RaNg -E- Hinnai... ParwaaZ

by ParwaaZ on March 05, 2012, 11:47:11 AM
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Muddat se kalam meiN koi zor nahi hai...JazboN meiN hulchal nahi dil meiN shor nahi hai... Haal e dil bayaaN karuN to kaise karuN, kabhi lafz nahi to kabhi kahta huN tu kamzor nahi hai...

Aik puraani kalaam aap sabki nazar... Usual Smile





Na chudi hai jin hathoN me na mehandi rachai
Unse puchiye kya hoti hai yeh ranG -E- Hinnai

Umar kat jati hai jinki muflisi ki dal dal meiN
Gareeb se puchiye kaise hoti hai beti ki sagai

Dahej ke bojh tale khud ko nilam kar dete haiN
Unse puchiye kaisi sunai deti hai unhe shehnai

Uthte nahi kadam lakht e jigar ki rukhsati par
Unse puchiye kya dard de jati hai beti ki bidai

Jo reh lete hai taumar judaa kisi ke jite huye
Unse puchiye aap kya hoti hai yeh dard e judai
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2012, 11:51:10 AM »
Parwaaz ji computer band karne hee jaarahaa thaa aapke kalaam par nazar pad gayee padh kar tabiyat khush hogayee.bahut bahut daad qubool keeje
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2012, 11:51:49 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 05, 2012, 11:47:11 AM

Muddat se kalam meiN koi zor nahi hai...JazboN meiN hulchal nahi dil meiN shor nahi hai... Haal e dil bayaaN karuN to kaise karuN, kabhi lafz nahi to kabhi kahta huN tu kamzor nahi hai...

Aik puraani kalaam aap sabki nazar... Usual Smile





Na chudi hai jin hathoN me na mehandi rachai
Unse puchiye kya hoti hai yeh ranG -E- Hinnai

Umar kat jati hai jinki muflisi ki dal dal meiN
Gareeb se puchiye kaise hoti hai beti ki sagai

Dahej ke bojh tale khud ko nilam kar dete haiN
Unse puchiye kaisi sunai deti hai unhe shehnai

Uthte nahi kadam lakht e jigar ki rukhsati par
Unse puchiye kya dard de jati hai beti ki bidai

Jo reh lete hai taumar judaa kisi ke jite huye
Unse puchiye aap kya hoti hai yeh dard e judai


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 11:54:29 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 05, 2012, 11:47:11 AM

Muddat se kalam meiN koi zor nahi hai...JazboN meiN hulchal nahi dil meiN shor nahi hai... Haal e dil bayaaN karuN to kaise karuN, kabhi lafz nahi to kabhi kahta huN tu kamzor nahi hai...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aik puraani kalaam aap sabki nazar... Usual Smile





Na chudi hai jin hathoN me na mehandi rachai
Unse puchiye kya hoti hai yeh ranG -E- Hinnai  Applause Applause Applause

Umar kat jati hai jinki muflisi ki dal dal meiN
Gareeb se puchiye kaise hoti hai beti ki sagai  Applause Applause Applause

Dahej ke bojh tale khud ko nilam kar dete haiN
Unse puchiye kaisi sunai deti hai unhe shehnai   Applause Applause Applause

Uthte nahi kadam lakht e jigar ki rukhsati par
Unse puchiye kya dard de jati hai beti ki bidai   Applause Applause Applause

Jo reh lete hai taumar judaa kisi ke jite huye
Unse puchiye aap kya hoti hai yeh dard e judai  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bahut umda peshkash parwaaz bhai
maja aa gaya.
maqta kamaal ka laga mujhe..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dili daad kubool farmaayen..
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2012, 12:28:41 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on March 05, 2012, 11:51:10 AM
Parwaaz ji computer band karne hee jaarahaa thaa aapke kalaam par nazar pad gayee padh kar tabiyat khush hogayee.bahut bahut daad qubool keeje



Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Nazar nawaazi ke liye aapke behad shukraguzaar haiN...
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Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2012, 12:30:17 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on March 05, 2012, 11:51:49 AM
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab...  aap itne active member
haiN ke kia kaheN phir aise hiden mode par kyuN rahte
haiN janab....  Winking


Wel shaad O aabaad rahiye... aate rahiye..
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2012, 12:31:46 PM »
Quote from: mkv on March 05, 2012, 11:54:29 AM
Bahut umda peshkash parwaaz bhai
maja aa gaya.
maqta kamaal ka laga mujhe..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dili daad kubool farmaayen..

