Qata talluq..........'Sahal'

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                           Qata talluq..........'Sahal'

Hamare darmiyan ye jo faasla hai,
humein  naseeb se  nahin mila hai.

Karni apni hi kuch to kharab hogi,
Isliye tabse gardishon ka silsila hai.

Tanhai mere ghar ki kehti hai mujhse,
Veerana tujhko viraasat mein mila hai.

NaJane kis wajah se qatatalluq hue humse,
Ab na koi rabeta hai,na koi maamla hai.

Sila khoob milgaya hai ashiqui ka tujhe “sahal”,
Phir bhi kyun dil tera ishq mein mubtela hai.
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 05:08:01 PM »
bahut khoob , sahal sahib.
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 05:18:31 PM »
sahal bhai bahut khub bahut umda lafzon se sajaya hai aapne apne qalaam ko dhero daad ke sath dheron mubarakbaad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 05:24:15 PM »
Quote from: sahal on June 09, 2013, 03:20:27 PM


                           Qata talluq..........'Sahal'

Hamare darmiyan ye jo faasla hai,
humein  naseeb se  nahin mila hai.

Karni apni hi kuch to kharab hogi,
Isliye tabse gardishon ka silsila hai.

Tanhai mere ghar ki kehti hai mujhse,
Veerana tujhko viraasat mein mila hai.

NaJane kis wajah se qatatalluq hue humse,
Ab na koi rabeta hai, na koi maamla hai.

Sila khoob milgaya hai ashiqui ka tujhe “sahal”,
Phir bhi kyun dil tera ishq mein mubtela hai.


nice,sir what i have observed that you and madam aqsh commit same mistakes.
she has agreed that she is poor in urdu but you are good in urdu then why this mistakes sir
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 05:57:57 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 09, 2013, 05:08:01 PM
bahut khoob , sahal sahib.
Thankyou ! hasan sahab
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2013, 05:58:42 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 09, 2013, 05:18:31 PM
sahal bhai bahut khub bahut umda lafzon se sajaya hai aapne apne qalaam ko dhero daad ke sath dheron mubarakbaad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thankyou ! soudagar very much
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2013, 06:00:38 PM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 09, 2013, 05:24:15 PM
nice,sir what i have observed that you and madam aqsh commit same mistakes.
she has agreed that she is poor in urdu but you are good in urdu then why this mistakes sir
shukriya marhoom sahab ...
Thankyou ! mistakes nikalne ka ,,main apne mistakes se hi seekhta hun. inshallah aainda nai hogi ghaltiyaan.
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2013, 07:25:25 PM »
Quote from: sahal on June 09, 2013, 03:20:27 PM


                           Qata talluq..........'Sahal'

Hamare darmiyan ye jo faasla hai,
humein  naseeb se  nahin mila hai.
tumhaari harkat ki wajah se main door hoon Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Karni apni hi kuch to kharab hogi,
Isliye tabse gardishon ka silsila hai.
ek dumm sahi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Tanhai mere ghar ki kehti hai mujhse,
Veerana tujhko viraasat mein mila hai.
kyon khandaan mein koi nahin hai kya tumhaare -biwi bachche Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
NaJane kis wajah se qatatalluq hue humse,
Ab na koi rabeta hai,na koi maamla hai.
ye to jab poocho ge tabhi maloom hoga Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Sila khoob milgaya hai ashiqui ka tujhe “sahal”,
Phir bhi kyun dil tera ishq mein mubtela hai.

ye to dil ki fitrat hi aisi hai to kya kar sakte ho bhalaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower



acha likha hai ji.......!
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2013, 07:46:56 PM »
bohat khoob oomda ghazal ,..........bohat c daad,.........
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2013, 09:09:10 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:25:25 PM

acha likha hai ji.......!
meri kaunsi harkat Huh?
biwi bachhe chhodh kar baki sab hai ,

Thankyou ! sheba ji Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2013, 09:10:01 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 09, 2013, 07:46:56 PM
bohat khoob oomda ghazal ,..........bohat c daad,.........
Thankyou ! laaiba ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2013, 08:01:49 PM »
bahut bahut khoob sahal ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2013, 08:04:12 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 10, 2013, 08:01:49 PM
bahut bahut khoob sahal ji.. Applause Applause Applause
Thankyou ! touhid ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2013, 12:09:55 AM »
Karni apni hi kuch to kharab hogi,
Isliye tabse gardishon ka silsila hai.

Tanhai mere ghar ki kehti hai mujhse,
Veerana tujhko viraasat mein mila hai.

ye ashaar aur maqte ka khayaal khoob raha
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2013, 12:12:36 AM »
Quote from: sahal on June 09, 2013, 03:20:27 PM


                           Qata talluq..........'Sahal'

Hamare darmiyan ye jo faasla hai,
humein  naseeb se  nahin mila hai.

Karni apni hi kuch to kharab hogi,
Isliye tabse gardishon ka silsila hai.

Tanhai mere ghar ki kehti hai mujhse,
Veerana tujhko viraasat mein mila hai.

NaJane kis wajah se qatatalluq hue humse,
Ab na koi rabeta hai,na koi maamla hai.

Sila khoob milgaya hai ashiqui ka tujhe “sahal”,
Phir bhi kyun dil tera ishq mein mubtela hai.


waaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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