Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on April 24, 2010, 09:36:16 PM
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Roti hui aakho ko, hasaya bohat hain
Yeh hunar humne khud par, aazmaya bohat hain

Jhopdi gareeb ki, kehti hain sisak_kar
Pasina mera mehlo ke, kaam aaya bohat hain

Mere zakhmo ne mujhko, aur zaheen kar diya
Thokro ne zindagi ki, samjhaya bohat hain

Apno se bichad kar hum, khud hi se jo mile
Q lage wajood apna, paraya bohat hain

Kaise na koi rota, uski turbat pe pohachkar
Ghayel ne zamane ko, hasaya bohat hain

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 09:40:26 PM »
Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 09:42:05 PM »
Bahut khoob Sajid ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 09:57:39 PM »
Mashallah Bohat Achchi Nazm Hai Sajid Bhai, SubHan Allah Har Lafz Dard Aur Sachchaai Mein Doooba Hai,.

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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 06:03:03 AM »
Wah kya baat hai        Sajid_Ghayal ji.....

Auron ko khushiya di bohat hai
khud ko dard me jeena sikhaya bohat hai
khud rokar zamaane ko hasaya bohat hai
GHAYEL ne apna har gam dabaya bohat hai....
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 08:06:46 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji.heart touching creation.kamaal ke likhte ho.great lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 11:16:21 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 02:42:36 PM »
Roti hui aakho ko, hasaya bohat hain
Yeh hunar humne khud par, aazmaya bohat hain

Jhopdi gareeb ki, kehti hain sisak_kar
Pasina mera mehlo ke, kaam aaya bohat hain

Mere zakhmo ne mujhko, aur zaheen kar diya
Thokro ne zindagi ki, samjhaya bohat hain

Apno se bichad kar hum, khud hi se jo mile
Q lage wajood apna, paraya bohat hain

Kaise na koi rota, uski turbat pe pohachkar
Ghayel ne zamane ko, hasaya bohat hain

Sajid Ghayel

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai..

Bhaut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2010, 01:59:58 PM »
Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji

Badi meharbani Rajesh Bhai............
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 02:29:00 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob Sajid Ji.. Lafzon Ko Jazzbaaton Se jod Behad Khubsoorati se is Rachna Me Piroya Hai aapne... Yehi Is Qalaam Ki khubsoorati Hai.. bahut Hi lajawab Peshkash Hai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2010, 05:01:53 PM »
viry nic sajid bhai
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 08:39:03 PM »
Bahut khoob Sajid ji...!!!

Nawazish Karam Klaskar Jee...........
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2010, 08:37:16 AM »
Mashallah Bohat Achchi Nazm Hai Sajid Bhai, SubHan Allah Har Lafz Dard Aur Sachchaai Mein Doooba Hai,.

Behtareen Peshkash

Badi meharbani Chote, ab to tum bhi masha_allah itna achcha likhne lage ho ke tumhari daad paker ab double khushi hoti hai ek to chote bhai ne daad di aur ek itne achche shayer ne daad di........
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2010, 06:02:56 PM »
BEHTREEN GHAZAL S_G Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2010, 05:49:57 PM »
Wah kya baat hai        Sajid_Ghayal ji.....

Auron ko khushiya di bohat hai
khud ko dard me jeena sikhaya bohat hai
khud rokar zamaane ko hasaya bohat hai
GHAYEL ne apna har gam dabaya bohat hai....

Kya kahe CARA jee aap haqeeqat me ek bemisaal shaksiyat hai, jis andaz me aapne aaj tak is mehfil me rang bhara hai woh apne aap me ek kamaal hai. Thank you so much for your support and this beautiful addition in my thread.

GOD BLESS YOU
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