MKV Jee Aadaab!


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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2012, 12:32:38 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 05, 2012, 11:47:11 AM

Muddat se kalam meiN koi zor nahi hai...JazboN meiN hulchal nahi dil meiN shor nahi hai... Haal e dil bayaaN karuN to kaise karuN, kabhi lafz nahi to kabhi kahta huN tu kamzor nahi hai...

Aik puraani kalaam aap sabki nazar... Usual Smile





Na chudi hai jin hathoN me na mehandi rachai
Unse puchiye kya hoti hai yeh ranG -E- Hinnai

Umar kat jati hai jinki muflisi ki dal dal meiN
Gareeb se puchiye kaise hoti hai beti ki sagai

Dahej ke bojh tale khud ko nilam kar dete haiN
Unse puchiye kaisi sunai deti hai unhe shehnai

Uthte nahi kadam lakht e jigar ki rukhsati par
Unse puchiye kya dard de jati hai beti ki bidai

Jo reh lete hai taumar judaa kisi ke jite huye
Unse puchiye aap kya hoti hai yeh dard e judai



Waah Waah waah!!!!

Kya kehne Parwaaz Ji..Bahut bahut Khooob

Har Ek A'shaar lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2012, 05:46:16 PM »

Janaab ParwaaZ Sahab
                     Aadaab,

Bahut khoob kaha hai...waah waah
har she'r men dard nihaaN hai....
dil tak utar gaye chand ashaar...

Dili mubaarakbaad aur dheron shubhkaamnaayen.

Ek tarhi nashishat ke liye khaaksaar ki tajmeem ka
khayaal bhi kuchh isee tarah tha, aapki nazr kar raha hoon...

 aai sahibe zar, zar se koyee dolee utha de
"bandhega faqat jaama-e-ahraam kahaan tak"

                                ---'Raqeeb'

DuaoN men yaad rakhiye...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

 
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2012, 06:53:56 PM »
waah bro--
kya behne aapki kavish ke.
bht tarsa tarsa ke post krte hain aap--
apni purani kalaamon ko issi tarah aazaad krte rahie bro--

iss behad umda post pr dili daad aur mubarakbad kubul karen kyunki hume sabhi aashaar bht hi asardaar aur ehsaason se bhrpoor nazar aaye.
khus rahie
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2012, 06:58:11 PM »
waa waa bhot khub Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2012, 07:08:40 PM »
parwaaz ji aadaab..

bahut bahut bahut khooob...

beshumar daad ish nazm par kubul kare..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar raha hai..

wah wah.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahe..
khush rahe.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


parwaaz ji aadaab..

bahut bahut bahut khooob...

beshumar daad ish nazm par kubul kare..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar raha hai..

wah wah.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahe..
khush rahe.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


parwaaz ji aadaab..

bahut bahut bahut khooob...

beshumar daad ish nazm par kubul kare..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar raha hai..

wah wah.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahe..
khush rahe.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


parwaaz ji aadaab..

bahut bahut bahut khooob...

beshumar daad ish nazm par kubul kare..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar raha hai..

wah wah.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahe..
khush rahe.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


MAI ISH NAZM KI JITNI TAREEF KAROON KAM HAI PARWAAZ SAHAB.. BAHUT KHOOB .. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2012, 08:09:28 PM »
bahut badiya parwaaz sahab!!
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2012, 03:23:45 AM »
waaah waaaah parwaazji kya khub likha hai...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2012, 10:50:31 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 05, 2012, 11:47:11 AM

Muddat se kalam meiN koi zor nahi hai...JazboN meiN hulchal nahi dil meiN shor nahi hai... Haal e dil bayaaN karuN to kaise karuN, kabhi lafz nahi to kabhi kahta huN tu kamzor nahi hai...

Aik puraani kalaam aap sabki nazar... Usual Smile





Na chudi hai jin hathoN me na mehandi rachai
Unse puchiye kya hoti hai yeh ranG -E- Hinnai

Umar kat jati hai jinki muflisi ki dal dal meiN
Gareeb se puchiye kaise hoti hai beti ki sagai

Dahej ke bojh tale khud ko nilam kar dete haiN
Unse puchiye kaisi sunai deti hai unhe shehnai

Uthte nahi kadam lakht e jigar ki rukhsati par
Unse puchiye kya dard de jati hai beti ki bidai

Jo reh lete hai taumar judaa kisi ke jite huye
Unse puchiye aap kya hoti hai yeh dard e judai



bahut khoob ...................!

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