riste hue zakhm

by mamta bajpai on June 01, 2010, 10:58:28 PM
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RISTE HUE ZAKHM KISKO DIKHANE NIKLE
HAATH ME NAMAK LIYE MALHAM LAGANE NIKLE

BAROODI SURANGON SE UDA DO CHUPPI
AJNABI KAISE TERE GAM SE BEGANE NIKLE

HUM SE BEDARI KA SABAB POOCHNE WALE
AANKHON SE MERI NEEND CHURANE NIKALE

SANGSHARI KA AJAB SHOUQ WAHAN YA RABBA
UNKE HAR NISHANE PE MERI SOU JAANEN NIKLE

MERI TAQDEER KE SOORAJ KO JAGANE WALE
KAM SE KAM JUGNOO SE TO BEHTAR NIKALE
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2010, 03:26:58 AM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 01, 2010, 10:58:28 PM
RISTE HUE ZAKHM KISKO DIKHANE NIKLE
HAATH ME NAMAK LIYE MALHAM LAGANE NIKLE

BAROODI SURANGON SE UDA DO CHUPPI
AJNABI KAISE TERE GAM SE WAQIF NIKLE

MUJH SE BEDARI KA SABAB POOCHNE WALE
AANKHON SE MERI NEEND CHURANE NIKALE

SANGSHARI KA AJAB SHOUQ WAHAN YA RABBA
UNKE HAR NISHANE PE MERI JAAN NIKLE

MERI SOI HUI TAQDEER JAGANE WALA SOORAJ
KAM SE KAM JUGNOO SE BEHTAR NIKALE

meech lee aankhe hame dekh kar aksar usne
jab kabhi bhi hum darde dil use dikhane nikle
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2010, 06:22:22 AM »
Bahut khub Mamta ji, bahut khoobsurti se apne jazbat bayaan kiye hain aapne. Hazaron daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2010, 06:28:54 AM »
Wah wah Mamta ji bahut khoob,aapke bhi likhe ki ek alag andaaz hoti hai.great creation ,beautiful lines by Manoj ji Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2010, 06:54:42 AM »
aayee bahar or kaheen rangat sanwar gayee
hanste hanste mere zakhm  khilane nikale

shukriya Manojji!sur me sur milane ka ye andaz hume pasand aaya. 
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2010, 07:02:36 AM »
RIYAZ BHAI WAQT WAQT PAR AAPKI HOUSLAFZAI SE MERI QALAM KO SABAT MILTA HAI. BAHUT BAHUT DHANYWAD!
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2010, 07:03:31 AM »
SHUKRIYA MADHUJI!
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2010, 07:04:49 AM »
wah mamta saheba kya kahene bahoth qoob ,, dad qubool karen ,, apki shayari naye naye parwaan chadd rahi hai ,, ye sher to bus kya kahiye .. qalam apka daastan hamari ho gayi jaise..


humse bedaari ka sabab puchne wale ..wah wah


duwa go


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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2010, 07:23:09 AM »
SUKRIYA QADEER SAHEB!BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.AAP KO HUMARA QALAAM PASAND AAYA .AAP SE HI BAHUT KUCH SEEKHNE KO MILA HAI USI KI BANGI PESH KI HAI.AAP KA SAATH AISE HI MILTA RAHA TO SHAYRI ME BHI YOON HI RANG BHARTE RAHENGE........
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2010, 10:04:24 AM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 02, 2010, 06:54:42 AM
aayee bahar or kaheen rangat sanwar gayee
hanste hanste mere zakhm  khilane nikale

shukriya Manojji!sur me sur milane ka ye andaz hume pasand
aaya. 
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THANX
JHAKH KE DEKHA JAB BHI USKE DIL ME
MUJSE BHI BADE WO MERE DEWANE NIKLE

BHARTA TO THA DUM NAYE JAMANE KA HONE KA
JAJBAAT MAGER USKE DIL KE WOHI PURANE NIKLE
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2010, 12:22:37 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI       MAMTA BAJPAI JI......

RISTE HUE ZAKHM KOI TO MALAM LAGANE NIKLE
TANHA HUN KABSE KOI TO APNA BANANE NIKLE..
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2010, 04:15:48 PM »
THANKS CARAJI !HAMESHA KI TARAH AAP KA YE ANDAZ NIRALA HAI
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DHOONDHNE MANZIL NIKALE TO DAGAR BHOOL GAYE
JANE KIS DAR PE MUHABBAT KE THIKANE NIKALE
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2010, 12:43:39 PM »
Waah!!!... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji... bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2010, 01:02:56 PM »
klaskar ji thanks a lot but want to know wich one is the best?
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2010, 01:06:12 PM »
u r welcome Mamta ji... saare sher ek se badhkar ek hain... par mujhe pehla sher sabse jyada pasand aaya...!!!
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