ro gaye...

by dua.. on October 05, 2006, 01:07:24 PM
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kisse panno mein kho gaye,
kwaab raato mein so gaye,
tanha tab bhi tha,
tanha aaj bhi hoon,
bachi thi khushiya,
wo mere gum dhek kar ro gaye...

mere aansoowo ki kimat laga baithe aap,
aap chiraag the ujjalo mein kho gaye,
"DUA" thi aapki jo khushi se dafan hue,
warna ek hum hi the jo muskura kar ro gaye.............!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2006, 04:13:45 PM »
Wonderful Dua !

A warm welcome to Yoindia.
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2006, 05:33:02 PM »
bahot  khoob.........  Dua..........  nice  sharing........   ur  welcome  to Yoindia........
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2006, 08:32:35 AM »
aansoowo se to ab dillagi hai humari,
waqt bewaqt ne majboor kar diya,
dard se aah nikili "DUA" bankar,
kuch ne khoobsoorat kah diya,
to kuch ne bahut khoob kah diya............!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2006, 08:40:04 AM »
Dua

Superb ! =D>

Yoindia par aap ka swaagat hai !

Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2006, 12:06:39 PM »
wow amazing...dua thts js amazing!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2006, 12:12:47 PM »
amazing dua...!!

jab bhar aya di unki yaad se,
humne ankhon k zariye izhaar kar diya.....
kucch ne ansu kaha,
to kucch ne paani kahdiya...
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2006, 02:54:57 PM »
thanx aap sabhi logo ka aap logo ke wajah se hi mein is kaabil hua hu bas aap ka pyaar milta rahe baaki bache mere gum to wo to aap ke saamne hai....
kya kasoor hain in aankho ka,
gunahgaar to ye ZUBA hai,
dard aankho se bahe to pani hai,
dil jab roye "DUA" hai.....
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2006, 03:08:14 PM »
Dua

Too good once again !

I liked this line very much...

dil jab roye "DUA" hai.....[/i][/size][/color]
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2006, 03:13:55 PM »
superbb Dua...

kehte hain ki gum ki koi zubaan nahi hoti
magar ek yahi ehsaas hai jo har tarah se bolta hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2006, 03:15:45 PM »
thanx raajbeer ji..........

mujhe aur bhi khusi hoti agar aap aise hi kuch saayari mein kah diye hote,aap ki saaayriya mujhe bahut pasand hain.........
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2006, 03:24:39 PM »
tanx nikki ji........bahut khoob kaha aapne ki "ahsaas hi har tarah se bolta hai....iskeliye ye do maamuli sabd

ehsaas hai tabhi hum hai,
ehsaas hai tabhi ap hai,
kho naa doo aapko,
iska bhi ek raaz  hai,
sunaane ko to bahut kuch,
suna sakte hain hum,
ye ehsaas ki "DUA" hai,
jo khaamosh ye zuba hain......
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2006, 03:54:07 PM »
very  nice  work  Dua.....and Nikki........:lol:
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2006, 04:19:56 PM »
thanx Waheed tum bhi likho na...

koi to baat hogi jo hum chup hain
kuch to hai dil mein jo aankhein bolti hain
koi to hai jise dekhe bina raha nahi jaata
kissi ki to yaad mein yeh dil rota hai
magar uss bewafa ko kuch bhi nazar nahi aata
jab bhi milta hai apne hi jahaan mein magan hota hai
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2006, 04:35:17 PM »
ur  welcome  Nikki......   nice  again.....  yaar.aaj  sir  dukh  raha hia....kal  so nahi paaya  tha.  :oops:

Tumhare  ishq mein  hum jaan  haar jayenge
tumhara kuch na bigdega hausala rakho........
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