Rishta bhi toot gaya -Panna 5:Shayri-E-Dard

jasbirsingh

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«Reply #60 on: December 23, 2008, 04:26:44 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 22, 2008, 12:53:50 PM

Lamba Safar Umar Ka Hai, Tanhaa Guzarta Nahi,.
Sar Pe Agar Dhoop Na Ho, Saaya Utarta Nahi,.

Rishte Bina Hai Jis Tarah, saaye Bina Aadmi,.
Dil Ki Kisi Dori Se Hai, Baandha Hua Aadmi,.

______________________-Gulzar-

Very well said Jahansheen

UNSEY ACCHI UNKI YAADEH HAI
JAB BULAO CHALI AATI HAI
TANHA HAMEY KABHI REHNEY NAHI DETI
HAR PAL SAATH NIBHARI HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Pooja

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #61 on: December 23, 2008, 04:45:08 PM »

kis liye yaadon ka yah bandhan rah gaya
socho ke ghare main, kadva ek such rah gaya
tadap shayad is dil se na mit payegi kabhi
Rishta toot jaane ke baad bhi, ek toota rishta rah gaya


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Sonia01

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #62 on: December 23, 2008, 04:53:57 PM »

bahut accha sharing ki hai gulzar ji ka jaanashen ji, and Pooja ji


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Pooja

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #63 on: December 23, 2008, 04:56:09 PM »

Thanks Sonia


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #64 on: December 23, 2008, 06:59:54 PM »

TOOTEY RISHTEY KI BHI EK KAHANI HOTI HAI
JINDAGI KI RAAH MEH CHALTEY CHALTEY
HI YEH PURANI HOTI HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Pooja

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #65 on: December 23, 2008, 07:34:02 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 23, 2008, 06:59:54 PM

TOOTEY RISHTEY KI BHI EK KAHANI HOTI HAI
JINDAGI KI RAAH MEH CHALTEY CHALTEY
HI YEH PURANI HOTI HAI

JASBIR SINGH

very well said jas ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #66 on: December 23, 2008, 07:39:28 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 23, 2008, 07:34:02 PM

very well said jas ji

Thanks JI


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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #67 on: December 24, 2008, 04:09:19 PM »

Thank U Sonia JI,.
Aur Bohat Achche Jasbir Bhai,.
And Pooja Didi,.


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #68 on: December 25, 2008, 08:33:11 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 24, 2008, 04:09:19 PM

Thank U Sonia JI,.
Aur Bohat Achche Jasbir Bhai,.
And Pooja Didi,.

THANKS JAHANASHEEN

JASBIR SINGH

RISHTA BHI TOOT GAYA
SAPNA BHI TOOT GAYA
BAN GAYE AISEY HARJAYI
DIL BHI TOOT GAYA

ITNA SAB TOAD KEY KAHA JAYOGEY
KYA HAMAREY BINA, REH PAOGEY ?

SARI BAATEY HUM BHOOL JAYENGEY
NA KUCH BHI GILA HUM KAR JAYENGEY

EK BAAR MUSKURAKAR KEHDOH AAJ BHI
KARTEY HO PYAR HUMSEY AAJ BHI

JASBIR SINGH


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ANAAM

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #69 on: December 26, 2008, 12:40:34 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

toote sapne, toota dil, Rishta bhi toot gaya
soch rahi hu, kaya rah gaya, ab jeevan beetane ko

yaadon ke yah saye, kyun rah jaate hai
til-til armaano ko is kadar tadpaane ko

din main hosh nahi, raato ko nind nahi
ladte hai teri yaadon se, tujhko bhulane ko

Lo mil gaya zakham umarbhar rulane ko
shukaria tera, mera sath chor jaane ko

AAP ITNA DARD SHABDO ME KAISE PIRO LETI HAIN
SHABD KHUD-B-KHUD SAJTE HAIN YA UNHE BULANA JAMANA PADTA HAI...
HUM TO KOSHIS KAR K BHI LIKH NAHI PATE
KYA LIKH NE K LIYE DARD KI GALION SE GUJARNA PADTA HAI ?
BATAIYEGA JAROOR....


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Pooja

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #70 on: December 26, 2008, 06:23:18 PM »

Quote from: ANAAM on December 26, 2008, 12:40:34 PM

Quote from: Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:33:46 AM

Anaam ji,
sabse pahle to Yoindia mai apka sawagat karna chahugi main. apko mera likha acha laga, iske liye shukar gujar hu!!

dard jab bilkhtein hai to shabd ban jaate hai
shabd jab rote hai to kuch share ban jaate hai

likh jaate hai dil ke zakhmo ko shabdo ke sahare
karahte hue zakhmo ko, sabar ke kuch pal mil jaate hai

ab to yah bhi pata nahi chalta Pooja ko
shabdo se dard atta hai ya dard se shabd ban jaate hai


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_Vicky_

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #71 on: December 27, 2008, 04:48:01 AM »

Pooja Ji.. Kya Baat Hai.. Bahut Hi Jazzbaati Lafz Likhe Hain aapne. aur ANAAM Ji Ko Samjhaane ke aapka Andaaz Bhi pasand aaya.! Waqai Shayar wahi hote Hain..jo Baat par bassssssss Sher Kaha Jayen..! isliye to hum bhi aapki Kalam ke deewane Hain.. bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause

Jab-Jab Dard-o-Gam Ki Syaahi, Kaagaz par Bikhar Jati Hai,
Are Mere Yaaron, Sher-o-Shyaari Khud-b-khud Ban Jati Hai...

**~** Mann **~**


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Pooja

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #72 on: December 27, 2008, 05:02:51 AM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji..

bahoot he achi lines likhi hai apne..


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_Vicky_

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #73 on: December 30, 2008, 04:25:12 AM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji..!! Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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ANAAM

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Re: Rishta bhi toot gaya

«Reply #74 on: December 30, 2008, 12:50:36 PM »

wah wah kya khoob kaha he aapne....
"ab to yah bhi pata nahi chalta Pooja ko
shabdo se dard atta hai ya dard se shabd ban jaate hai"

daad dene ko shabd hi nahi mil rehe.... Applause

Dard se abhi rishta huaa he nahi hamara
Hushn se bhi rishta huaa he nahi hamara
koi rista huaa ghav huaa he nahi hamara
kisekhu koi abhitak huaa he nahi hamara-anaam


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