Raatein meri aur yaadein teri

by Bhupinder Kaur on May 24, 2013, 06:16:37 PM
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Tu khwaab tu neend
Tu chand tu sitara
Tu hawa tu sada
Bin tere meri raatein kahan


Teri yaado ke taaro se
Aaj bhi roshan hai  meri raatein


Mere aasman ke taare
Taq rehe hain raahein tumhari
Ab banke chandni meri chali aao

Teri yaado ki jhankar huee
Aise laga
Tum ish raat mein
Payal pehne
Mujse milne aayee




Hae yeh kaali nagin
Muje kitna dasti hai
Ik tere yaado ki manni hai mere paas
Warna yeh zindagi
Mujse kahan dosti karti hai...




Yeh duniya kitni haseen hai
Sang tere
Tum toh jaanti ho na
Har unkahi baat meri

Ish raat se keh do Zara
Shorr na kare
Abhi teri yaado ke daaman mein hoon
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2013, 06:22:57 PM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 24, 2013, 06:16:37 PM
Tu khwaab tu neend
Tu chand tu sitara
Tu hawa tu sada
Bin tere meri raatein kahan

Teri yaado ke taaro se
Aaj bhi roshan hai  meri raatein

Mera aasman ke taare
Taq rehe hain raahein tumhari
Ab banke chandni meri chali aao

Teri yaado ki jhankar huee
Aise laga
Tum ish raat mein
Payal pehne
Mujse milne aayee

Hae yeh kaali nagin
Muje kitna dasti hai
Ik tere yaado ki manni hai mere paas
Warna yeh zindagi
Mujse kahan dosti karti hai...

Yeh duniya kitni haseen hai
Sang tere
Tum toh jaanti ho na
Har unkahi baat meri

Ish raat se keh do Zara
Shorr na kare
Abhi teri yaado ke daaman mein hoon



Bhupinder Kaur Ji,

Waaah....Mohtarma...waah
kya kahne....

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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2013, 06:35:11 PM »
JUST AWESOME.... Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2013, 06:38:44 PM »
waah waah kyaa romantic kalaam khush raho
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2013, 06:43:47 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2013, 07:04:11 PM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 24, 2013, 06:16:37 PM
Tu khwaab tu neend
Tu chand tu sitara
Tu hawa tu sada
Bin tere meri raatein kahan


Teri yaado ke taaro se
Aaj bhi roshan hai  meri raatein


Mera aasman ke taare
Taq rehe hain raahein tumhari
Ab banke chandni meri chali aao

Teri yaado ki jhankar huee
Aise laga
Tum ish raat mein
Payal pehne
Mujse milne aayee




Hae yeh kaali nagin
Muje kitna dasti hai
Ik tere yaado ki manni hai mere paas
Warna yeh zindagi
Mujse kahan dosti karti hai...




Yeh duniya kitni haseen hai
Sang tere
Tum toh jaanti ho na
Har unkahi baat meri

Ish raat se keh do Zara
Shorr na kare
Abhi teri yaado ke daaman mein hoon



bahot khoob ji  wav
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2013, 09:23:04 PM »
ekdam romantic. bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2013, 12:05:38 AM »
mera aasmaan ke taare ki jagah, mere aasmaan ke taare hoga maidam ji, waise thought interesting tha, par kahiN beech me uljha hua sa laga, shayad maiN interpret nahiN kar paya, haaN par mujhe iska khayaal ya sch jo kahiye aap, bahut pasand aaya...
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2013, 12:19:21 AM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 24, 2013, 06:16:37 PM
Tu khwaab tu neend
Tu chand tu sitara
Tu hawa tu sada
Bin tere meri raatein kahan


Teri yaado ke taaro se
Aaj bhi roshan hai  meri raatein


Mere aasman ke taare
Taq rehe hain raahein tumhari
Ab banke chandni meri chali aao

Teri yaado ki jhankar huee
Aise laga
Tum ish raat mein
Payal pehne
Mujse milne aayee




Hae yeh kaali nagin
Muje kitna dasti hai
Ik tere yaado ki manni hai mere paas
Warna yeh zindagi
Mujse kahan dosti karti hai...




Yeh duniya kitni haseen hai
Sang tere
Tum toh jaanti ho na
Har unkahi baat meri

Ish raat se keh do Zara
Shorr na kare
Abhi teri yaado ke daaman mein hoon




nice nazm,ma'am
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2013, 12:20:44 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 24, 2013, 06:38:44 PM
waah waah kyaa romantic kalaam khush raho
Thank you Sir ji...
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2013, 12:21:21 AM »
bhut khub ji
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Bhupinder Kaur
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2013, 12:21:55 AM »
Thanks to all 4ur Valuable time & Comments.
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mkv
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2013, 09:55:54 AM »
Is raat se keh do Zara Shorr na kare
Abhi teri yaado ke daaman mein hoon

Wah wah wah
kya kahne..
bahut accha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2013, 03:51:36 AM »
waah! bahut achhe aur natural andaaz me aapne poetry ki hai!
umda ehsasaat!
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2013, 02:23:57 AM »

BAHUT HI KHOOB BAHUT HI KHOOB JIII ....



pyar aisa karo ki aakhoh meh buss jaye
har taraf buss tu hi tu nazar aaye
dhadaktey siney meh buss tu hi samaye
baat kuch bhi na par naam tera hi aaye ..


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