rahe hum adhoore adhoore (nam)

by poonamA on June 13, 2013, 12:57:27 PM
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Frds. this is a sindhi poetry translated in hindi

na hum aatish-e-ishq ban kae jale
na deep pyar ke uske dil me jale
dukhee hum, jale hum adhoore adhoore
hum bas rahe adhoore adhoore

dukh me bhi hamara rishta na bana
sukh me bhi man ka chain chin gaya
hanse to *khalqat ke dard ne rooka
roye to duniya ke nazro ne tooka
na kush ho hanse na ranj ho roye
roye hum hanse hum adhoore adhoore
hum bas rahe adhoore adhoore

tarikh huee na duniya tyag sake
jahan ka jhanjhat bhi na bhaga sake
umar sari ibaadat me gayee
aur baki bachi bagawat me gayee
na khuda mile aur na unki khudai
O akaash zindgi aise he gayee
bhatakte rahe dundh me adhoore
hum bas rahe adhoore adhoore



*khalqat - world
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2013, 01:33:51 PM »
Qayamat qez nazm hai ,, eak eak lafz dard ki chashni me lothpoth ,, duniya jahan dard simeta hai aapne apni is nazm me .....Eak shair wa shayara ki khoobi yahi hoti hai ke wo aap beeti ko jag beeti banane ka hunar jaante hai'n...aur apko bhi is fun me kamal haasil hai yehi kahe rahi hai aapki ye nazm ...zindabad ..
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2013, 01:45:15 PM »
qadeerjee shukriya..yeh poetry sindhi me likhi gayee thi..maine sirif kuch change kar translate kiya hai
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 13, 2013, 01:33:51 PM
Qayamat qez nazm hai ,, eak eak lafz dard ki chashni me lothpoth ,, duniya jahan dard simeta hai aapne apni is nazm me .....Eak shair wa shayara ki khoobi yahi hoti hai ke wo aap beeti ko jag beeti banane ka hunar jaante hai'n...aur apko bhi is fun me kamal haasil hai yehi kahe rahi hai aapki ye nazm ...zindabad ..
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2013, 02:11:42 PM »
                                                   
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2013, 02:34:58 PM »
 Thankyou !
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2013, 02:41:26 PM »
Wah,Wah,Wah Poonamji,
Bahut umdaa ahsaason se bhari hai aapki poem.Really Nice.
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2013, 02:44:51 PM »
waah waah waah poonam ji waaah
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2013, 02:57:19 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 13, 2013, 02:41:26 PM
Wah,Wah,Wah Poonamji,
Bahut umdaa ahsaason se bhari hai aapki poem.Really Nice.
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2013, 02:58:04 PM »
thx saahill
Quote from: saahill on June 13, 2013, 02:44:51 PM
waah waah waah poonam ji waaah
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2013, 04:42:23 PM »
bahut khoob poonamji.achhi peshkash hai.
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2013, 05:18:05 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2013, 07:05:14 PM »
WaaH Bahut Khoob  aur dil ko choo ge yeh ehsaas jo hai adhoore adhoore...
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2013, 01:42:24 PM »
shukriya siddhiquijee
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 13, 2013, 04:42:23 PM
bahut khoob poonamji.achhi peshkash hai.
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2013, 01:43:26 PM »
thx nand
Quote from: nandbahu on June 13, 2013, 05:18:05 PM
very nice
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2013, 01:44:31 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 13, 2013, 07:05:14 PM
WaaH Bahut Khoob  aur dil ko choo ge yeh ehsaas jo hai adhoore adhoore...
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