Roya nahi hu main.......(Ghayel)

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«Reply #15 on: December 30, 2008, 06:46:12 PM »
Bohat Achche Pooja Didi,.
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«Reply #16 on: December 30, 2008, 06:58:14 PM »


tum bhi khafa ho log bhi beraham hain dosto
ab ho chala yaqin k bure ham hain dosto

kis ko hamare hal se nisbat hai kya karain
ankhain to dushmano ki bhi purnam hain dosto

apne siva hamare na hone ka gam kise
apni talash main to ham hi ham hain dosto

kuch aj sham hi se hai dil bhi bujha bujha
kuch shahar k chirag bhi madham hain dosto

is shahar-e-arzu se bhi bahar nikal chalo
ab dil ki raunaqain bhi koi dam hain dosto

sab kuch sahi 'Faraz' par itna zarur hai
duniya main aise log bahut kam hain dosto

_Ahmed Faraaz-
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«Reply #17 on: December 30, 2008, 07:09:49 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 30, 2008, 06:46:12 PM
Bohat Achche Pooja Didi,.


Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 30, 2008, 06:25:16 PM
bahut ki kamaal ka likha hai aap ney JI


Jasbir Singh

Jas ji and Lil bro... maine nahi likha, SG ne likhi hai wo lines, maine to yah likha hai ki unki kavita main se wo 6 lines mujhe behad pasand aai hai!!
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«Reply #18 on: December 30, 2008, 07:22:58 PM »
Rone Ka Mazaa Bhool Gaya Main, Aa Mujhe Rulaa Ke Jaa,.
Khushi Ki Umeed Lagaai Hai Tujhse, Aa Ise Bhi Bujhaa Ke Jaa,.

Teri To Adaa Hi Hai, Muskuraane Ki "Jaana,.
Aa Meri Barbaadi Pe, Jashn Koi Manaa Ke Jaa,.

Kab Tak "Azeem" Ke Toote Dil Se Kheligi Tu,.
Aa "Aye Azeem Ki Jaane, Ise Tu Mitaa Ke Jaa,.

___________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #19 on: December 31, 2008, 09:14:39 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 30, 2008, 02:56:54 PM
Bahot Khoob Sajid Bhaiya,.
And Jaya Didi,.
Yunhi Likhte Rakhiye,.

Bohat Shukriyaan Chote
Quote from: Pooja on December 30, 2008, 06:13:55 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob SG, EK EK Line kamal ki likhi hai apne... magar yah last ki 6 lines to bahot he achi lagi:
 
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Thank You Very much Pooja Jee....
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2008, 09:17:26 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 30, 2008, 06:25:16 PM
bahut ki kamaal ka likha hai aap ney JI


Jasbir Singh

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 30, 2008, 06:46:12 PM
Bohat Achche Pooja Didi,.


 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Kya baat hain maza aa gaya kabhi kabhi is tarah ki funny galtiyaan bhi honi chahiyaan life well done guys  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #21 on: December 31, 2008, 09:20:49 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 30, 2008, 07:22:58 PM
Rone Ka Mazaa Bhool Gaya Main, Aa Mujhe Rulaa Ke Jaa,.
Khushi Ki Umeed Lagaai Hai Tujhse, Aa Ise Bhi Bujhaa Ke Jaa,.

Teri To Adaa Hi Hai, Muskuraane Ki "Jaana,.
Aa Meri Barbaadi Pe, Jashn Koi Manaa Ke Jaa,.

Kab Tak "Azeem" Ke Toote Dil Se Kheligi Tu,.
Aa "Aye Azeem Ki Jaane, Ise Tu Mitaa Ke Jaa,.

___________________________-Jaanasheen-


Tum sach me Ahmed Faraaz ko bohat pasand karte ho shayed, bilkul wahi andaz-e-bayaan bohat khoob chote.
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«Reply #22 on: January 01, 2009, 01:54:49 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 31, 2008, 09:20:49 AM
Tum sach me Ahmed Faraaz ko bohat pasand karte ho shayed, bilkul wahi andaz-e-bayaan bohat khoob chote.

Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
waise Ahmed Faraaz Ji Mere Fav8 Hain,.
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«Reply #23 on: January 01, 2009, 03:30:25 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 08:50:34 AM
Kabhi kismat se kabhi duniya se darta raha hu main
Jaise bhi ho saka zinda raha hu main

Shayed mile hum kabhi bichde jaha par the
Is ummeed me aaj bhi, us mukam par khada hu main

Aa dekhle mujme tu apni khoobiyaan
Mujme mera ab kuch nahi, tera aaiina hu main

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

                            -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut Bahut Khoob sajid saheb..bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: January 01, 2009, 03:32:42 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 08:50:34 AM
Kabhi kismat se kabhi duniya se darta raha hu main
Jaise bhi ho saka zinda raha hu main

Shayed mile hum kabhi bichde jaha par the
Is ummeed me aaj bhi, us mukam par khada hu main

Aa dekhle mujme tu apni khoobiyaan
Mujme mera ab kuch nahi, tera aaiina hu main

Takte hain mujko taare mere sath jagkar
Mukammal ho koi khwab, woh neend soya nahi hu main

Aa dekh le chehre mera waqt-e-rukhsati
Jaisa bhi hu kar itna yaqeen, paraya nahi hu main

Sadma kahu dard ki intehaa kahu apni halet ko kahu kya GHAYEL
Sabkuch to mera loot gaya, par roya nahi hu main

                            -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut accha laga padkar... aapkir ka line toh aankhon mein
aansoo laa diya jii... bahut ache ..
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«Reply #25 on: January 01, 2009, 05:56:57 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 01, 2009, 03:30:25 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob sajid saheb..bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: Sonia01 on January 01, 2009, 03:32:42 PM
Bahut accha laga padkar... aapkir ka line toh aankhon mein
aansoo laa diya jii... bahut ache ..

Sonia and Khwaish tareef ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaan
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«Reply #26 on: January 01, 2009, 07:57:15 PM »
Barbaad Hua Main, Mohabbat Karke "Azeem,.
Yun To Sunaa Tha Mohabbat Abaad Karti Hai,.
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«Reply #27 on: January 16, 2009, 09:36:10 AM »
Mujse kar ke bewafaiee Jitni bakshi hain tune shorat
Utna mashhoor woh shaks bhi nahi, tune jisse wafa ki hain

                         -SG-       
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