Rishta bhi toot gaya

by Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM
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«Reply #105 on: January 08, 2009, 01:26:35 AM »
Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko


lo toot gaya hai har rishta
mera payar aaj nakaam hua

seencha tha jisse khoon de kar
woh har paoda (plant) barbaad hua

kaise seh lein ab hum apni saansein
jinka hashar yeh viraan hua

bojh sa hai kuch mere maan pe "tera"
dekho! kaise yeh "deewana" karzan hua !!!
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«Reply #106 on: January 09, 2009, 11:54:56 AM »
Shukriya Anaam Bhai,.
And Nice One,.
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«Reply #107 on: January 09, 2009, 09:11:42 PM »
nice lines Anaam ji
Good one Arjun ji...

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«Reply #108 on: January 18, 2009, 03:00:22 PM »
Ek Rishta Banaaya Tha Usne, Dushmani Ka Mujhse "Azeem,.
Ab Jab Nigaahein Bhi Nahi Mili Unse, Yun Lagaa Ye Rishta Bhi Toot Gaya,.

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #109 on: January 18, 2009, 09:22:06 PM »
nice lines lil bro
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«Reply #110 on: January 18, 2009, 10:06:29 PM »
Shafaq phooti tu raat bher ka silsila bhe toot gia
phir hijer kay nam pay dil mien kia kia na toot gia

Mein roz deikhta tha jis mein eqss apnay khabon ka
zara si baat pay wo sheesha sa dil kel toot gia

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #111 on: January 19, 2009, 11:01:47 AM »
Bohat Badhiya Sajid Bhaijaan,.
And Shukriya Didijaan,.
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«Reply #112 on: January 19, 2009, 11:32:56 AM »
Good one pooja ji Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #113 on: January 21, 2009, 04:49:55 PM »
Shafaq phooti tu raat bher ka silsila bhe toot gia
phir hijer kay nam pay dil mien kia kia na toot gia

Mein roz deikhta tha jis mein eqss apnay khabon ka
zara si baat pay wo sheesha sa dil kel toot gia

Sajid Hadayat
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Nice work Sajid ji.


Shukaria LIL BRO AND SALAMA!!
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«Reply #114 on: January 22, 2009, 03:39:50 AM »
ITs SALMA POOJA !
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Pooja
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«Reply #115 on: January 22, 2009, 04:41:42 AM »
SORRY SALMA, it's fixed!! wo jaladi jaladi main typos ho jaati hai...
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«Reply #116 on: January 22, 2009, 05:31:42 AM »
Good lines Anaam Ji, Arjun Ji and Hadayat Ji
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«Reply #117 on: January 22, 2009, 06:01:45 AM »
its k pooja  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #118 on: January 25, 2009, 01:21:20 PM »
well abhi to gtg..buh pooja di (hpe can call u tht)...
Gazab..superb, brilliant..
U see I write stories n thus I need sum shayaris n all..
n these shayaris rilli help a lot..  ( full credit to the writer)..

Thanx a lot yet again...
Abb sach mein bohot khub likti hai, bohot hi umda shayar hai app..aise hi likhte rahiye aur humara dill jit te rahiye..

Love ya loads di....t.cccc



             -Ur's Ever Madhu
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«Reply #119 on: January 25, 2009, 07:34:22 PM »
well abhi to gtg..buh pooja di (hpe can call u tht)...
Gazab..superb, brilliant..
U see I write stories n thus I need sum shayaris n all..
n these shayaris rilli help a lot..  ( full credit to the writer)..

Thanx a lot yet again...
Abb sach mein bohot khub likti hai, bohot hi umda shayar hai app..aise hi likhte rahiye aur humara dill jit te rahiye..

Love ya loads di....t.cccc



             -Ur's Ever Madhu

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