"Rishta"

by angel4u on July 24, 2008, 02:45:03 PM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: April 12, 2009, 06:01:05 PM »
Tere Sang Jo Rishta Kabhi Sanjoya Tha,
Aaj Ise Na Jaane Kaunsi Hawa Lagi Hui Hai,
Shamma Roshan Kar To Rahi Hai Ise,
Baad-e-Saba se Phir Jal Jaayega Ye,
Chamak Tha Kabhi Tu Meri Aankhon Ka,
Aaj Ek Tootta Hua Taara Ban Gaya Hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: July 06, 2009, 09:18:33 PM »
good work Angel!!
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2009, 09:14:03 AM »


BAHUT KHOOB ANGEL JI Applause Applause
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angel4u
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«Reply #18 on: July 09, 2009, 04:31:44 PM »
Thanks Pooja Di and Marhoom Bahayaat Ji...
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: July 09, 2009, 04:36:11 PM »
Bahut bahut accha likha hai dear hasina... (haan yaar tumne toda chota hi likha hehehe)....
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angel4u
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«Reply #20 on: July 09, 2009, 04:43:40 PM »
haan Usual Smile
meri sabse chhoti si poem hai Usual Smile
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javedarshad
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«Reply #21 on: July 09, 2009, 04:54:17 PM »
Bahut khoob Angel Saheba

Pahli baar padh raha hun ke
bade saba kisi charagh ko jala bhi sakti hai

toote tare to shaitan ko bhagane ke liye bhaije jate hain

bahut hi naya andaaz hai

Jo bhi rishte sanjoye jate hain
apne khoon se nibhaye jate hain
Shamm-e-wafa bujh jaye to wafa kaisi
yeh rishte mushkil se nibhaye jatehain



javed



Tere Sang Jo Rishta Kabhi Sanjoya Tha,
Aaj Ise Na Jaane Kaunsi Hawa Lagi Hui Hai,
Shamma Roshan Kar To Rahi Hai Ise,
Baad-e-Saba se Phir Jal Jaayega Ye,
Chamak Tha Kabhi Tu Meri Aankhon Ka,
Aaj Ek Tootta Hua Taara Ban Gaya Hai...

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angel4u
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«Reply #22 on: July 09, 2009, 04:59:35 PM »

Bahut shukriya Javed Ji...

Aapka comment dekhke achha laga... Hmmm baad-e-saba bhi chirag ko hawa hi deti hai...

Rishto ki Naazuk Dor Jab Haath Thaam Leti Hai Apna,
Unhi Kachhe Dhaago se Buna Tha Harek Khwaab Maine,
Jhilmil jhilmil palkon mein palte ashqon ke aashiyaan,
Kahan jayenge ye Jab toot Jaayenge
ye kachhe dhaagon ke Baandh teri tez nazron se...
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javedarshad
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«Reply #23 on: July 09, 2009, 10:30:57 PM »
Rishto ki Naazuk Dor Jab Haath Thaam Leti Hai Apna,
Unhi Kachhe Dhaago se Buna Tha Harek Khwaab Maine,
Jhilmil jhilmil palkon mein palte ashqon ke aashiyaan,
Kahan jayenge ye Jab toot Jaayenge
ye kachhe dhaagon ke Baandh teri tez nazron se...
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Angel
kia baat hai

Rishte yeh nazuk sawarte kahan hain
Aansu,ladiyon ke bikherte kahan hain
Mere khuwabon ki tabeer mili hi kahan
Bikhre  khuwab yun sajte kahan hain
Hone do zara nazre iltifaat  mujh per  (Muhabbat ki nazer)
Kachha dhaga sahi woh rukte kahan hain



javed
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MHussain
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2009, 11:59:38 PM »
Bade saba aur roshan ho shama
Tulooe sehr ka dhoka sa laga

Very nice Mr. Javed
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #25 on: July 10, 2009, 01:15:37 AM »
Wow Angel ji wonderful creation.excellent,beautiful lines by Prateek ji,Pooja ji,Javed ji,Mhussain ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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angel4u
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«Reply #26 on: July 10, 2009, 02:45:06 AM »
Rishto ki Naazuk Dor Jab Haath Thaam Leti Hai Apna,
Unhi Kachhe Dhaago se Buna Tha Harek Khwaab Maine,
Jhilmil jhilmil palkon mein palte ashqon ke aashiyaan,
Kahan jayenge ye Jab toot Jaayenge
ye kachhe dhaagon ke Baandh teri tez nazron se...


Angel
kia baat hai

Rishte yeh nazuk sawarte kahan hain
Aansu,ladiyon ke bikherte kahan hain
Mere khuwabon ki tabeer mili hi kahan
Bikhre  khuwab yun sajte kahan hain
Hone do zara nazre iltifaat  mujh per  (Muhabbat ki nazer)
Kachha dhaga sahi woh rukte kahan hain


javed

Bahut Khoob Javed Ji...

Nazron ki mohabbat padh bhi le shayad tu,
mehsoos kaise hogi tujhe mere dard ki daastan,
kitaab-e-chahat mein bas ek warq teri wafa ka,
mere ashqon ko dekhke har lafz roya bepanaah,
"rishta" reh gaya hai ab alfazon ka mohtaaj,
is lafz mein "lafz" ke siwa kuch nazar aata nahi...
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angel4u
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«Reply #27 on: July 10, 2009, 02:45:25 AM »
Wow Angel ji wonderful creation.excellent,beautiful lines by Prateek ji,Pooja ji,Javed ji,Mhussain ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much Madhu... Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2009, 03:29:49 AM »
Rishto ki Naazuk Dor Jab Haath Thaam Leti Hai Apna,
Unhi Kachhe Dhaago se Buna Tha Harek Khwaab Maine,
Jhilmil jhilmil palkon mein palte ashqon ke aashiyaan,
Kahan jayenge ye Jab toot Jaayenge
ye kachhe dhaagon ke Baandh teri tez nazron se...


Angel
kia baat hai

Rishte yeh nazuk sawarte kahan hain
Aansu,ladiyon ke bikherte kahan hain
Mere khuwabon ki tabeer mili hi kahan
Bikhre  khuwab yun sajte kahan hain
Hone do zara nazre iltifaat  mujh per  (Muhabbat ki nazer)
Kachha dhaga sahi woh rukte kahan hain



javed

Bahut khoob  Usual Smile
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salil2002
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«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2009, 05:39:14 AM »
huzena yaar kasam se mazaa aa gaya padkar dil khush ho gaya........bahut hi ummda peshkash hai mere dost

na roko apni kalam ko ise dil ka haal likhne do
kabhi yeh tere , toh kabhi mera haal bayaan karti hai
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