Rishta bhi toot gaya

by Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM
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«Reply #30 on: December 15, 2008, 11:42:12 AM »
Mujhse Rishta Wo Banaata Gaya, Tordta Gaya,.
Mere Dil Se Wo Khelta Gaya, Jordta Gaya,.

Aadat Thi Uski, Rang Badalne Ki, "Azeem,.
Roshni ke Safar Mein, Saath Deta Gaya,.
Andheron Ke Safar Mein, Saath Chordta Gaya,.

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«Reply #31 on: December 15, 2008, 01:30:21 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 15, 2008, 11:35:37 AM
Great Yaar,.
Aap Dono Ne To Achchi Mehyfill Sajaai Hai,.
Nice One jasbir Bhai,.
And Pooja Didi,.



THANKS JAHANASHEEN



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«Reply #32 on: December 15, 2008, 01:31:10 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 15, 2008, 11:42:12 AM
Mujhse Rishta Wo Banaata Gaya, Tordta Gaya,.
Mere Dil Se Wo Khelta Gaya, Jordta Gaya,.

Aadat Thi Uski, Rang Badalne Ki, "Azeem,.
Roshni ke Safar Mein, Saath Deta Gaya,.
Andheron Ke Safar Mein, Saath Chordta Gaya,.

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BAHUT KHOOB JAHANASHEEN


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #33 on: December 15, 2008, 02:23:08 PM »
Shukriya Jasbir Bhai,.
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«Reply #34 on: December 15, 2008, 05:56:24 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 15, 2008, 11:42:12 AM
Mujhse Rishta Wo Banaata Gaya, Tordta Gaya,.
Mere Dil Se Wo Khelta Gaya, Jordta Gaya,.

Aadat Thi Uski, Rang Badalne Ki, "Azeem,.
Roshni ke Safar Mein, Saath Deta Gaya,.
Andheron Ke Safar Mein, Saath Chordta Gaya,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-

bahoot khoob Lil bro
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«Reply #35 on: December 17, 2008, 04:21:27 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 14, 2008, 03:09:56 PM
Us Rishte Ke Tootne Ka Main Gham Kyun Karoon,.
Jab Usne Koi Rishta Banaaya Hi Na Tha,.

Gham Jo Mili Hain Mujhe, Meri Kismat Ke The,.
Unse Kya Gilaa Karoon, Jinhone Mujhe Chaaha Hi Na Tha,.

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wah kaya baat hai lil bro... bahoot khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #36 on: December 17, 2008, 05:02:23 AM »
Ek Waada Hai Kisi Ka, Jo Wafaa Hota Nahi,.
Marmari Taaron Bhari Raaton Mein Kya Hota Nahi,.

Jee Mein Aata Hai, Ulat Dein Unke Chehre Se Naqaab,.
Hausla Karte Hain Lekin Hausla, Hota Nahi,.

Shamaa Jis Ki Aabru Pat, Jaan De De Jhoom Kar,.
Wo Patanga, Jal To Jaata Hai Fanaa Hota Nahi,.

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«Reply #37 on: December 17, 2008, 07:52:59 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM
ACCHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE Applause Applause
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«Reply #38 on: December 17, 2008, 08:57:36 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on December 17, 2008, 07:52:59 AM
BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM
ACCHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE Applause Applause

Shukriya Kashish Ji,.

Kuch To Majbooriyaan Rahi Hongi, Yun Koi Bewafaa Nahi Hota,.
Gufagu Unse Roz Hoti Hai, Muddaton Saamna Nahi Hota,.

Jee Bohay Chahta Hai Sach Bolein, Kya Karein Hauslaa Nahi Hota,.
Raat Ka Intezaat Kaun Kare, Aaj Kal Din Mein Kya Nahi Hota,.

_________________________________-Basheer Badr-
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«Reply #39 on: December 17, 2008, 09:32:19 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 17, 2008, 08:57:36 AM
Shukriya Kashish Ji,.

Kuch To Majbooriyaan Rahi Hongi, Yun Koi Bewafaa Nahi Hota,.
Gufagu Unse Roz Hoti Hai, Muddaton Saamna Nahi Hota,.

Jee Bohay Chahta Hai Sach Bolein, Kya Karein Hauslaa Nahi Hota,.
Raat Ka Intezaat Kaun Kare, Aaj Kal Din Mein Kya Nahi Hota,.

