"Rishta"

by angel4u on July 24, 2008, 02:45:03 PM

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angel4u

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Ye meri shayad ab tak ki sabse chhoti kavita hai. lets see iska reaction kya hota hai... Usual Smile

Kal Yahin Pe Tha,
Hamare Naam,
Khushiyon Ka Gharaunda,
Chaand Ki Muskurahat Thi Mere Naam,
Aaj Apni Daulat
Dard Ka Ghunghat Odhe
Is Sukhe Hue Chehre Pe,
Geele Aansuon Ka Kaarvan,
Sitaron Se Barasti Hui Khoon Ki Baarish,
Un Lahoon Ke Qatron Se Jalte Teri Yaadon Ke Deep,
Aur Ek Dam Todta Hua Rishta...


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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2008, 03:10:46 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on July 24, 2008, 02:45:03 PM

Ye meri shayad ab tak ki sabse chhoti kavita hai. lets see iska reaction kya hota hai... Usual Smile

Bahut Khoob Angel!!!


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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2008, 03:16:40 PM »

angel ji...kavita shabdon se choti ya badi nahi hoti bhawon se hoti hai..aur mujhe kahne me koi hichkichahat nahi ki aapne wo sab kuch kah diya is choti si kavita me jo aap kahna chahti thi

bahoot achcha likha apne


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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2008, 01:34:27 AM »

It's Beautiful Angel...


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2008, 02:51:32 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2008, 03:10:46 PM

Bahut Khoob Angel!!!

Thanks a lot khwaish ji Usual Smile


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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2008, 02:52:09 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 24, 2008, 03:16:40 PM

Bahut bahut shukriya bekarar ji Usual Smile


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sarthika

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2008, 02:52:31 AM »

Nice one Angel


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2008, 02:53:18 AM »

Quote from: Aryaan on July 25, 2008, 01:34:27 AM

It's Beautiful Angel...

Bahut bahut shukriya Aryaan JI


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2008, 02:53:39 AM »

Thanks Sarthika...


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2009, 02:43:21 AM »

Rishta Jo Bana Tha Tera Mera,
Raaston Se Shuru Hoke,
Khaakh Mein Mila,
Jisse Dhool Udti Hui,
Pahuchi Nazron Ke Dareecho Pe,
Us Gharme Palte Hue Jaane Kitne,
Masoom Khwaab Jal Gaye...


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Roja

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 02:52:35 AM »

Quote from: angel4u on January 15, 2009, 02:43:21 AM

Rishta Jo Bana Tha Tera Mera,
Raaston Se Shuru Hoke,
Khaakh Mein Mila,
Jisse Dhool Udti Hui,
Pahuchi Nazron Ke Dareecho Pe,
Us Gharme Palte Hue Jaane Kitne,
Masoom Khwaab Jal Gaye...

Wah Angel sis nice line


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 02:54:39 AM »

Thanks a lot Roja Usual Smile


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 03:22:30 AM »

Bahou khoob Angel ji. aapki dono prastuti acchi hai.

Ek choti si kaushish.....

khwaab to maasoom they
jo palte palte jul gaye
ek bewajah si zindgi mein
tum aur mai dono dhul gaye
rishton ne toda thaa dum
pur saanse yeh chalti rahi
kaise isey zindgi ka naam dedu
jo tera bina bhee badhti rahi....