rasta bhi bana rahe hain

by pritam tripathi on December 02, 2012, 02:31:33 AM
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jo be-imaan apna desh jala rahe hain
hum badnaseeb unko mala chada rahe hain
woh desh ke har kone aafat macha rahe hain
hum be jubaan sirf aanshu baha rahe hain
e aasmani taqat fatti kyun nahi tu un par
jo gulishtaan se mera aashiyana baha rahe hain

woh samaaj me kuritiyon ki aag laga rahe hain
hum ibtila me saare lahu baha rahe hain
woh bastiyaan saari pal me jala rahe hain
hum ajnabee ke mafiq taali baja rahe hain
e aawaam meri uthti nahi kyun hai tu
hum tarjumaan hain dekho tumko jaga rahe hain

jis mitti ko woh duniya me luta rahe hain
hai zameen woh meri hum jisko bacha rahe hain
woh nirdayi zaalim hume za'if bana rahe hain
sadiyon se hum jinse ladte hi ja rahe hain
koi farista to bhej bacha de humko tu dekh
hum kosis bhi kar rahe hain rasta bhi bana rahe hain

 
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2012, 02:39:11 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2012, 02:40:29 AM »
bahut khoob
thanks sir
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2012, 02:47:39 AM »
superb saadhuwaa saadhuwaad
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2012, 02:49:56 AM »

superb saadhuwaa saadhuwaad
thanks sir ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2012, 03:25:17 AM »
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very very nice
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2012, 03:33:03 AM »
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aqsh ji shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2012, 04:29:16 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2012, 04:37:27 AM »
very gud
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2012, 07:20:12 AM »
bahut  khoob , pritam ji. nice  message , nice call.
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2012, 08:18:48 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
nandbandhu ji dhanyawad
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2012, 08:19:52 AM »
aarish ji thanks
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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2012, 08:21:26 AM »
bahut  khoob , pritam ji. nice  message , nice call.
siddiqui sir thanks
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2012, 01:07:01 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2012, 07:44:14 PM »
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hriday ji shukriya
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