_________________________________-Basheer Badr-


WAH  , KYA BAAT HAI JAHANSHEEN




YEH MAJBOORIYA BHI AJEEB HOTI HAI
JISKOH MITANA HO JAHAAN SEY
USPAR YEH TOOT PADTI HAI
KUCH NAHI REH JATA JINDAGI MEH
JAB YEH KHOOB HOTI HAI
YEH MAJBOORIYA BHI AJEEB HOTI HAI



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«Reply #40 on: December 17, 2008, 09:42:33 AM »
Shukriya Bhai..
And Nice One From U Too,.

Dil Ne Kaha, Chalo Koi Faislaa Karein,.
Aaj Khud Apni Hi Naseeb Se Gilaa Karein,.

Dost To Ab Karne Lage Sitam Hum Par "Jaana",.
Kyun Na Ab Dushmano Se Hi Milaa Karein,.

Doobte Hain Log Samander Mein Jaakar "Azeem",.
Aao Kinaaro Pe Doobne Ka Tajrubaa Karein,.

Yun To Zakham Dete Hain Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hote Hain,.
Aao In Bewafaaon Se Hi, Dil Lagaane Ka Hauslaa Karein,.

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«Reply #41 on: December 17, 2008, 04:03:57 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 17, 2008, 09:42:33 AM
Shukriya Bhai..
And Nice One From U Too,.

Dil Ne Kaha, Chalo Koi Faislaa Karein,.
Aaj Khud Apni Hi Naseeb Se Gilaa Karein,.

Dost To Ab Karne Lage Sitam Hum Par "Jaana",.
Kyun Na Ab Dushmano Se Hi Milaa Karein,.

Doobte Hain Log Samander Mein Jaakar "Azeem",.
Aao Kinaaro Pe Doobne Ka Tajrubaa Karein,.

Yun To Zakham Dete Hain Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hote Hain,.
Aao In Bewafaaon Se Hi, Dil Lagaane Ka Hauslaa Karein,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-





arey wah, koi jawaab nahi aap ka. wah, sach meh bahut khush hua yeh padd key. wah wah. koi words hi nahi hai mere paas. har words kam hai iss key saamney. itna badiya likha hai aap neh.
wah wah


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«Reply #42 on: December 17, 2008, 04:26:43 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 17, 2008, 08:57:36 AM
Shukriya Kashish Ji,.

Kuch To Majbooriyaan Rahi Hongi, Yun Koi Bewafaa Nahi Hota,.
Gufagu Unse Roz Hoti Hai, Muddaton Saamna Nahi Hota,.

Jee Bohay Chahta Hai Sach Bolein, Kya Karein Hauslaa Nahi Hota,.
Raat Ka Intezaat Kaun Kare, Aaj Kal Din Mein Kya Nahi Hota,.

_________________________________-Basheer Badr-

a wonderful sharing lil bro... ek ek line bahoot achi lagi .. thanks for sharing this one!!
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«Reply #43 on: December 17, 2008, 04:29:30 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 17, 2008, 09:42:33 AM
Shukriya Bhai..
And Nice One From U Too,.

Dil Ne Kaha, Chalo Koi Faislaa Karein,.
Aaj Khud Apni Hi Naseeb Se Gilaa Karein,.

Dost To Ab Karne Lage Sitam Hum Par "Jaana",.
Kyun Na Ab Dushmano Se Hi Milaa Karein,.

Doobte Hain Log Samander Mein Jaakar "Azeem",.
Aao Kinaaro Pe Doobne Ka Tajrubaa Karein,.

Yun To Zakham Dete Hain Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hote Hain,.
Aao In Bewafaaon Se Hi, Dil Lagaane Ka Hauslaa Karein,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-




Ek ek line kamal likhi hai lil bro.. magar last ki do line... uufff kaya likha hai apne... bahoot khoob!!!


Ek Rishta toota aor ek naya rishta ban gaya
dil ki dil he jaane, kaya karishma ban gaya

na tha pahle tu mera, na ab kabhi hoga mera
bas dil ka dil se h, khud ko jhuthlane ka, silsila ban gaya
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«Reply #44 on: December 17, 2008, 06:02:50 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 17, 2008, 04:29:30 PM
Ek ek line kamal likhi hai lil bro.. magar last ki do line... uufff kaya likha hai apne... bahoot khoob!!!


Ek Rishta toota aor ek naya rishta ban gaya
dil ki dil he jaane, kaya karishma ban gaya

na tha pahle tu mera, na ab kabhi hoga mera
bas dil ka dil se h, khud ko jhuthlane ka, silsila ban gaya

wah, kya khoob kah aap neh bhi JI, bahut hi badiya kaha.


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