Roshni Se Door Raha,.

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Har Khushi Se Door Raha, Apni Zindagi Se Door Raha,.
Andheron Ki Giraft Mein Hoon Kuch Is Taraah,.
Ujaala Sirf Khayaal Tha, Saari Umr Roshni Se Door Raha,.

Wo Meri Sirf "Aarzu Thi, Kisi Aur Ki Haqeeqat "Azeem,.
Jise Paane Ki Sabse Badi Chahat Thi, Usi Se Door Raha,.

Seekhaaya Maine Sabko Chahne Ka Naya Andaaz "Azeem,.
Dil Jabse Toota Mera, Pyaar Mohabbat Aashiqi Se Door Raha,.

Hasne Ka Gungunaane Ka Shauq Main Bhi Rakha Karta Tha,.
Sazaa Jo Mili Is Adaa Ki, Us Din Se Main Hasi Se Door Raha,.

Ek Baar Chaand Ko Aankh Bharke Dekhne Ki Ye Sazaa Mili "Azeem,.
Har Raat Tadapta Raha, Umar Bhar Main Chaandni Se Door Raha,.


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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2009, 10:52:46 AM »
Subhanallah
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kya khoob likha hai Azeem
lafz bhi kho rahe hain aapke is kalaam ki tareef mein...
maaf kijiyega... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2009, 12:47:53 PM »
Har raat main tadapta raha, Umar bhar main chandni se door raha....Bohat khoob Azeem  Clapping Smiley

Ek dard mere seene me bhi hain zindagi bhar apne rab ki aur apne rasool ki nafarmani ki hain, aaj bohat sharmindgi hoti hain apne aap se apne wajood se.


Paach waqta hoti rahi Azaa.N, mera rab deta raha aawaz
Kabhi maikado me raha kabhi mehfilo me raha, main masjido se door raha

Bhool gaya main qurbaniyo apne pyaare nabi aur sahaba ki
Amal shaitaan ka raha yaad, main sunnato se door raha

-SG-

Bas chote aur likhne ki himmat nahi hain...
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2009, 12:54:52 PM »
Wah Azeem bahoot khoob likha hai. har sher ak gehri baat keh raha hai.. SubanAllah

bahoot Khoob likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi..
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2009, 02:01:08 PM »
Quote from: diya786 on May 09, 2009, 10:52:46 AM
Subhanallah
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kya khoob likha hai Azeem
lafz bhi kho rahe hain aapke is kalaam ki tareef mein...
maaf kijiyega... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohat Bohat Shukriya Kashish Ji,
Thank U,.
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2009, 02:02:20 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 09, 2009, 12:47:53 PM
Har raat main tadapta raha, Umar bhar main chandni se door raha....Bohat khoob Azeem  Clapping Smiley

Ek dard mere seene me bhi hain zindagi bhar apne rab ki aur apne rasool ki nafarmani ki hain, aaj bohat sharmindgi hoti hain apne aap se apne wajood se.


Paach waqta hoti rahi Azaa.N, mera rab deta raha aawaz
Kabhi maikado me raha kabhi mehfilo me raha, main masjido se door raha

Bhool gaya main qurbaniyo apne pyaare nabi aur sahaba ki
Amal shaitaan ka raha yaad, main sunnato se door raha

-SG-

Bas chote aur likhne ki himmat nahi hain...

Subhan Allah Kya Sachchi Baat Kahi Hai, Actually Mera Bhi Yahi Haal Hai, Rab Hume Maaf Kare, Aur Naik Hidayat De Aameen,.
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2009, 02:04:17 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on May 09, 2009, 12:54:52 PM
Wah Azeem bahoot khoob likha hai. har sher ak gehri baat keh raha hai.. SubanAllah

bahoot Khoob likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi..

Shukriya Sophi, Jo Sheron Mein Se Gehraai Nikaali Tumne,.

Thank U,.
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2009, 02:04:59 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on May 09, 2009, 01:39:16 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  waah behad acha likha hai aapne Azeem..har ash'aar behatareen aur Sajid bhai aapne bhi bahot umda likha hai..

Shukriya Kaash Bhai,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 02:17:56 PM »
bahoot khoob lil bro....

Good lines Sajid..
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2009, 02:21:37 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 09, 2009, 02:17:56 PM
bahoot khoob lil bro....

Good lines Sajid..

Shukriya Didi,.
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2009, 02:24:28 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Azeem Bhai.. Huemsha ki Tarah Lajawab PeshKash Hai.... Lafzon Ko Behad khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Really Great Work.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2009, 02:34:56 PM »
Quote from: Mann on May 09, 2009, 02:24:28 PM
Wah Kya Baat hai Azeem Bhai.. Huemsha ki Tarah Lajawab PeshKash Hai.... Lafzon Ko Behad khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Really Great Work.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya Vikas Bhai, Bas Duaa Karein,.
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2009, 04:07:33 PM »
Very Nice Azeem
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2009, 04:34:33 PM »
Bahut accha likha aapne Azeem. All lines touched my heart. Good work  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2009, 03:27:48 AM »
very nice,excellent ,azeem ji and sajid ji.
aap dono bahut acha likhte ho.
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