RishtoN Mein Faasle Aaye "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 07, 2012, 09:19:34 AM
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Fursatain Mile Jab Bhi  Ranjishein Bhula Dena!!!!
Kaun  Jaane Saanson Ki mohalatein Kahan Tak Hain...!!!



Dil Ka Dard AankhoN mein Le Aaye
Yeh Kyon RishtoN mein Faasle Aaye

Sab Kuch Paakar Bhi, Phir Kho Diya.!!
Apne Haq mein  Jo Kuch Faisle Aaye

Woh Dariya Jo Sabse Khamosh Tha
Aaj Ussi mein  Gehre  Zalzale Aaye

Woh musafir Jo Umar Bhar Tanha Chalta Raha
Peeche Uske Humesha Se Kaafile Aaaye...!!!!

Phulon Se Pucho Kabhi Kanton ki Bhi keemat..!!!!
 Log To Bas Phulon Ki Boli Lagane Chale Aaye

"Khwaish" Nahi Bhoolta Guzre Hue Daur Ko Kabhi!!!
Zindagi Mein Chaahe Laakh Mausam Bure-Bhale Aaye

             
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2012, 09:22:06 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley good keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2012, 09:45:47 AM »

khwaish ji,

waah waah...bahut khoob.

Dili mubaarakbaad hazir hai.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2012, 09:47:10 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2012, 09:19:34 AM
Fursatain Mile Jab Bhi  Ranjishein Bhula Dena!!!!
Kaun  Jaane Saanson Ki mohalatein Kahan Tak Hain...!!!
 Applause Applause Applause


Dil Ka Dard AankhoN mein Le Aaye
Yeh Kyon RishtoN mein Faasle Aaye  Applause Applause

Sab Kuch Paakar Bhi, Phir Kho Diya.!!
Apne Haq mein  Jo Kuch Faisle Aaye  Applause Applause

Woh Dariya Jo Sabse Khamosh Tha
Aaj Ussi mein  Gehre  Zalzale Aaye  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Woh musafir Jo Umar Bhar Tanha Chalta Raha
Peeche Uske Humesha Se Kaafile Aaaye...!!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Phulon Se Pucho Kabhi Kanton ki Bhi keemat..!!!!
 Log To Bas Phulon Ki Boli Lagane Chale Aaye  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

"Khwaish" Nahi Bhoolta Guzre Hue Daur Ko Kabhi!!!
Zindagi Mein Chaahe Laakh Mausam Bure-Bhale Aaye  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

             
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji
Holi ke is avsar par isse jyada pyar bhara sandesh nahi ho sakta..
khush rahe.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2012, 09:56:43 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2012, 09:19:34 AM
Fursatain Mile Jab Bhi  Ranjishein Bhula Dena!!!!
Kaun  Jaane Saanson Ki mohalatein Kahan Tak Hain...!!!



Dil Ka Dard AankhoN mein Le Aaye
Yeh Kyon RishtoN mein Faasle Aaye

Sab Kuch Paakar Bhi, Phir Kho Diya.!!
Apne Haq mein  Jo Kuch Faisle Aaye

Woh Dariya Jo Sabse Khamosh Tha
Aaj Ussi mein  Gehre  Zalzale Aaye

Woh musafir Jo Umar Bhar Tanha Chalta Raha
Peeche Uske Humesha Se Kaafile Aaaye...!!!!

Phulon Se Pucho Kabhi Kanton ki Bhi keemat..!!!!
 Log To Bas Phulon Ki Boli Lagane Chale Aaye

"Khwaish" Nahi Bhoolta Guzre Hue Daur Ko Kabhi!!!
Zindagi Mein Chaahe Laakh Mausam Bure-Bhale Aaye

             
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob khawaish ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2012, 09:57:07 AM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... behad gehre aur umdaa
ashaar kaheN haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... puri kalaam
hi kabil e daad rahi janab... Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2012, 10:12:16 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 07, 2012, 09:19:34 AM
Fursatain Mile Jab Bhi  Ranjishein Bhula Dena!!!!
Kaun  Jaane Saanson Ki mohalatein Kahan Tak Hain...!!!



Dil Ka Dard AankhoN mein Le Aaye
Yeh Kyon RishtoN mein Faasle Aaye
 tearyeyed tearyeyed
Sab Kuch Paakar Bhi, Phir Kho Diya.!!
Apne Haq mein  Jo Kuch Faisle Aaye
  Applause Applause
Woh Dariya Jo Sabse Khamosh Tha
Aaj Ussi mein  Gehre  Zalzale Aaye
waise dariya ki khamoshi aane waale toofan ki alaamat hoti hai
Woh musafir Jo Umar Bhar Tanha Chalta Raha
Peeche Uske Humesha Se Kaafile Aaaye...!!!!
wah wah bahut khoob.....! jise fakeeri milti hai khuda aisi hi izzat deta hai
Phulon Se Pucho Kabhi Kanton ki Bhi keemat..!!!!
 Log To Bas Phulon Ki Boli Lagane Chale Aaye
mindblowing....! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
"Khwaish" Nahi Bhoolta Guzre Hue Daur Ko Kabhi!!!
Zindagi Mein Chaahe Laakh Mausam Bure-Bhale Aaye
sahi hai insaan apne tajurbe se hi seekhta aur aage badhta hai Applause Applause Applause
              
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~[/color][/b]

nice one khawaish ji...!
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2012, 10:42:17 AM »
bahut bahut khoob khwaish bhai.. Usual Smile

hamesha ki tarah ek achhi aur bahut kuchh sikhne wali ghazal.. Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2012, 12:37:45 PM »
bahottt bahottt khoob Khwaish ji--
daad daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2012, 08:03:50 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on March 07, 2012, 09:22:06 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley good keep it up


Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Saheb!!! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2012, 08:07:42 AM »
Bahut khoob . Mubarak ho.
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2012, 08:08:14 AM »
u r really great sir
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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2012, 01:13:43 PM »
Quote from: Satish Shukla on March 07, 2012, 09:45:47 AM
khwaish ji,

waah waah...bahut khoob.

Dili mubaarakbaad hazir hai.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 


Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Satishji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2012, 06:55:58 AM »
Congratulations..

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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 08:03:24 AM »
khwaish ji yehi sawaal dil me halchal kar gaya......... kyun ye faasle aaye kyun hamare lye ye faisle aaye..........
dil chhu gaya har ek shabd aapka........ Usual Smile
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