Rokar to dekh le........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 07:10:50 AM
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Mit jaoogan main kasam hain aa mita ke dekh le
Mera yeh wada bhi aaj, aazma ke dekh le

Ab koi gunah nahi deedar-e-yaar mein
Janaza uthne ko hain, aa mera chehra to dekhle

Tere diye hue zakhm karte hain teri aarzoo
Dard ho jaye thoda kam, aa mere zakhmo ko dekh le

Shehar-e-khamosha* me ab karte hain basera
Mehmaa_n na bano mana, par mera ghar to dekh le

Khud ko dete ho fareb haskar, GHAYEL ki  maut pe
Tere dard ki gawahi tere askh tuje dege, tu ek baar rokar to dekh le

                                     -Sajid Ghayel-      

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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2009, 07:25:04 AM »
bahut hi ummda likha hai bhai............

koi bahayega meri maut par aansu
koi toh meri maiyaat ko kaandha bhi dega
koi toh dafana dega mujhe sukoon se
kya yeh koi bhi kabhi mujhe haasil hoga
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2009, 07:28:03 AM »
arre wah sajid bhai kahan chupa rakha tha itna dard jo duniya ko baha le jaye !! mere dost tumne khuch aisa likh diya ke marne wala bhi is sada se ut jaye !! kya likha mere bhai allah apko izzat bakshe !!

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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2009, 10:10:44 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 07:10:50 AM
Mit jaoogan main kasam hain aa mita ke dekh le
Mera yeh wada bhi aaj, aazma ke dekh le

Ab koi gunah nahi deedar-e-yaar mein
Janaza uthne ko hain, aa mera chehra to dekhle

Tere diye hue zakhm karte hain teri aarzoo
Dard ho jaye thoda kam, aa mere zakhmo ko dekh le

Shehar-e-khamosha* me ab karte hain basera
Mehmaa_n na bano mana, par mera ghar to dekh le

Khud ko dete ho fareb haskar, GHAYEL ki  maut pe
Tere dard ki gawahi tere askh tuje dege, tu ek baar rokar to dekh le

                                     -Sajid Ghayel-      

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Waah Wah,.
Subhan Allah,.
sajid Bhaiya,.

Nice One Yaara,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2009, 10:12:40 AM »
Hazaaron Bastiyaan Aakar, Bas Gayi Tujhme Aye "Shehar-e-Khamosha,.
Phir Bhi Dekh Tere Shehar Ki Veeraani Nahi Jaati,.

_____________________________-Sharfu Bhai-
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2009, 10:15:56 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 07:10:50 AM
Mit jaoogan main kasam hain aa mita ke dekh le
Mera yeh wada bhi aaj, aazma ke dekh le

Ab koi gunah nahi deedar-e-yaar mein
Janaza uthne ko hain, aa mera chehra to dekhle

Tere diye hue zakhm karte hain teri aarzoo
Dard ho jaye thoda kam, aa mere zakhmo ko dekh le

Shehar-e-khamosha* me ab karte hain basera
Mehmaa_n na bano mana, par mera ghar to dekh le

Khud ko dete ho fareb haskar, GHAYEL ki  maut pe
Tere dard ki gawahi tere askh tuje dege, tu ek baar rokar to dekh le

                                     -Sajid Ghayel-      

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Wah wah! kya bat hai Sajid ji, bohat hi acha likha hai aap ne. Itna dard bhara sher, dil ki gehraiyon ko chu gaya!
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2009, 11:15:25 AM »
kya dard hai   gayelji....

tere sang toh nahin banpaya apne sapno ka ghar,
par tere zakhmon ne diya hai,aaj shehar-e-khamosha me ghar.

ab toh mera janaaza uthne ko hai,dil se na sahi,
duniyawallo ko dikhane ke liye,aakhri bar aakar toh dekh.

tu baharse bahut kush toh hai,apne kiye hue GAYEL ki mout pe,
par ander tu roti hai,jara aankho se rokar toh dekh.
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2009, 12:27:44 PM »
Each and every word beautiful..
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2009, 12:31:23 PM »
Muskurahaton ki ladiyon ko ashqon ke moti me bikharta dekhle,
Meri rooh ki Khaamosh si sadaon ko zara bilakhta hua dekh le,

Diye shayad bujh bhi jaaye par tu gam na kar aye sanam,
dilme chhupa harek armaan jalake apne aqs ko dekh le...
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2009, 01:13:45 PM »
Sajid,

Wah bro kya behtareen kalam pesh kiya hai Applause Applause Applause

Superb Thumbs UP

Good work by other friends also Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2009, 02:14:05 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:25:04 AM
bahut hi ummda likha hai bhai............

