rishta kuch jarur tha

by poonam singh on October 24, 2010, 07:21:50 AM
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humko unko waaste har dard bhi manjoor tha,
gar wo itna maan lete sab unka hi kasoor tha.

sab kuch deke bhi unhe hum mutmaien na kar sake,
humne kuch chaha nahi unko ye guroor tha.

hum to unke saamne sajde me yu betha kiye,
jaise unke aks me khuda ka hi wajood tha.

gar nahi hai naam koi afsoos hum kisse kare,
itna sakoon hai hume rishta kuch jarur tha.
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2010, 07:28:46 AM »
mere gunaahon ko tum kya bataate ho dost
         main to khud hi hisaab lagaate lagaate thak gaya hun !

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2010, 08:32:00 AM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut khoob Poonam Ji..

Aap bahut Acha Likhte Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shayad Woh bhi Halaat Ke haathon Bahut Majboor Tha
Sirf Ishq Nakaam Hua Hai,Yeh Naa Soch Kis ka kasoor Tha..

Chal Rahe The Saath-Saath par Dono Ki Raahein Juda Hui!!!
Shayad Khuda Ko Yuh Dono Ka Saath Rehna Naa manzoor Tha..

Tujhe Yaad Kar Uski Saansein Aaj Bhi Tham Jaati Hai!!!
Rishte Ka Koi Naam Naa Sahi,Par Dil Se Dil ka Rishta Zaroor Tha..
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2010, 08:36:16 AM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut khoob Poonam Ji..

Aap bahut Acha Likhte Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shayad Woh bhi Halaat Ke haathon Bahut Majboor Tha
Sirf Ishq Nakaam Hua Hai,Yeh Naa Soch Kis ka kasoor Tha..

Chal Rahe The Saath-Saath par Dono Ki Raahein Juda Hui!!!
Shayad Khuda Ko Yuh Dono Ka Saath Rehna Naa manzoor Tha..

Tujhe Yaad Kar Uski Saansein Aaj Bhi Tham Jaati Hai!!!
Rishte Ka Koi Naam Naa Sahi,Par Dil Se Dil ka Rishta Zaroor Tha..


good reply khwaish ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2010, 08:37:16 AM »
humko unko waaste har dard bhi manjoor tha,
gar wo itna maan lete sab unka hi kasoor tha.

sab kuch deke bhi unhe hum mutmaien na kar sake,
humne kuch chaha nahi unko ye guroor tha.

hum to unke saamne sajde me yu betha kiye,
jaise unke aks me khuda ka hi wajood tha.

gar nahi hai naam koi afsoos hum kisse kare,
itna sakoon hai hume rishta kuch jarur tha.

poonam aate hi chha gai ho tum..wakai bht hi khubsurat sajati ho khyalon ko feelings ko..keep writing this way....
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2010, 08:58:02 AM »
sab kuch deke bhi unhe hum mutmaien na kar sake,
humne kuch chaha nahi unko ye guroor tha.

Beautiful work Poonam Jee and very well supported by Intezar and Khwaish Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2010, 01:38:40 PM »
Bahut khoob poonam ji n khoob reply khwaish ji.....
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