Roya nahi hu main.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 08:50:34 AM
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Kabhi kismat se kabhi duniya se darta raha hu main
Jaise bhi ho saka zinda raha hu main

Shayed mile hum kabhi bichde jaha par the
Is ummeed me aaj bhi, us mukam par khada hu main

Aa dekhle mujme tu apni khoobiyaan
Mujme mera ab kuch nahi, tera aaiina hu main

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

                            -Sajid Ghayel-
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2008, 09:25:01 AM »
waaaah very nice.. very nice line, ghayel ..

sab kuch tou mera loot gya, par roya nahi hoon  mai..
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 10:10:12 AM »
Sajid

Too good bro Applause

Ek ek line full of emotions hai Thumbs UP
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2008, 10:48:38 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 08:50:34 AM
Kabhi kismat se kabhi duniya se darta raha hu main
Jaise bhi ho saka zinda raha hu main

Shayed mile hum kabhi bichde jaha par the
Is ummeed me aaj bhi, us mukam par khada hu main

Aa dekhle mujme tu apni khoobiyaan
Mujme mera ab kuch nahi, tera aaiina hu main

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

                            -Sajid Ghayel-

bahut bahut umda likha hai Sajid sahab
kamaal kar diya aapne
kuch likhne ke liye alfaaz hi nahin mil rahe
bahut khoob!!! Applause Applause Applause
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2008, 11:07:06 AM »
bahut khoob  gayelji...

is kadar tere pyaar mein dub gaya hun mein,
tuj mein hi samakar tera aaina ban gaya hun mein .
tut gaya hun, loot gaya hun, hogaya hun mein gayel,
yakeen hai tu aayegi,isiliye zinda hun, roya nahin hu mein.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 11:08:01 AM »
bahut hi badiya, bahut hi khoob ghayel

jasbir singh
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 11:13:58 AM »
Alam Rajbir Diya Cara and Jasbir aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriyaa dosto and Cara beautiful lines by you very good.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2008, 11:37:23 AM »
Quote from: cara on December 30, 2008, 11:07:06 AM
bahut khoob  gayelji...

is kadar tere pyaar mein dub gaya hun mein,
tuj mein hi samakar tera aaina ban gaya hun mein .
tut gaya hun, loot gaya hun, hogaya hun mein gayel,
yakeen hai tu aayegi,isiliye zinda hun, roya nahin hu mein.



BAHUT HI SUNDER KAHA AAP NEH CARA


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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2008, 11:40:35 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 08:50:34 AM
Kabhi kismat se kabhi duniya se darta raha hu main
Jaise bhi ho saka zinda raha hu main

Shayed mile hum kabhi bichde jaha par the
Is ummeed me aaj bhi, us mukam par khada hu main

Aa dekhle mujme tu apni khoobiyaan
Mujme mera ab kuch nahi, tera aaiina hu main

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

                            -Sajid Ghayel-
Yeh bhi khoob rahi Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2008, 02:25:54 PM »
 Applause Applause

Wah wah Sajid ji kitna dard bhara kalam likha hai aapne...



Dil pe pehle unka pehra tha
Daman humne bhi unse bachaya tha

Dil ke haathon se woh bhi majboor hain
Isliye dil se dil milne ka intezaar hain


__________honeyrose________
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2008, 02:46:25 PM »
Bohat shukriyaab Rajesh and Honey. And good lines honey.
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 02:56:54 PM »
Bahot Khoob Sajid Bhaiya,.
And Jaya Didi,.

Yunhi Likhte Rakhiye,.
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 06:13:55 PM »
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bahoot khoob SG, EK EK Line kamal ki likhi hai apne... magar yah last ki 6 lines to bahot he achi lagi:

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 06:24:33 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 30, 2008, 02:25:54 PM
Applause Applause

Wah wah Sajid ji kitna dard bhara kalam likha hai aapne...



Dil pe pehle unka pehra tha
Daman humne bhi unse bachaya tha

Dil ke haathon se woh bhi majboor hain
Isliye dil se dil milne ka intezaar hain


__________honeyrose________

very nice Honey


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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 06:25:16 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 30, 2008, 06:13:55 PM
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bahoot khoob SG, EK EK Line kamal ki likhi hai apne... magar yah last ki 6 lines to bahot he achi lagi:

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

bahut ki kamaal ka likha hai aap ney JI


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