Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....:Shayri-E-Dard

manjum

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Ek jamane ke baad tum meri gali main aaye ho.
Tum aaj ek purana wada nibhane ke lie aaye ho.

Chalo ye achchha hai ke tumko yad aaye meri,
Kya hua jo dil tod hi jane ke lie aaye ho.

Faisla aane ka karne main sadiyan guzar din tumne,
Rooh ke jishm se jane ke baad aaye ho.

Tum meri duniyan main aakar bhi mere sath nahin,
Kyonki tum sath raqeebon ko leke aaye ho.

Agar bharam hai ye o ye kitna khubsurat hai,
Bharam ke sath sukun bhi to banke aaye ho.

manjum "mann"


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Anshumali

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 05:53:56 AM »

Quote from: manjum on February 02, 2011, 05:43:38 AM

Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas likhe hai aapne ... manjum Ji !

acchi soch nazar aai sabhi ashaar ke khayaaloN me ... dil se daad !


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 05:56:22 AM »

bahut bahut shukriyas anshuji...

khush rahen....

daad dete rahen...


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 06:05:55 AM »

Nice.


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Matrix Guy

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 06:10:18 AM »

ufffffffffffff.........

manju ji ise kya kahu me ?
.........shikayat....pyar......ada.....ya ruswayi......... ?

jo bhi lkiha he bas esa likha he ki dil me sama gaya......one of ur best post manju ji.........congrats

feew lines from my side

aaj wo fir mohaabat sikhane aye he
shayad wo hume haqiqat dikhane aye he

ek arsa hua tha unko dekhe
shayad wo meri hasrat mitane aye he

chah kar bhi na bhul paye wo humko
shayad apne hi dil ki gaflat mitane aye he

jo he unka maksad wo tu hi jane
humse dur rahkar bhi wo ab talak khush he
shayad apne ye hi taqat dikhane aye he


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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 06:28:40 AM »

bahut hi umda ehsaas Manju.
bahut khub dard ka ehsaas aur shabd dono kamaal hain.
hats off


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 06:37:49 AM »

bahut khoob mann ji..

dher saari daad~


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nirala

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 07:08:17 AM »

wah manju kya baat--
fir ek dard bhara ehsaas dila dia na.
lekin kya ehsaas jagaya.
really good.
Matrix ji aapka reply bhi mast hai--poem ko aur aage badha dia aapne Good:)
""
kar lo shikayen mitalo dil ki hasraten
tere gile sikwo ko duur karne aya hu

mumkeen nahi tha zism ke rahte chehra dikhana
aaj zism ko mitakar apni ruuh ke saath aya hun

hazar waade kiye the mene shayd jinda rahke
dekho sanam aaj ussi zism ko chhod ruuh se saath nibhane aya hu
"
thanx
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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 01:04:14 PM »

bht khoob manjumm ji.....
& nice reply mg....


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 01:06:58 PM »

Bahut khoob manju mann ji n nice reply utkarsh ji...


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 07:30:28 AM »

bahut ahut shukriya sajidji....

duayen dete rahen...


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 07:38:36 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya matrixji....

yun hi sath dete rahen...

aapka reply bhi bahut khub hai.... badiya hai...

sath rahie khush rahie...


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 07:42:01 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya KBji....

yun hi daad aur duaye dete rahen..... ham bahut shukragujar hain aapke... ke aapko hamara likha pasand aaye....

thanksji...


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 07:43:12 AM »

bahur bahur shukriya Abhiji...

duayen aur daad dete rahie....

khush rahie...


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manjum

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Re: Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 07:45:26 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya manzilji....

aapne asand kiya.... yun hi padte rahiye... aur apne vichar batate rahie...

sath rahen.... khush rahen


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