Rone ki chahat.... manju

by manjum on June 11, 2011, 05:34:01 AM
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Gale mil ke ik baar rone ki chahat.
Tera bhi daaman bhigone ki chahat.

Gahara samandar jo faila hai har sun'
Tere gham main khud ko dubone ki chahat.

Khud apne hi hatho qatal ho rahe hain,
khud ko hi khanzar chubhone ki chahat.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2011, 06:20:39 AM »
boht khoob manjum ji kuch apni si lagi lines .

Likhte rahie khush rahie
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 06:32:45 AM »
Manjum Ji,

Achchha hai...samundar jaisee gahraaee hai
aapke khayalon men.

Kahte rahiye..hamari shubhkaamnaayen apke
saath hain.

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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 07:06:55 AM »
Kam lines kafi kuch keh dena..
bahaut khoob Manju jee..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2011, 08:09:33 AM »
saanso me tujhko basane ki chahat
tere daaman me khud ko chupane ki chahat…
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manju ji…
aap ke iss kalaam par hum koi daad nahi denge…
sirf dua karenge ki…
aapko kabhi rona na pade
aap khus rahen
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 08:22:12 AM »
Jab dard lafzon mein bayaan Ho Jaaye To Woh daad Ke Kaabil Ho Jaata Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Anjuji..Huemsha Khush Rahe..

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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 12:05:52 PM »
Quote from: manjum on June 11, 2011, 05:34:01 AM
Gale mil ke ik baar rone ki chahat.
Tera bhi daaman bhigone ki chahat.

Gahara samandar jo faila hai har sun'
Tere gham main khud ko dubone ki chahat.

Khud apne hi hatho qatal ho rahe hain,
khud ko hi khanzar chubhone ki chahat.

manju "mann"


Very Touching ... Very Nice Creation ... Manjum Ji !

dil se daad qubuul KareN ... ! aise hi likhti rahen ... !
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2011, 02:07:29 PM »
excellent creation di...
sply 1st one...
simply superb..
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2011, 04:04:16 PM »
wah Kya Baat Hai Manjum Ji... Dard Ko Lafzon Me Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Last Wala Sher to Qasam se Jaan Hi Le gaya.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2011, 07:25:38 PM »
Quote from: manjum on June 11, 2011, 05:34:01 AM

Khud apne hi hatho qatal ho rahe hain,
khud ko hi khanzar chubhone ki chahat.


Wah. Kya baat hai.
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2011, 10:29:32 PM »
Quote from: manjum on June 11, 2011, 05:34:01 AM
Gale mil ke ik baar rone ki chahat.
Tera bhi daaman bhigone ki chahat.

Gahara samandar jo faila hai har sun'
Tere gham main khud ko dubone ki chahat.

Khud apne hi hatho qatal ho rahe hain,
khud ko hi khanzar chubhone ki chahat.

manju "mann"


Bahut khoob Manjum Ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2011, 04:18:15 AM »
WAH MANJUM JI KHUD KO KHANJAR CHUBANE KI CHAHT....BAHUT KHOOB.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2011, 06:51:42 PM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2011, 07:14:10 PM »
Khoob manju mann ji.
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manjum
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2011, 03:26:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sahilji....

sath rahiega.......
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