koi bahayega meri maut par aansu
koi toh meri maiyaat ko kaandha bhi dega
koi toh dafana dega mujhe sukoon se
kya yeh koi bhi kabhi mujhe haasil hoga

Bohat shukriyaan Salil and Beautiful reply

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 10, 2009, 07:28:03 AM
arre wah sajid bhai kahan chupa rakha tha itna dard jo duniya ko baha le jaye !! mere dost tumne khuch aisa likh diya ke marne wala bhi is sada se ut jaye !! kya likha mere bhai allah apko izzat bakshe !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Arey mere dost itni izzat na do bas koshish ki hain aapke mohabbat ke meyaar me khara utru aur ghayel hain to dard bhi hoga. Bas isi tarah aapki dua rahe zindagi me aur kya chahiye.

Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 10, 2009, 10:12:40 AM
Hazaaron Bastiyaan Aakar, Bas Gayi Tujhme Aye "Shehar-e-Khamosha,.
Phir Bhi Dekh Tere Shehar Ki Veeraani Nahi Jaati,.

_____________________________-Sharfu Bhai-

Bohat shukriyaan chote for Tareef and this beautiful sharing.

Quote from: Blue_angel on January 10, 2009, 10:15:56 AM
Wah wah! kya bat hai Sajid ji, bohat hi acha likha hai aap ne. Itna dard bhara sher, dil ki gehraiyon ko chu gaya!

Mere sher Tumhare kam aaye yeh meri khushnasibi hain dost thank you.

Quote from: cara on January 10, 2009, 11:15:25 AM
kya dard hai   gayelji....

tere sang toh nahin banpaya apne sapno ka ghar,
par tere zakhmon ne diya hai,aaj shehar-e-khamosha me ghar.

ab toh mera janaaza uthne ko hai,dil se na sahi,
duniyawallo ko dikhane ke liye,aakhri bar aakar toh dekh.

tu baharse bahut kush toh hai,apne kiye hue GAYEL ki mout pe,
par ander tu roti hai,jara aankho se rokar toh dekh.



Thank you very much Cara tumhare shero ne to is dard me aur maza daal diya very good

Quote from: angel4u on January 10, 2009, 12:31:23 PM
Muskurahaton ki ladiyon ko ashqon ke moti me bikharta dekhle,
Meri rooh ki Khaamosh si sadaon ko zara bilakhta hua dekh le,

Diye shayad bujh bhi jaaye par tu gam na kar aye sanam,
dilme chhupa harek armaan jalake apne aqs ko dekh le...

Apne ID ke mutabik tumhari shaksiyat aur sher hain angel may god always bless u

Quote from: Rajbir on January 10, 2009, 01:13:45 PM
Sajid,

Wah bro kya behtareen kalam pesh kiya hai Applause Applause Applause

Superb Thumbs UP

Good work by other friends also Applause

Thank You dost for supporting my work always
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2009, 02:33:04 PM »
Quote from: cara on January 10, 2009, 11:15:25 AM
kya dard hai   gayelji....

tere sang toh nahin banpaya apne sapno ka ghar,
par tere zakhmon ne diya hai,aaj shehar-e-khamosha me ghar.

ab toh mera janaaza uthne ko hai,dil se na sahi,
duniyawallo ko dikhane ke liye,aakhri bar aakar toh dekh.

tu baharse bahut kush toh hai,apne kiye hue GAYEL ki mout pe,
par ander tu roti hai,jara aankho se rokar toh dekh.


Cara aapne bahut accha likha hai..
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2009, 02:57:44 PM »
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Apne ID ke mutabik tumhari shaksiyat aur sher hain angel may god always bless u

Thanks...
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2009, 04:39:46 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 07:10:50 AM
Mit jaoogan main kasam hain aa mita ke dekh le
Mera yeh wada bhi aaj, aazma ke dekh le

Ab koi gunah nahi deedar-e-yaar mein
Janaza uthne ko hain, aa mera chehra to dekhle

Tere diye hue zakhm karte hain teri aarzoo
Dard ho jaye thoda kam, aa mere zakhmo ko dekh le

Shehar-e-khamosha* me ab karte hain basera
Mehmaa_n na bano mana, par mera ghar to dekh le

Khud ko dete ho fareb haskar, GHAYEL ki  maut pe
Tere dard ki gawahi tere askh tuje dege, tu ek baar rokar to dekh le

                                     -Sajid Ghayel-      

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Wonderful  Applause superb  Applause and very touchy lines Sajid ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2009, 04:35:38 AM »
Quote from: Roja on January 10, 2009, 04:39:46 PM
Wonderful  Applause superb  Applause and very touchy lines Sajid ji

Thank u very much Roja
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