rait-mahal

by ranjana on May 09, 2006, 08:31:40 AM
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ranjana
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dur tak faila yeh registaan sa jeevan.......
aur samane keval viraane se saye fale jate hain...

khushi, pyar aur apni ankhee baato.n ke nishaan,
sukhee ret per kadmo ke nishaan ki tarah mit jate hain.........

de jate hain kuch log apni yaade aise,
jo hathali par chipki ret si chubhan de jate hain.........

meri annkho ke kuch adhure khawaab,
sirf ek mirgtrishna si jhalak de jate hain..........

mere sapne kyu zindgee ki haqiqat mein.........
bas ret mahal ban kar dheh jate hain..................


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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2006, 08:54:33 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
dur tak faila yeh registaan sa jeevan.......
aur samane keval viraane se saye fale jate hain...

khushi, pyar aur apni ankhee baato.n ke nishaan,
sukhee ret per kadmo ke nishaan ki tarah mit jate hain.........

de jate hain kuch log apni yaade aise,
jo hathali par chipki ret si chubhan de jate hain.........

meri annkho ke kuch adhure khawaab,
sirf ek mirgtrishna si jhalak de jate hain..........

mere sapne kyu zindgee ki haqiqat mein.........
bas ret mahal ban kar dheh jate hain..................


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good Ranju. filled wid pain of seperation from loved one.
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2006, 08:58:35 AM »
rait par log sapno ke mahal sajate hai
hum apni mazar banae chale.....

aaya jo ek halka sa jhonka
saari raat kafan oodhe rait sambhalte rahe
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2006, 10:08:53 AM »
khak ho gaye mere mehal is registaan me ,.....
k aab sahara rait ka hai ussi ka mai aab mehal banaunga ....
aab kam se kam dard to na hoga mera mehal tootne ka mujhko ....
k aab us rait k mehal me kabhi na kisi ki murat sajayunga......
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2006, 02:15:46 PM »
shukriya vikas and tushar......zindge haqiqat mein bhi sirf ek rait hai......jitna isko jeene ke liye haath mein pakada hai , yah utni haath se fisali hai................
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vikas2210
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2006, 06:35:38 AM »
Shukriya Ranju and nice one Tushar

Rait par hum baith kar aap beeti likhne lage
aai to ek lehar hum hi mit gaye......
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2006, 07:14:03 AM »
meri zindgi bhi akali hai mrusthal ki tarah ,
hame ek dusre se ko paar karna hai,
apni apni aag mein jalte hue is se gujarna hai...........
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2006, 08:29:24 AM »
Bohat khoob Ranjana, Vikas & Tushar...
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vikas2210
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2006, 08:56:18 AM »
Aryaan Shukriya..

kuch aap bhi likhte to accha lagta.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2006, 02:56:37 PM »
shkriyaa ARYAAN.....................
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2006, 02:52:23 AM »
Quote from: "majid"
SHARAKTI RET KE TAT PAR APNA GHAR BANAYA KYUN?

DIYA IN AANDHIYO KI RAAH ME TUNE JALAYA KYUN?

TARIKE AUR BHI THE YAHAN MASHOOR HONE KE
KIYA NILAAM GAIRAT KO. KHUD KO HI MITAYA KYUN?

RAHE GAR JAHAN MAIN THODI UDAASI ,KAAM AATI
ZARA SA UBNE PAR MAIKADE MAIN USKO LAYA KYUN?

GULO KE BOZ SE DALI KOI TUTI KAHIN DEKHO
BAHUT PACHHTA RAHA HOON MAIN TUJHE DIL MAIN BASAYA KYUN?

JAHAN HAR EK RISHTE NE TUJHE AANSHU PILAYE
BATA FIR US GALI MAIN ,,MAJID,,TU LAUT AAYA KYUN?



bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne a Majid ..........shukriya
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2006, 01:17:57 PM »
bahut achcha likhati ho ranju
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2006, 01:32:17 PM »
k aab na koi gila us zalim se hum karenge .....
uske liye to bus hum aab dua hi karenge......
na chahe wo kabhi hume to bhi gum na hoga ...
magar sach kehte hai uske liye pyar kam na hoga....
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manu1979
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hi
«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2006, 02:28:28 PM »
ranju ji aap ki kavitaa pahle bhi padhi hai ,aaj fir se padhi, bahut dil se likhti ho aap ,sach mai kuchh khayaalat tumaaree kavitaa ke akshar dil ko chhoo jaate hai
aise hi likhti raho
regards
manu
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2006, 02:06:35 AM »
shukriya Manu ji................. Usual Smile
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