raakh hi na ho jaun

by saahill on March 16, 2011, 08:43:24 AM
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thamaa kar hath mein khat mere dil apna woh le gaye ,
ek ek nishani pyar ki ccheen ke mujse le gaye

kaise ccheeno ge mujse tum yadien teri dil se ..
Kaise nikaloge tum khud ko mere dil se ,

karke dhoor khud ko mujse kahan tum chupaoge .
Jab jab loge saans tum ehsaas mera paoge ,
  
gham hai itna dil mein ke kaise gham se nikal paun main .
Itna jalta hoon raat din raakh hi na ho jaun main

ho jaun raakh bhi to pyar fir bhi kam na hoga .
Ek ek kan mein mere bas tera hi naam hoga
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 10:40:07 AM »
very nice creation

ehesaas apnasa laga
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 10:47:17 AM »
bht khubsurat peshkash saahil.......
har sher bht hi pyara hai.....
dil se likhi har baat achhci hi hoti hai...
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 10:52:09 AM »
thx ap sabka
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2011, 11:19:30 AM »
great poetry .
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2011, 02:36:50 PM »
thx apka sath dene ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2011, 05:09:39 PM »
Quote from: saahill on March 16, 2011, 08:43:24 AM
thamaa kar hath mein khat mere dil apna woh le gaye ,
ek ek nishani pyar ki ccheen ke mujse le gaye

kaise ccheeno ge mujse tum yadien teri dil se ..
Kaise nikaloge tum khud ko mere dil se ,

karke dhoor khud ko mujse kahan tum chupaoge .
Jab jab loge saans tum ehsaas mera paoge ,
 
gham hai itna dil mein ke kaise gham se nikal paun main .
Itna jalta hoon raat din raakh hi na ho jaun main

ho jaun raakh bhi to pyar fir bhi kam na hoga .
Ek ek kan mein mere bas tera hi naam hoga

Bahut Khoob ..... Saahill Ji !

Khoobsurat Ehsaas ...... dil se daad !!
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2011, 05:19:34 PM »
thx ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2011, 11:21:18 AM »
raakh ho raha hoon ek ek pal main .
Dil mein teri judai ke angarey jaltey rehtey hain
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