-e-gul
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gayaa

'JANNA' kyaa chaar din kii ranjish se
itanii muddat kaa pyaar toot gayaa

 :cry:
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2005, 09:28:06 AM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
aaj ashkon kaa taar toot gayaa
rishtaa-e-intazaar tout gayaa

youn vo Thukaraa ke chal diye
ek khilaunaa thaa pyaar toot gayaa

rote reh reh kar hichkiyaan lekar
saaz-e-Gam baar baar toot gayaa

aap kii beruKhii kaa shikavaa kyaa
dil thaa naa-paaidaar toot gayaa

dekh lii dil ne besabaatii-e-gul
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gayaa

'JANNA' kyaa chaar din kii ranjish se
itanii muddat kaa pyaar toot gayaa

 :cry:
lovely sis.first two lines to bohat hi acchi hain.

"Toot gaya har sama jo intezar ke naam thha,
  tere saath jeena hi mera armaan thha,
  apni har khushi ko tere dil pe sajaana chaha,
  jo khoya hai aaj maine,wo meri jaan thha,
  mere pyaar ka kuch to sila diya hota tumne,
  baar baar uksaaya jisne,yahi dil-e-nadaan thha."
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2005, 03:02:22 PM »
Bohat khoob Simran & Nidhi............
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2005, 04:59:53 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat khoob Simran & Nidhi............
bohat thanx Aryaan Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2005, 06:25:10 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
aaj ashkon kaa taar toot gayaa
rishtaa-e-intazaar tout gayaa

youn vo Thukaraa ke chal diye
ek khilaunaa thaa pyaar toot gayaa

rote reh reh kar hichkiyaan lekar
saaz-e-Gam baar baar toot gayaa

aap kii beruKhii kaa shikavaa kyaa
dil thaa naa-paaidaar toot gayaa

dekh lii dil ne besabaatii-e-gul
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gayaa

'JANNA' kyaa chaar din kii ranjish se
itanii muddat kaa pyaar toot gayaa

 :cry:
lovely sis.first two lines to bohat hi acchi hain.

"Toot gaya har sama jo intezar ke naam thha,
  tere saath jeena hi mera armaan thha,
  apni har khushi ko tere dil pe sajaana chaha,
  jo khoya hai aaj maine,wo meri jaan thha,
  mere pyaar ka kuch to sila diya hota tumne,
  baar baar uksaaya jisne,yahi dil-e-nadaan thha."


wah  wah    simmi...............nidhi................  very  nice  written........ very  touching words..........
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2005, 06:26:29 PM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
aaj ashkon kaa taar toot gayaa
rishtaa-e-intazaar tout gayaa

youn vo Thukaraa ke chal diye
ek khilaunaa thaa pyaar toot gayaa

rote reh reh kar hichkiyaan lekar
saaz-e-Gam baar baar toot gayaa

aap kii beruKhii kaa shikavaa kyaa
dil thaa naa-paaidaar toot gayaa

dekh lii dil ne besabaatii-e-gul
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gayaa

'JANNA' kyaa chaar din kii ranjish se
itanii muddat kaa pyaar toot gayaa

 :cry:


bahut khoob.....................
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rohit30002
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2005, 06:38:07 PM »
Great sabne bahut accha likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2005, 09:50:44 AM »
Quote from: "rohit30002"
Great sabne bahut accha likha hai
Thanx Rohit and waheed .
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2009, 10:28:32 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Simran ji really touching and wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Nidhi ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2010, 04:46:21 PM »
Hasino ki be-wafai se aap ka taaruf ho gaya,
Aap ka to dil hi toota, unke liye tamasha ho gaya.

Surinder Narang
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