Rishta bhi toot gaya

by Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 14, 2008, 10:27:59 AM »
Quote from: Deepati on December 14, 2008, 12:48:25 AM

Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Thanks Deepati

YAROH TUM PLS YEH KAAM KARO
POOJA KEY DIL KOH SAKOON MILEY
AISA KUCH KAAM KARO

DUA KARO, VANDANA KARO
SAKOON MILEY HAR EK KOH
AISI TUM POOJA KARO



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«Reply #16 on: December 14, 2008, 03:00:34 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 13, 2008, 12:59:08 PM
Bahut Khoob Jaanasheen Bhai
Quote from: Pooja on December 13, 2008, 04:04:01 PM

shukaria lil bro!! bahoot sahi likha hai apne...
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«Reply #17 on: December 14, 2008, 03:09:56 PM »
Us Rishte Ke Tootne Ka Main Gham Kyun Karoon,.
Jab Usne Koi Rishta Banaaya Hi Na Tha,.

Gham Jo Mili Hain Mujhe, Meri Kismat Ke The,.
Unse Kya Gilaa Karoon, Jinhone Mujhe Chaaha Hi Na Tha,.

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«Reply #18 on: December 14, 2008, 05:06:53 PM »
bahoot khoob Jas ji, bahoot acha likha hai apne...

Thanks Deepti, Jaanasheen ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 14, 2008, 05:19:58 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 14, 2008, 03:09:56 PM
Us Rishte Ke Tootne Ka Main Gham Kyun Karoon,.
Jab Usne Koi Rishta Banaaya Hi Na Tha,.

Gham Jo Mili Hain Mujhe, Meri Kismat Ke The,.
Unse Kya Gilaa Karoon, Jinhone Mujhe Chaaha Hi Na Tha,.

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«Reply #20 on: December 14, 2008, 07:57:30 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 14, 2008, 05:06:53 PM
bahoot khoob Jas ji, bahoot acha likha hai apne...

Thanks Deepti, Jaanasheen ji


thanks JI


AAKHOH KA MANZAR TOOT GAYA
BANA THA JOH APNA DOOR GAYA
KUCH NA REH GAYA ABB JINDGANI MEH
BANA THA JOH RISHTA, TOOT GAYA


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«Reply #21 on: December 14, 2008, 07:58:06 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob jas ji
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«Reply #22 on: December 14, 2008, 08:03:55 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 14, 2008, 07:58:06 PM
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob jas ji


THANKS JI


KISI KEY DIL KA HUM HAAL LIKH RAHEY HAI
GUM MEH KISI KEY, SHAREEK HO RAHEY HAI
HUMEY BHI APNA SAMAJNA MERE DOST
GUM MEH TERE, HUM  BHI ROH RAHEY HAI


RISHTA JAB EK TOOT JATA HAI
JINDAGI MEH JAB AUR KUCH NA NAZAR AATA HAI
KHUDA BHI TAB USEY APNA BANATA HAI
KISI NA KISI KOH DIL SEY JARUR MILTA HAI

HOSLA RAKHNA TUM MERE DOST
KOI NA KOI JARUR AAYEGA
JANNAT NA SAHI, PAR
AASMAAN KI SEHAR JARUR KARWAYEGA



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«Reply #23 on: December 14, 2008, 08:15:34 PM »
bahoot khoob Jas ji
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«Reply #24 on: December 14, 2008, 08:17:45 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 14, 2008, 08:15:34 PM
bahoot khoob Jas ji


THANKS JI


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«Reply #25 on: December 14, 2008, 08:21:48 PM »
main nahi janati ki last line ka arth jis roop main maine likha hai wo kisi ko samjh ayega... kai baar insaan apna sara jeevan ek ghar banane main laga deta hai aor jab usko agg lagti hai to wo itne sadme main chala jaata hai ki bebas sa khara bas dekhta rahta hai.. itana sochne layak bhi nahi rah jaata ki use bachane ki koshish kare,,,,

dil toota, rishta toota, pyar ki dorr torri na gai
juda hue zisam, ghar hue juda, rooh ki kashish chorri na gai
bahoot armaano se sajaya tha tinka tinka ashiana humne
lagi jab agg, pani ke liye, ansoo tak ki jhari bahaai na gai
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«Reply #26 on: December 14, 2008, 08:35:34 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 14, 2008, 08:21:48 PM
main nahi janati ki last line ka arth jis roop main maine likha hai wo kisi ko samjh ayega... kai baar insaan apna sara jeevan ek ghar banane main laga deta hai aor jab usko agg lagti hai to wo itne sadme main chala jaata hai ki bebas sa khara bas dekhta rahta hai.. itana sochne layak bhi nahi rah jaata ki use bachane ki koshish kare,,,,

dil toota, rishta toota, pyar ki dorr torri na gai
juda hue zisam, ghar hue juda, rooh ki kashish chorri na gai
bahoot armaano se sajaya tha tinka tinka ashiana humne
lagi jab agg, pani ke liye, ansoo tak ki jhari bahaai na gai


bahut hi pyare andaaz meh aap neh apney dil ka haal bataya hai JI


TINKA TINKA JOR KEY HUMNEY YEH AASHIANA BANAYA
PYAR SEY HAR TARAF EK GHARONDA BANAYA

MITA KEY CHAL DIYE WOH ISS KADAR BEH-JUBAAN
JISKEY LIYE HUMNEY YEH GULISTAAN BANAYA


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«Reply #27 on: December 14, 2008, 08:38:01 PM »
shukaria jas ji...

bahoot acha likha hai apne.
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«Reply #28 on: December 14, 2008, 08:43:10 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 14, 2008, 08:38:01 PM
shukaria jas ji...

bahoot acha likha hai apne.


THANKS JI

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«Reply #29 on: December 15, 2008, 11:35:37 AM »
Great Yaar,.
Aap Dono Ne To Achchi Mehyfill Sajaai Hai,.
Nice One jasbir Bhai,.
And Pooja Didi,.
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