Rishta bhi toot gaya

by Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM
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Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2008, 12:34:51 PM »
bahut hi dukh bara likha hain
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2008, 12:35:27 PM »
Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

Waah Didi Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Nice One,.
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2008, 12:38:30 PM »
Karaar Aa Jaata Tha, Jiske Aane Se,.
Wo Ab Aata Bhi Nahi, Laakh Bulaane Se,.

Khushi Milti Thi, Jiska Haath Thaam Te Hi,.
Wo Haath, Mere Haath Se Choot Gaya,.

Jo Rooh Ka Rishta Kehte The, Log Hamaare Rishte Ko,.
Jism Ne Saath Chorda, Wo Rishta Bhi Toot Gaya,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2008, 12:59:08 PM »
Karaar Aa Jaata Tha, Jiske Aane Se,.
Wo Ab Aata Bhi Nahi, Laakh Bulaane Se,.

Khushi Milti Thi, Jiska Haath Thaam Te Hi,.
Wo Haath, Mere Haath Se Choot Gaya,.

Jo Rooh Ka Rishta Kehte The, Log Hamaare Rishte Ko,.
Jism Ne Saath Chorda, Wo Rishta Bhi Toot Gaya,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-
Bahut Khoob Jaanasheen Bhai
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2008, 04:02:01 PM »
bahut hi dukh bara likha hain
bahut khoob


dukhi hokar he likha tha saloni ji... shukaria apko acha laga
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2008, 04:04:01 PM »
Waah Didi Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Nice One,.

Karaar Aa Jaata Tha, Jiske Aane Se,.
Wo Ab Aata Bhi Nahi, Laakh Bulaane Se,.

Khushi Milti Thi, Jiska Haath Thaam Te Hi,.
Wo Haath, Mere Haath Se Choot Gaya,.

Jo Rooh Ka Rishta Kehte The, Log Hamaare Rishte Ko,.
Jism Ne Saath Chorda, Wo Rishta Bhi Toot Gaya,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-


shukaria lil bro!! bahoot sahi likha hai apne...
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SUMBUL QAISER
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2008, 04:36:14 PM »
 WELLDONE VERY VERY GOOD JOB NICE POETRY I LIKE IT
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2008, 05:15:32 PM »
thanks Sumbul
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2008, 07:12:23 PM »
Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko


TUMHAREY DIL KA HAAL SAMAJ SAKTEY HAI
GUM KOH TUMHAREY HUM PADD SAKTEY HAI
SAMAJ NA LENA KHUDD KOH TUM AKELA
HAMEY APNEY GUM MEH SHAMIL KAR SAKTEY HAI


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JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYE
JOH KHAYI THI KASMEH AAJ TOOT GAYE
SAAT PHEROH KA YEHI SAPNA THA
BANEY THEY JOH APNEY AAJ CHOOT GAYE
JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYE

GAM-EH-DIL TU BADA NADAAN RAHA
HAR PAL HAR LAMHA TU UNHI KA RAHA
BANN NA PAYA TERA KOI
TU KU ITNA UNPEH MEHARBAAN RAHA
BANEY THEY JOH APNEY AAJ CHOOT GAYE
JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2008, 08:05:30 PM »
Really wonderful Jas Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2008, 12:44:21 AM »
Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko


Wah Very Nice, Pooja Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2008, 12:46:03 AM »
Karaar Aa Jaata Tha, Jiske Aane Se,.
Wo Ab Aata Bhi Nahi, Laakh Bulaane Se,.

Khushi Milti Thi, Jiska Haath Thaam Te Hi,.
Wo Haath, Mere Haath Se Choot Gaya,.

Jo Rooh Ka Rishta Kehte The, Log Hamaare Rishte Ko,.
Jism Ne Saath Chorda, Wo Rishta Bhi Toot Gaya,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-

Wah wah Jaanasheen Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2008, 12:48:25 AM »

TUMHAREY DIL KA HAAL SAMAJ SAKTEY HAI
GUM KOH TUMHAREY HUM PADD SAKTEY HAI
SAMAJ NA LENA KHUDD KOH TUM AKELA
HAMEY APNEY GUM MEH SHAMIL KAR SAKTEY HAI


........................


JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYE
JOH KHAYI THI KASMEH AAJ TOOT GAYE
SAAT PHEROH KA YEHI SAPNA THA
BANEY THEY JOH APNEY AAJ CHOOT GAYE
JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYE

GAM-EH-DIL TU BADA NADAAN RAHA
HAR PAL HAR LAMHA TU UNHI KA RAHA
BANN NA PAYA TERA KOI
TU KU ITNA UNPEH MEHARBAAN RAHA
BANEY THEY JOH APNEY AAJ CHOOT GAYE
JANMOH KEY RISHTEY AAJ TOOT GAYA


JASBIR SINGH



Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2008, 10:25:00 AM »
Really wonderful Jas Ji

Thanks Rajesh

par yeh haal hum mehsoos kar saktey hai
kisi key dil ha haal hum sun saktey hai


Jasbir Singh
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