Qabr Ke Sannate _______________ {Angel}

by angel4u on June 07, 2009, 05:42:45 AM
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In Andheron Mein Ajab Se Khauf Ke Kaarvan Rehte Hai,
Meri Qabr Ke Sannate Aapas Mein Batein Karte Rehte Hai,

Yahan Par Ujale Kisi Beemari Ke Shikar Lagte Hai,
Thak Ke Mere Qafan Pe Karrahte Hue Bas Soye Rehte Hai,

Dhundti Hoon Ke Kash Koi Darwaza Bahar Ki Janib Jata Ho,
Mere Ashq Khuli Hawaon Mein Bikharne Ko Taraste Hai,

Aaj Koi Phool Nahi Chadha Meri Mazaar Pe Jaane Kyon,
Kya Ab Gulaab Us Bahar Ki Duniya Mein Nahi Mehekte Hai?

Masroofiyat Hai Bahut Mere Apno Ko Mujhe Pata Hai,
Chalo Phir Bhi Hum Is Qabr Mein Bas Intezaar Karte Hai...
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 06:15:05 AM »
 Applause Applause
Bahut bahut accha likha hai dear hasina...
(Itna dard?  sad5 )
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 06:18:01 AM »
Thank You so much Roja...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm, dard ka to aisa hia ke............. Bas kabhi kabhi ho uthta hai sad5
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 02:48:14 PM »
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Yeh As'haar Ki jitni Tareef Karoon Kam Hia..

"Aaj Koi Phool Nahi Chadha Meri Mazaar Par Jaane Kyon,
Kya Ab Gulab Uss Bahar Ki Duniya Mein Nahi Mehakte Hai"...

Bahut Dard hai Aapki Iss Nazm Mein.. Bahut Ache..
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 02:49:45 PM »
Thank you so much Khwaish Ji...

Padhne ka aur pasand karne ka shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 02:56:26 PM »
BOhat Achch Nazm Hai Mashallah Huzaina Sis,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 03:02:12 PM »
Der se padhne ke sorry dear...Bohot dard bhara likha hai... sad5

Bohot Khoob Sweetie
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2009, 03:35:50 PM »
BOhat Achch Nazm Hai Mashallah Huzaina Sis,.
Nice One,.

Thank you so much Azeem Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2009, 03:36:16 PM »
Der se padhne ke sorry dear...Bohot dard bhara likha hai... sad5

Bohot Khoob Sweetie

Its ok dear. Padha to sahi Usual Smile

Thankyou ! for liking dear...
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 02:27:18 PM »
Is Qabr Ke Sannate Mein Gunjti Hai Aaj Bhi Meri Dhadkan Kyon,
Ke Kahin Ye Tere Wafaon Ke Sisakne Ki Aawaaz To Nahi...
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 04:46:14 PM »
Bohot hi khubsoorat likha hai Angel!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 04:47:39 PM »
Thank you sooooo much sweetie Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 04:51:46 PM »
Huzena,

Too good ! too sad ! sad5

I liked it Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 04:53:46 PM »
Thanks Bhaiya...

Gayab.com. :O
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 04:56:52 PM »
Are Kaise miss kar diya maine iss Lovely Creation ko..

Its really very tochy and beautifuly expressed sweetz..Usual Smile
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