Raqibon ko leke aaye ho....

by manjum on February 02, 2011, 05:43:38 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 03, 2011, 07:49:18 AM »
wah niralaji....

pasand karne ke lie shukriya...

yun hi sath rahie...

kya baat kahi hai aapne.... shayad har dard bhari ghazal yahi reply chahti hai.... ya shayad har shikayat ka reply esa ho jae to shikayte bhi mitna lagen....

bahut khub

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«Reply #16 on: February 03, 2011, 07:50:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya.. BBlji....

yun hi duaye aur daad dete rahen housla bana rahta hai....

khush rahiye..
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«Reply #17 on: February 03, 2011, 07:56:39 AM »
sukriya Manju.
wo kya hai na ---
kuch nahi hai hhehehe Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: February 03, 2011, 08:40:46 AM »
Ek jamane ke baad tum meri gali main aaye ho.
Tum aaj ek purana wada nibhane ke lie aaye ho.

Chalo ye achchha hai ke tumko yad aaye meri,
Kya hua jo dil tod hi jane ke lie aaye ho.

Faisla aane ka karne main sadiyan guzar din tumne,
Rooh ke jishm se jane ke baad aaye ho.

Tum meri duniyan main aakar bhi mere sath nahin,
Kyonki tum sath raqeebon ko leke aaye ho.

Agar bharam hai ye o ye kitna khubsurat hai,
Bharam ke sath sukun bhi to banke aaye ho.

manjum "mann"

nice..!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: February 03, 2011, 08:52:17 AM »
shukriya shebaji....

khush rahie
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«Reply #20 on: February 03, 2011, 08:53:45 AM »
bahoot khoob manjum ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2011, 08:58:09 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya bekararji....

yun hi sath rahie....

duaye aur daad dete rahiye....
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«Reply #22 on: February 05, 2011, 02:24:50 PM »
Bahut Khub Manjum JI And Nice Reply Uttkarsh JI
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«Reply #23 on: February 07, 2011, 12:05:58 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya rishiji....

daad dete rahen...
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