Rafta rafta_________Baadal

by baadal102 on April 25, 2013, 04:17:09 PM
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रफ्ता रफ्ता ज़िंदगी की साँस टूट रही है,
तू आए ना आए मगर आस टूट रही है,

लब्जों मे भी आने लगी है जो ये लड़खड़ाहट,
रगो मे अब लहू की रवानी भी टूट रही है.................बादल

Rafta rafta jindgi ki saans tut rahi hai,
Tu aaye na aaye magar aas tut rahi hai,

Labjo main bhi aane lagi hai jo ye ladkhadahat,
Rago mai aab lahu ki rawani bhi tut rahi hai………………Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 04:51:04 PM »
bahut ache...keep it up..
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2013, 04:52:37 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on April 25, 2013, 04:17:09 PM
रफ्ता रफ्ता ज़िंदगी की साँस टूट रही है,
तू आए ना आए मगर आस टूट रही है,

लब्जों मे भी आने लगी है जो ये लड़खड़ाहट,
रगो मे अब लहू की रवानी भी टूट रही है.................बादल

Rafta rafta jindgi ki saans tut rahi hai,
Tu aaye na aaye magar aas tut rahi hai,

Labjo main bhi aane lagi hai jo ye ladkhadahat,
Rago mai aab lahu ki rawani bhi tut rahi hai………………Baadal


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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2013, 06:22:22 PM »
Bahut Khooob. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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