ro diya

by salil2002 on October 11, 2008, 03:46:27 PM
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aaj peene laga tha woh yun shaam se
dard chhalka hua tha jaise ek jaam se
tha nasha oosme kuch mein bhi kho sa gaya
yaad kar k mujhe woh aaj ro hi diya

roya main bhi magar kucch main kar na saka
hoon main ek rooh usko baahon mein bhar na saka
dekha maine oose mujhse fariyaad karte huye
tumse shikwa nahin yeh main keh na saka

ro pada jab mein bhiuske saath mein
sun k meri siskiyon ko woh tha ghabra gaya
jaane kya noor tha mohabbat mein meri
main yun kaise oosko nazar aa gaya

bhar k chehra phir uska apne haathon main
uski laton ko chehre se hataya maine
choom liye maine lab uske aur ashq poonchhe
main ab bhi karta hun tujhse mohabbat ye bataya maine

mein ab tujhe aur kucch de nahin sakta
mein ek saaya hoon roshni mein rehnahin sakta
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 04:10:20 PM »
Bahoot Badiya salil Bhaijaan,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2008, 05:32:53 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 11, 2008, 03:46:27 PM
aaj peene laga tha woh yun shaam se
dard chhalka hua tha jaise ek jaam se
tha nasha oosme kuch mein bhi kho sa gaya
yaad kar k mujhe woh aaj ro hi diya

roya main bhi magar kucch main kar na saka
hoon main ek rooh usko baahon mein bhar na saka
dekha maine oose mujhse fariyaad karte huye
tumse shikwa nahin yeh main keh na saka

ro pada jab mein bhiuske saath mein
sun k meri siskiyon ko woh tha ghabra gaya
jaane kya noor tha mohabbat mein meri
main yun kaise oosko nazar aa gaya

bhar k chehra phir uska apne haathon main
uski laton ko chehre se hataya maine
choom liye maine lab uske aur ashq poonchhe
main ab bhi karta hun tujhse mohabbat ye bataya maine

mein ab tujhe aur kucch de nahin sakta
mein ek saaya hoon roshni mein reh nahin sakta





Bohot Khoob Salil...Bohot achcha likha hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2008, 06:42:29 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 11, 2008, 03:46:27 PM
aaj peene laga tha woh yun shaam se
dard chhalka hua tha jaise ek jaam se
tha nasha oosme kuch mein bhi kho sa gaya
yaad kar k mujhe woh aaj ro hi diya

roya main bhi magar kucch main kar na saka
hoon main ek rooh usko baahon mein bhar na saka
dekha maine oose mujhse fariyaad karte huye
tumse shikwa nahin yeh main keh na saka

ro pada jab mein bhiuske saath mein
sun k meri siskiyon ko woh tha ghabra gaya
jaane kya noor tha mohabbat mein meri
main yun kaise oosko nazar aa gaya

bhar k chehra phir uska apne haathon main
uski laton ko chehre se hataya maine
choom liye maine lab uske aur ashq poonchhe
main ab bhi karta hun tujhse mohabbat ye bataya maine

mein ab tujhe aur kucch de nahin sakta
mein ek saaya hoon roshni mein rehnahin sakta





nice one salil....
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2008, 05:43:14 AM »
thnks janasheen bhai ..........
talat di and pandit bhai
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2008, 08:40:54 AM »
U Are Welcome Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 06:54:40 AM »
nice creation salil ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 02:19:13 PM »
apna dard aaj tumne jo sunaya muje
kitna ghayel hain ghayel yaad dilaya muje
woh aakhri bosa labo ka hum bhi bhule nahi
aye salil par woh manzar q yaad dilaya muje.

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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2008, 09:29:34 AM »
Nice One Sajid Bhai,.
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2008, 10:38:40 AM »
Salil Miyan,
Kaafi dard bhari shayiri hai. Keep writing likewise.
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2008, 12:30:26 PM »
Rona Chahoon Bhi, To Mujhe Rona Nahi Aata,.
Sookh Gaye Ab To Aansoon Bhi, Teri Nafrat Ki Aag Me,.

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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2008, 12:44:07 PM »
o yaar kya baat kehdi tune dil ki ajeeb si kaifiyat ho gayee hain  BangHead
Quote from: Jaanasheen on October 16, 2008, 12:30:26 PM
Rona Chahoon Bhi, To Mujhe Rona Nahi Aata,.
Sookh Gaye Ab To Aansoon Bhi, Teri Nafrat Ki Aag Me,.

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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2008, 12:59:09 PM »
Thank U Dost,.
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2008, 01:02:00 PM »
Rone Ka Mujhe Saleekha Bhi Nahi Aata,.
Dard Bayaan Karne Ka Tareekha Bhi Nahi Aata,.

Tum Dard Bayaan Karke, Mehfilon Mein Jaan Daalte Ho,.
Aur Hume Mehfilon Mein Kuch Kehne Ka Hausla Bhi Nahi Aata,.

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«Reply #14 on: October 16, 2008, 01:04:36 PM »
oye bas kar yaar aaj sari dard ki dukan apne andar samet ke aaya hain kya aise aise sher likh raha hain ke ek ek zakhm hara ho raha hain main bhi shuru ho jaooga kasam se itna rulaoogan ke mahino hasi nahi aayeegi
Quote from: Jaanasheen on October 16, 2008, 01:02:00 PM
Rone Ka Mujhe Saleekha Bhi Nahi Aata,.
Dard Bayaan Karne Ka Tareekha Bhi Nahi Aata,.

Tum Dard Bayaan Karke, Mehfilon Mein Jaan Daalte Ho,.
Aur Hume Mehfilon Mein Kuch Kehne Ka Hausla Bhi Nahi Aata,.

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