raayegaaN saaRaa safar jaayegaa,.........

by laaiba on May 02, 2013, 06:55:33 PM
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too.t kar gul saa bikhar jaayegaa,
dar.d jub dil men uutar jaayegaa,

ik  uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,..

raakh kab se ho chukaa dil meraa
hij. rmen or bhi nikhar jaaye gaa,

zik.r uss kaa dil ke afsaane mein
ish.q ab toh liikhh kar jaaye gaa,

raa.h  mein  ruk jaayo ge toh socho
raayeigaa saa raa safar jaaye gaa,


 
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2013, 07:13:35 PM »
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awesome laaiba ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2013, 08:14:05 PM »
too.t kar gul saa bikhar jaayegaa,
dar.d jub dil men uutar jaayegaa,

ik  uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,..

Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2013, 08:35:54 PM »
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad pyaari kalaam kahi hai jee.. Usual Smile

Bade hi umdaa ashaar rahe, is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Quote from: laaiba on May 02, 2013, 06:55:33 PM

too.t kar gul saa bikhar jaayegaa,
dar.d jub dil men uutar jaayegaa,

ik  uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,..

raakh kab se ho chukaa dil meraa
hij. rmen or bhi nikhar jaaye gaa,

zik.r uss kaa dil ke afsaane mein
ish.q ab toh liikhh kar jaaye gaa,

raa.h  mein  ruk jaayo ge toh socho
raayeigaa saa raa safar jaaye gaa,


 
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 08:42:07 PM »
Superb poetry Laaiba ji ...dheron daad..
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 08:42:21 PM »
wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 08:49:48 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on May 02, 2013, 07:13:35 PM
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awesome laaiba ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko.
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa ji,.......
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2013, 09:20:05 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 09:49:36 PM »
Quote from: mkv on May 02, 2013, 08:14:05 PM
too.t kar gul saa bikhar jaayegaa,
dar.d jub dil men uutar jaayegaa,

ik  uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,..

Bahut khoob Laaiba jee

bohat bohat shukria,..........
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2013, 09:52:35 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 02, 2013, 08:35:54 PM
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

bohat bohat shukria aapkaa parwaz ji ,..........
khush rahen

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad pyaari kalaam kahi hai jee.. Usual Smile

Bade hi umdaa ashaar rahe, is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2013, 10:04:02 PM »
Quote from: asif faiz on May 02, 2013, 08:42:07 PM
Superb poetry Laaiba ji ...dheron daad..
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bohat shukria faiz ji aapkaa,............
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2013, 10:04:54 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on May 02, 2013, 08:42:21 PM
wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bohat shukria suman ji aapkaa,........
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2013, 01:35:05 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 02, 2013, 06:55:33 PM

too.t kar gul saa bikhar jaayegaa,
dar.d jub dil men uutar jaayegaa,

ik  uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin     
zik.r uss kaa dil ke afsaane mein   
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,   

raakh kab se ho chukaa dil meraa     
hij. rmen or bhi nikhar jaaye gaa,   

ish.q ab toh liikhh kar jaaye gaa,

raa.h  mein  ruk jaayo ge toh socho
raayeigaa saa raa safar jaaye gaa,


 

laaiba ji ,
            bahut achchi ghazal kahi hai, waaaaaaaaah kiyaaaaa umdaaaaaaaaa sher kahaaaaaaaaa hay aaaaaapne..................

   ik udaasi ka hai afsoos magar
   aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa,
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2013, 01:43:00 AM »
"ik uudaasee kaa fasoo hai lekin
aa.j kaa din bhi guzar jaayegaa"

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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2013, 02:05:33 AM »
Wah Kya Kehna Jawaab Nahi Aapka Sach Mein
Kitni Khoobsurati Aur Sadgi Se Lafzon Ko Piroya
Ki Bas Aankhon Se Hoke Sidha Dil Me Utar Gaye.Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Hi Khub Ji. Shuru Se Akhir Tak Sabhi Ashaar Barhiya Rahen .Aapki Is Khoobsurat Kalaam Pe Dil Ki Gehraaiyon Se Daad Kabul Farmaayen.


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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