Raat ka Deepak (Shikha) -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: June 16, 2006, 02:33:09 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

wah kaya baat hai Shikha, RANJU and BS JI!!!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Pooja ji......Aapney padha...bus yehi kaafi hai humarey liye....[/color]


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Talat

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #16 on: June 16, 2006, 03:08:01 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Haal apney dil ka is tarah sey bata gaya koi...
Aaina zamaney ka mujhko dikha gaya koi....

Woh shaksh jo hasta tha, deta tha hosla sabko,
Khud to roya aur mujhko bhi rula gaya koi....

Kehney laga muhabbat kya hai koi seekhey humsey,
Hum ko to pehli hi nazar mey bha gaya koi....

Khol kar rakh di samney usney apni zindagi ki kitaab,
jismey har lafz aansu bhara tha padha gaya koi....

Jo poocha humney kyon jaagtey rahey saari raat tum,
bola ki humko to umr bhar key liye jaga gaya koi....

Kaisey jiya jaata hai bhala bolo to sanam key begair,
Andherey mey chupchaap sey ek deep jala gaya koi....

Behtareen Shikha ...!!!! Jaani pehchaani si kahani lagti hai....!!!!!


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ranjana

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #17 on: June 16, 2006, 03:53:04 PM »

bahut khub Shikha and Gaurav .........aap dono sach mein bahut hi khubsurat likhte hain.............nice both of u...........


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badnaam_shayar

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #18 on: June 16, 2006, 04:55:26 PM »

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bahut khub Shikha and Gaurav .........aap dono sach mein bahut hi khubsurat likhte hain.............nice both of you...........

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wah kaya baat hai Shikha, RANJU and BS JI!!!

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Very nice Ranjana.....
And Beautiful work Gaurav

Thnx to all....


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #19 on: June 16, 2006, 05:34:58 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

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Behtareen Shikha ...!!!! Jaani pehchaani si kahani lagti hai....!!!!!

Thanks Talat.....Koshish kari thi..ki jaani pehchaani si hi lagey... Sahi pehchana..... Shukriya...[/b]


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2006, 05:37:38 PM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

bahut khub Shikha and Gaurav .........aap dono sach mein bahut hi khubsurat likhte hain.............nice both of you...........

Thanks Ranjana ji..... Gaurav ji key barey mey sahi kaha hai..... main to aap logo sey hi seekh rahi hu....[/b]


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2006, 05:40:45 PM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

Thnx to all....

Gaurav ji.... aapsey sirf Thanks ki umeed nahi thi....Kuch to likha hota aapney...[/b]


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #22 on: June 17, 2006, 04:58:23 AM »

Ek deep aankhon mey jala kar raat bhar baithey,
Kuch khawab palkon par saja kar raat bhar baithey..

Woh hi lekar aaye khanjar mera dil cheerney ko,
hum jinki hifazaat mey raat bhar baithey...

Masal kar dil key phoolon ko woh khush hotey hai,
Rahon mey jinki khiyaaban ban kar raat bhar baithey....

Dehka kar chaley gaye merey ghar ko is tarah sey woh to,
Hum Deepak ban kar jinkey ghar mey raat bhar baithey....[/b]


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Rajbir

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #23 on: June 17, 2006, 09:02:28 AM »

Shikha

Bahut achcha kisi ke intezaar ka izhaar aur doosre shaks ka rookhapan tumne bayaan kiya hai ! =D>

Very good ! Keep writing ! You have to go long way :arrow:

Rajbir


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Pankhuri2

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #24 on: June 17, 2006, 09:10:20 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob shikha


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badnaam_shayar

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #25 on: June 17, 2006, 09:30:19 AM »

Mere bhi Diye ki lau aaj bhujne lagi hai......
Kehte hai sab mujhe yeh teri Maut ki ghadi hai.....

Ab Zakhm kha ke Dard se kya darna......
Zindagi ke hai do pehlu ya toh Jeena ya Marna.....

Karke Nisaar harr Khushi apni.....
Hum tere darr chale ayenge.....

Tu Saja dena Jannat ko.....
Ab hum wahi apna Milan kar payenge.....!!!!!!![/color]


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #26 on: June 17, 2006, 09:54:18 AM »

Thanks a lot Rajbir & Pankhuri.

A very nice reply Gaurav... =D> =D> [/b]


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Rajbir

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #27 on: June 17, 2006, 12:36:35 PM »

Gaurav

Shabash ! Very good ! =D>

Rajbir


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badnaam_shayar

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #28 on: June 17, 2006, 04:19:10 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Gaurav

Shabash ! Very good ! =D>

Rajbir

Shukriya Rajbir bhaiya Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Raat ka Deepak

«Reply #29 on: June 18, 2006, 08:28:10 AM »

Raat bhar jagtey rahey hum unko manatey rahey,
Dil mey ab bhi kuch baatein hai jo un-kahi baaki hai....

Khud ko gira diya humney apni hi nazar mey lekin,
Phir bhi Dil mey uskey abhi kuch berukhi baaki hai...

Rooth gaye hum khuda sey bhi ki kaisi zindagi hai yeh,
Gum hi hai ya ab bhi kuch ismey khushi baaki hai...

Kya Bhool chukey hai woh, Nazar mey hai kya ab bhi hum,
Kya ab bhi uskey dil mein wohi pehley si aashiqui baaki hai...

Humney kaha e maut aa kar ab tu hi laga ley galey mujhey,
Hus key boli woh ki nahin abhi teri zindagi baaki hai....[/b]


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