~~"REHAM KAR E ZINDAGI"~~

by k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM
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Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2009, 09:02:12 AM »
Bohat bohat khoob Shally... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujse mohabbat na sahi mera aitbaar to kar
GHAYEL se kar nafrat yaqeeqan, par khud se pyaar to kar

-SG-
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2009, 09:08:11 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 03, 2009, 09:02:12 AM
Bohat bohat khoob Shally... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujse mohabbat na sahi mera aitbaar to kar
GHAYEL se kar nafrat yaqeeqan, par khud se pyaar to kar

-SG-

SHUKRIYA SAJID JI,

Tera to kya iss dil ne har kisi ka aitbaar kiya tha,
Haan aaj rehti ho bahut nafrat me, par kabhi maine bhi
khud se pyaar kiya tha,

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2009, 09:17:36 AM »
BOhat Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Tumne Shally,.

Nice One,.
And Good Lines Sajid Bhai.
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2009, 09:20:35 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


Really...yaar bahot hi dard se pur-qaif Likha hai.
Bahot hi badhiya andaz aur Lafz bi saaf saaf..
Behtarin
Allah se Dua hai wo Meri dost shally ko harr dunyavi pech o khum se bachaaye..
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2009, 11:02:12 AM »
bohut khoob shally ...such a wonderful creation

bohut acha likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi


milte hain wo aur fir bichad jaate hain
saath bitaye lamhe har lamha tadpaate hain
kabhi khud se to kabhi khuda se karu shikayte
ki kyu dil mei basne wale aksar juda ho jaate hain
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2009, 11:03:46 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on March 03, 2009, 11:02:12 AM
bohut khoob shally ...such a wonderful creation

bohut acha likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi


milte hain wo aur fir bichad jaate hain
saath bitaye lamhe har lamha tadpaate hain
kabhi khud se to kabhi khuda se karu shikayte
ki kyu dil mei basne wale aksar juda ho jaate hain

Nice One Kaushik Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2009, 11:05:33 AM »
Very nice Shally sis
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2009, 11:06:52 AM »
NIce one sajid ji n Bhawna ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2009, 11:22:33 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


Ek baar phir se dard bhari ye shayari dil ke andar utar gayi....Bohot Khoob Shally
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2009, 06:23:11 PM »
Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne Shally jee{especially dusra shaer bahaut khoob tha...dil ko chu gaya}, Ghayel Saheb aur Bhavna jee... Applause Applause

dil main base logon ko juda hone kyun dete ho?
pyaar se bhare dilon ko bewaffa hone kyun dete ho?
bite lamhein tadpaenge hi har pal isiliye kehta hai Rahim,
aise dard bhare lamhon ko yaad karte kyun ho?
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2009, 12:17:52 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


waah kya baat hai..k.shael jee......
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2009, 05:13:53 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2009, 07:51:59 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


bahut khoob shally dear.... Applause  Applause touched my heart...keep smiling Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2009, 08:07:12 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 03, 2009, 08:53:16 AM

Reham kar e zindagi ki aab tere diye gamm ham se uthaye nahi jaate,
Ye jhoothe aur matlabi rishte hamse aur nibhaye nahi jaate,

Bahut jee liya iss zillat bhari zindagi ko bass kar aab kar de hame wida,
Ye tanha, viraan aur gut.te hue pal hamse aur bitaaye nahi jaate,

Dhoke hi mile har insaan ki taraf se aur kuch milne ki umeed bhi na hai,
Sabki pehchaani fitrat aab aur chehre pehchaane nahi jaate,

Aansoo hi mile har khushi ke badle me ye len-den bahut mehnge lage,
Aab aur ye karz mujhse chukaye nahi jaate, Ye rishte mujhse aur nibhaye
Nahi jaate…

Shally.


bahut dard meh likha hai aap ney yeh poem SHALLY .. dil koh choo gayi


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