rail ki do patriyan.... manju

by manjum on June 15, 2011, 08:12:06 AM
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Main/tum
rail ki do patriyan,
chalti hain sath sath
rahti hain sath sath
hamesha/lagatar
ek dusre ke lie
sharik-e-safar/sharik-e-zindgi bankar.

Bantti  hain sukh-dukh
sahti hain varsha-dhoop
fir bhi chalti rahti hain,
sath sath hamesha.

parantu,
paas bahut pass rahkar bhi
kabhi/kahin/kisi mod par
nahin mil patin dono.
dono ke bich
ek doori/ekfasla
bana rahta hai hamesha
har waqt/lagatar,
jise koi kabhi bhi nai mita pata....

sukh-dukh ki guzarti railen
kabhi jab tan-mann ko
kar gain lahuluhan
tab ek patri
dekh kar dusri patri ko
sirf aansu hi baha saki
zakhmon par
marham na rakh saki...

kaisa hai ye sath
ye milan/ye nikatta
Mani/tum
rail ki do patriyan....

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2011, 08:23:55 AM »
Quote from: manjum on June 15, 2011, 08:12:06 AM

Main/tum
rail ki do patriyan,
chalti hain sath sath
rahti hain sath sath
hamesha/lagatar
ek dusre ke lie
sharik-e-safar/sharik-e-zindgi bankar.
Bantti  hain sukh-dukh
sahti hain varsha-dhoop
fir bhi chalti rahti hain,
sath sath hamesha.
 parantu,
paas bahut pass rahkar bhi
kabhi/kahin/kisi mod par
nahin mil patin dono.
dono ke bich
ek doori/ekfasla
bana rahta hai hamesha
har waqt/lagatar,
jise koi kabhi bhi nai mita pata....
sukh-dukh ki guzarti railen
kabhi jab tan-mann ko
kar gain lahuluhan
tab ek patri
dekh kar dusri patri ko
sirf aansu hi baha saki
zakhmon par
marham na rakh saki...
kaisa hai ye sath
ye milan/ye nikatta
Mani/tum
rail ki do patriyan....

manju "mann"




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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2011, 08:24:24 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya adilji... ye rachna un main se hai jo hamare dil ke bahur karib hain.... bahut bahut shukriya....

sath rahiega...........
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2011, 08:26:50 AM »
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Excellent Flow Of Emotions..

Bahut bahut Khooob Anju Ji, Aapne Kitni Asaani Se rail Ki To Patriyon Se Do bando Ki Zindagi Ko Joda Hai..Bahut Ache..
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2011, 08:33:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... acha laga ki ye koshish aapko pasand aayi...

sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2011, 10:06:11 AM »
bahut khub ji...
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2011, 10:22:22 AM »
Manju jee,
Kya baat hai..Bahaut khoob likha hai apne..
Rail ki do patriyan aur do insaanon ki zindagi..
Kya baat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2011, 10:33:43 AM »

manjum ji

Bahut khoob..really touching..
Achchhee nazm kahee hai...

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2011, 01:18:34 PM »
very nice imagination di...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2011, 03:24:56 PM »
excellent
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2011, 03:30:28 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya.... niralaji....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2011, 03:34:29 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rahimji...
rahim ji jab sochne baithte hain to har chij zindgi ki tarah hi lagti hai... bahut jaldi hi ek kavita post karenge.. jis main zindgi ko sadak kaha hai... dekhiyega...

sath rahie...
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2011, 03:36:08 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya satishji..... shukriya

sath rahie....
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2011, 03:39:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya priya..... thanks...

sath rahna...
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2011, 03:40:56 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sureshji....

sath rahiega....
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