"Rishta" -Panna 4:Shayri-E-Dard

angel4u

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«Reply #45 on: July 17, 2009, 02:57:00 AM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 16, 2009, 08:51:34 PM

Angel Bahut khoob
abhi thoodi si mashq aur chahiye

Anjane rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hoote hain
Dil ki dhadkanoN ke aahoon ke naqeeb hoote hain

Rahain kal bhi khulee theen aaj bhi waa hain
Daman , Ashkoon ko mushkil se naseeb hoote hain

Ishq ka naam hi babasee hai mere dost
Kabhi larazte aansu kabhi shoole qareeb hoote hain

javed

Aapka aakhri shair bahut pasand aaya kia be sakhtgee hai

keep itup

javed

Shukriya Javed Ji...

chale the mohabbat ki raah pe milke dono,
ishq ki thokarone bas hamein hi jhulsaya,
nikla uska dil raahon ke pattharon sa sakht,
khudki ana ke bojh tale kuchle meri wafa,
ek chidiya jo chehekti thi hamesha fizaaon mein,
kyon hui aaj wo gumsum si khamosh si paheliyon mein,
aashiyaana shayad uska bhi luta hoga tez toofan mein,
ye toofan kyon na jaane tujh jaisi fitrat rakhta hai...


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #46 on: July 17, 2009, 02:58:06 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 16, 2009, 09:46:55 PM

Wah Angel ji and Javed ji,bahut khoob likha aap dono ne,mindblwing lines,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft

:clap:keep it up

Thanks Madhu


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javedarshad

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #47 on: July 17, 2009, 12:40:51 PM »

Wah kia khoob

achi ilzaamtarashi hai

Aashiyan apna khud jalate ho
Kah ke toofan badnam kerte ho

Kabhi wafa kosamjha hinahin
Meriwafa ko badnam kerte ho

Mera dil tune dil hi kahan rakha
pather marke mujhko ilzaam dete ho

javed


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #48 on: July 17, 2009, 12:43:54 PM »

Wah very nice and beautiful lines Javed ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft


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salil2002

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #49 on: July 17, 2009, 01:11:20 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on July 13, 2009, 04:41:12 PM

Thanks Salil... Usual Smile

acha laga ye dekhke ke tumhe pasand aaya...

Kalam Ki Fitrat Kaho Ya Kaho Mere Haalaton ka Aaayna,
Ke Lafz-E-Wafa Ko Chhute Hi Nok Kuch Aur Tez Ho Uthti Hai... crybaby2

shukriya angel dear

kalam kii taakat ko pehchaanne kii kuwat nahin meri
kehte hain kii yeh takhto taazo ko mita deti hai
isliye likh lete hain hum haale dil apna
kii dard kii daad se badkar dawa kya hoti hai


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madhuwesh

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #50 on: July 17, 2009, 01:32:09 PM »

Wah Saahil ji very beautiful lines, icon_thumleft


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javedarshad

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #51 on: July 17, 2009, 03:00:23 PM »

Shukria

Madhu ji

javed


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #52 on: July 18, 2009, 03:09:11 AM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 17, 2009, 12:40:51 PM

Ilzaam kis kis chiz ka dein tujhe,
mujhe gam deneka ya mitane ka,
ashqone chhoda hia aashiyaana aankhonka,
ho gaye ab wo khaak ke vaasi bankar,
kya ye teri hi meherbaaniya nahi hai?
wafa ko samjha bhi hia khoob humne,
isliye aaj khamosh raahon mein khade hai,
meri har saans se aaj bhi banate hai,
meri aahon ke lafz tere liye duwaon ki qitaab...

Ilzaam kis kis chiz ka dein tujhe,
mujhe gam deneka ya mitane ka,
ashqone chhoda hia aashiyaana aankhonka,
ho gaye ab wo khaak ke vaasi bankar,
kya ye teri hi meherbaaniya nahi hai?
wafa ko samjha bhi hia khoob humne,
isliye aaj khamosh raahon mein khade hai,
meri har saans se aaj bhi banate hai,
meri aahon ke lafz tere liye duwaon ki qitaab...


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #53 on: July 18, 2009, 03:11:55 AM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 17, 2009, 01:11:20 PM

Kalam se kya haal-e-dard bayaan kiya hai humne,
apne dardon ki bas hansi udwayi hai humne,

Dardon ki dawa to kuch yun bhi aazmaayi hai ab to,
mere khwabon mein ek mazboot qabr sajayi hai humne,


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javedarshad

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #54 on: July 18, 2009, 03:54:54 AM »

so Bad

anjane mein khud ko kuin satate ho
apna nahin mera bhi khoon jalate ho

javed


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #55 on: July 18, 2009, 01:41:28 PM »

mere dard-o-gam ka ilm hota gar tujhe,
aaj is aangan mein mehekte phool hote,
chehekte panchhi teri wafaon ke agar,
mere dilke darakhton pe baharon ke bojh hote...


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javedarshad

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #56 on: July 18, 2009, 02:53:39 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on July 18, 2009, 01:41:28 PM

mere dard-o-gam ka ilm hota gar tujhe,
aaj is aangan mein mehekte phool hote,
chehekte panchhi teri wafaon ke agar,
mere dilke darakhton pe baharon ke bojh hote...

Dard , dard ke siva duniayan mein rakha kia hai
ger jina hai tujhe tobas hans khail ke guzar de

javed


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #57 on: July 18, 2009, 04:10:03 PM »

meri hansi mein kab kisi ko kami nazar aayi hai?
dard ki numayish aye dost hum kam hi kiya karte hai...


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Roja

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #58 on: July 18, 2009, 05:17:48 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on July 09, 2009, 04:59:35 PM

Bahut shukriya Javed Ji...

Aapka comment dekhke achha laga... Hmmm baad-e-saba bhi chirag ko hawa hi deti hai...

Rishto ki Naazuk Dor Jab Haath Thaam Leti Hai Apna,
Unhi Kachhe Dhaago se Buna Tha Harek Khwaab Maine,
Jhilmil jhilmil palkon mein palte ashqon ke aashiyaan,
Kahan jayenge ye Jab toot Jaayenge
ye kachhe dhaagon ke Baandh teri tez nazron se...

Wah kya khoob likha tumne dear hasina..


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angel4u

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Re: "Rishta"

«Reply #59 on: July 18, 2009, 05:20:03 PM »

Thank You so much roja..


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