!!! Raat !!!

Soory all of you guyz for not posting for long ...
Actually i was out of town and when came back i had fallen sick ...
But now i m fit for everything ...
Here is my first after a long time ...
Hope you all would like it ...

Raat ki aaghosh mein andhero ke saath main behosh ho raha tha,
Maut ko zinda rakhne ki koshish mein tha mujhe samjhane na aaya koi,
Raat ka sannata ajeeb sa sukoon lata hai dil mein aur tanhaai bhi,
Aaj kyu na jaane roshni ke liye mere dil ko roz ki tarah jalane na aaya koi,
Raat ka intezaar isiliye karte hai ki kab neend aaye aur unke khwaab bhi,
Neend hi na aayi magar hame us qayamat ki yaad bhi dilane na aaya koi,
Raat mein aasmaan ki barahnagi, roshni ki be-kasi aur sanam ki bewafaai,
Sab kuchh saaf nazar aa raha tha hame kyu is bebas raat ko churane na aaya koi,
Raat mein andhkaar ke saath mera dard bhi badh raha tha, mere liye baadal bhi ro raha tha,
Aansuo ko rokne na sahi lekin un  aansuo mein mere sang beh jaane na aaya koi,
Raat aate hi dard unka bhi badh jaata tha jo the quboor mein to phir hamara kya hai,
Mahfoom aaj ka unka kal se tha shayad kyunki hum aaj jab soye ti uthaane na aaya koi ...

That was really nice.
hwo are you now,
take care dear...

sahi kaha veer ji.... JHL ji posts aor replies ka hamesha hi intzaar rahta hai

Welcome back..JHL ji... ab atte rahiyega...

bahoot hi acha likha hai apne, hamesha ki tarah....

Raat ki andhiyare main kahte hai sab kuch thum jaata hai
Yah dil ka dard na jaane kyun bard jaata hai

Siskata hai, bilkhata hai, tadpata hai us shkas ke liye
Jise ek pal ko bhi humara dhayan nahi atta hai…..

Bard jaati hai tanhaai, khud se khud baat karte hai
Hazaro sawal khud se, koi bhi jawab nahi atta hai

Siskati raat kahti hai roj, subah ka intzaar kar le
Her subah ki raat main, wo tadpta manjar ban jaata hai….

JHL...bohot hi achcha likha hai aapne....bohot khoob !! Nice one from you Pooja !

Thanks a lot Pooja, Manav and Talat for appreciation ...
And good one Pooji ...


Tumne hame bhula diya kuchh bura nahi kiya,
Aansu ko aankhon se juda kiya kuchh bura nahi kiya,

Jis dil ne chaha tha tumko hadd se zyada kabhi,
Usi dil ko tune chura liya kuchh bura nahi kiya,

Nazre har baatien kiya karti thi teri nazro se,
Aaj tune nazro ko jhuka diya kuchh bura nahi kiya ...
[Continue this one if possible ...]

Nice one,
ek chhoti si koshish...

Tere liye jeete the din raat hum tera naam lete the,
tune thukraya hamein gairon ke liye kuchh bura nahi kiya,

Sajde mein jhukta tha sar tere liye hi duwayein aati thi,
aaj chheen liya tune haq duwaon ka kuchh bura nahi kiya,

na karenge ab pyaar kisise, na shareek karenge zindagi mein kisiko,
tune bana liya apna naya aashiyana, kuchh bura nahi kiya...

ro dete to shayad kah paate kuch se
ruke ansuo ne kuch kahne na diya