Ritu_______________Baadal

by baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
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baadal102
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Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Tadapti jindgi humari yun hi gujarti rahi,

Badla jab bhi mausam fijao ka,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Nikalta raha waqt jhakmo ko bachate hue,
Aah humari yu hi sana.te mai nikalti rahi,

Chikh uthta tha kabhi kabhi andhere mai,
Jab bhi us biti hui ritu ki yaad aate rahi,

KHUDA aabad rakhe us katil ki zindgi,
Jis ki yaad mai har ritu hume jalati rahi,

Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi..............



Baadal
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cara
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2008, 10:44:11 AM »
kya baat hai   baadalji....

jakhmee yaadey mausam badal te hi,
jakham aur taaza karti rahee.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2008, 10:55:55 AM »
bahut ki pyara likha hai aap neh BADAL

Jasbir Singh
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2008, 11:45:56 AM »
thanx a lot cara ji
N
jasbir ji



Baadal
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 11:54:10 AM »
Bohat khoob bayaan hain Badal.... Clapping Smiley

zi.ndaa rahe.n to kyaa hai jo mar jaaye.N ham to kyaa
duniyaa me.n Khaamoshii se guzar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

hastii hii apanii kyaa hai zamaane ke saamane
ek Khvaab hai.n jahaa.N me.n bikhar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

ab kaun mu.ntazir hai hamaare liye vahaa.N
shaam aa ga_ii hai lauT ke ghar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

dil kii Khalish to saath rahegii tamaam umr
dariyaa-e-Gam ke paar utar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

                              -Munir Niazi-
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ANAAM
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2008, 12:26:51 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Tadapti jindgi humari yun hi gujarti rahi,

Badla jab bhi mausam fijao ka,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Nikalta raha waqt jhakmo ko bachate hue,
Aah humari yu hi sana.te mai nikalti rahi,

Chikh uthta tha kabhi kabhi andhere mai,
Jab bhi us biti hui ritu ki yaad aate rahi,

KHUDA aabad rakhe us katil ki zindgi,
Jis ki yaad mai har ritu hume jalati rahi,

Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi..............



Baadal
Wah kya khoob likha hai aapne Badalji...…
“Badla jab bhi mausam fijao ka,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,”
Anaam
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Sonia01
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2008, 01:00:19 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Tadapti jindgi humari yun hi gujarti rahi,

Badla jab bhi mausam fijao ka,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Nikalta raha waqt jhakmo ko bachate hue,
Aah humari yu hi sana.te mai nikalti rahi,

Chikh uthta tha kabhi kabhi andhere mai,
Jab bhi us biti hui ritu ki yaad aate rahi,

KHUDA aabad rakhe us katil ki zindgi,
Jis ki yaad mai har ritu hume jalati rahi,

Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi..............



Baadal

ek behtareen kalam padne mila hai Baadal ji... good very good to read jii..
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 02:27:18 PM »
bahut bahut sukria sajid ji

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 11:54:10 AM
Bohat khoob bayaan hain Badal.... Clapping Smiley

zi.ndaa rahe.n to kyaa hai jo mar jaaye.N ham to kyaa
duniyaa me.n Khaamoshii se guzar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

hastii hii apanii kyaa hai zamaane ke saamane
ek Khvaab hai.n jahaa.N me.n bikhar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

ab kaun mu.ntazir hai hamaare liye vahaa.N
shaam aa ga_ii hai lauT ke ghar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

dil kii Khalish to saath rahegii tamaam umr
dariyaa-e-Gam ke paar utar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

                              -Munir Niazi-

bahut aacha likha hai aap ne sajid ji
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 02:28:07 PM »
bahut bahut sukria Anaam Ji

N

Sonia Ji




Baadal
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2008, 02:08:49 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 10:00:04 AM
Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Tadapti jindgi humari yun hi gujarti rahi,

Badla jab bhi mausam fijao ka,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Nikalta raha waqt jhakmo ko bachate hue,
Aah humari yu hi sana.te mai nikalti rahi,

Chikh uthta tha kabhi kabhi andhere mai,
Jab bhi us biti hui ritu ki yaad aate rahi,

KHUDA aabad rakhe us katil ki zindgi,
Jis ki yaad mai har ritu hume jalati rahi,

Ek ritu aati rahi ek ritu jaate rahi,
Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi,

Har baar hawa jakhm or tazza karti rahi..............



Baadal
Nice Baadal Ji
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baadal102
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2008, 05:08:10 AM »
thanx a lot RAJESH JI



Baadal
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 06:06:51 AM »
  Applause Applause

Bohat khoob baadal ji..

Bohat khoob Sajid ji nice sharing...
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baadal102
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 06:44:20 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 30, 2008, 06:06:51 AM
  Applause Applause

Bohat khoob baadal ji..

Bohat khoob Sajid ji nice sharing...


sukria honey ji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 11:39:47 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 11:54:10 AM
Bohat khoob bayaan hain Badal.... Clapping Smiley

zi.ndaa rahe.n to kyaa hai jo mar jaaye.N ham to kyaa
duniyaa me.n Khaamoshii se guzar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

hastii hii apanii kyaa hai zamaane ke saamane
ek Khvaab hai.n jahaa.N me.n bikhar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

ab kaun mu.ntazir hai hamaare liye vahaa.N
shaam aa ga_ii hai lauT ke ghar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

dil kii Khalish to saath rahegii tamaam umr
dariyaa-e-Gam ke paar utar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

                              -Munir Niazi-


WAH KYA BAAT HAI GHAYEL, VERY NICE


JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 11:53:03 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 11:54:10 AM
Bohat khoob bayaan hain Badal.... Clapping Smiley

zi.ndaa rahe.n to kyaa hai jo mar jaaye.N ham to kyaa
duniyaa me.n Khaamoshii se guzar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

hastii hii apanii kyaa hai zamaane ke saamane
ek Khvaab hai.n jahaa.N me.n bikhar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

ab kaun mu.ntazir hai hamaare liye vahaa.N
shaam aa ga_ii hai lauT ke ghar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

dil kii Khalish to saath rahegii tamaam umr
dariyaa-e-Gam ke paar utar jaaye.N ham to kyaa

                              -Munir Niazi-
Nice sharing Ghayel Ji
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