roti ke khwaab

by Neel1525 on February 06, 2010, 04:06:45 PM
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zulm ki aag me dehak raha hai makaan desh ka
shishey ke ghar me kaid hai har insaan desh ka

dhansa dhansa ke teer jism-o-jigar me benawaaon ke
lagta hai jaise gir gaya hai imaan desh ka

kehne ko to chidiya hai soney ki hind apna
roti ke khwaab dekhta hai har insaan desh ka...

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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 06:21:53 PM »
WAAAAAAAAH WAAAAAAH WAAAAAAH VERI NAAAAICE NEEL Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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drpandey
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 07:02:35 PM »
zulm ki aag me dehak raha hai makaan desh ka
shishey ke ghar me kaid hai har insaan desh ka

dhansa dhansa ke teer jism-o-jigar me benawaaon ke
lagta hai jaise gir gaya hai imaan desh ka

kehne ko to chidiya hai soney ki hind apna
roti ke khwaab dekhta hai har insaan desh ka...

Neel ji desh ki es buniyadi jarurat per kisi ki nazar badi mushkil se padti hai..mujhe lagta hai ki aise masley per likhna aasan nahin hota. Aisi jadeed shayari ki bahot jarurat hai keep on..I wish you all the best.
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malli
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 09:23:46 AM »
zulm ki aag me dehak raha hai makaan desh ka
shishey ke ghar me kaid hai har insaan desh ka

dhansa dhansa ke teer jism-o-jigar me benawaaon ke
lagta hai jaise gir gaya hai imaan desh ka

kehne ko to chidiya hai soney ki hind apna
roti ke khwaab dekhta hai har insaan desh ka...




wah wah.. kya khoob kaha aapne... bahut good. excellant  Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 04:22:23 PM »
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Neel JI ApplauseApplauseApplause
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sbechain
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 10:27:18 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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