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rote hue ko hasa saku bus yahi tammana baqi hai
ruh faana ho chuki hai jism par ghaav baqi hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2006, 06:23:06 PM » |
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aaj phir zindagi ko aaine mein dekha,
apni mohabbat ko kasmasate dekha
logo ko pal pal badalte dekha
aaj humne suraj ko dhalte dekha
tadap utha woh khuda bhi
jab rote hue ek pathar ko dekha
chahkar bhi na rok saka jane wale ko
bus khud ko hamne aaj tadapte dekha
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2006, 06:30:27 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Phoenix.. Good Ones!
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2006, 06:33:54 PM » |
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thanx for ur apreeciation aryan ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2006, 05:54:35 PM » |
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kab tak sath nibhaon tera mein aey zindagi
aakhir mein bhi ek insaan hi hun
pal pal imtehaan leti hai tu mera
aakhir mein koi bhagwan nahi hun
chala ja raha hun tere isharoon pe mein
kisi ki madad ka talabgar nahi hun
koi mujhe kya thukraega apni raahon se
doosron par jeene wala haivan nahi hun
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2006, 03:51:38 AM » |
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nice phoenix ....................kuch yaad aarha hai aapki in lines ko pad ke.........
itna bura toh tera bhi anjaam nahi hai
suraj jo savare thaa, wahi shaam nahi hai
pechaan agar ban na saki teri toh kya gum
kitne hi sitaaro.n ka koi naam nahi hai
yeh shukre mana itna toh hua hai insaaf
tujh per hi tere katal ka ilzaam nahi hai....n/m
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2006, 04:30:03 PM » |
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Na pado mere Dard ko doston.....
Abhi toote khawabon ki dastaan baaki hai......
Seene mein tujhe dekh ke jalan.....
Toh Jism par teri aankhon ke waar ke ghav baaki hai.....
Rooh tadap uthti hai sunke dastaan meri......
Kehti hain sab bahut iss Mahobbat ka Anjaam ab bhi baaki hai.....!!!!!!!!!Bahut accha likha hai NItesh and Ranju 
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2006, 06:28:58 PM » |
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Majboorion Ki Khabar Hai Mujhey,
Baat Baat Par Kasmein Na Khaaya Karo,
Roz Ghairon Ki Majlis Mein Jaate Ho Tum,
Kabhi To Apno Ki Mahefil Sajaaya Karo!
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2006, 06:31:07 PM » |
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Na pado mere Dard ko doston.....
Abhi toote khawabon ki dastaan baaki hai......
Seene mein tujhe dekh ke jalan.....
Toh Jism par teri aankhon ke waar ke ghav baaki hai.....
Rooh tadap uthti hai sunke dastaan meri......
Kehti hain sab bahut iss Mahobbat ka Anjaam ab bhi baaki hai.....!!!!!!!!!Bahut accha likha hai NItesh and Ranju Bahoot he accha hai badnaam ji...Fantastic...Please carry your hard work forever. |
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2006, 09:12:25 AM » |
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gud reply ranju, gaurav bhai and tabrez ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2006, 06:35:14 PM » |
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sath chalna gawara na tha dono ko
haste haste waqt guzar gaya
jab imtihaan ka waqt aaya
tau woh mujhe tanha kar gaya
jaate jaate yaadein de gaya
meri sari khushiyan le gaya
ruh ko zakhmi kar gaya
mujhe tanha kar gaya
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2006, 06:01:30 AM » |
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tere jaane ke baad tere faasane yaad aaye
kitne bhule hue afsaane yaad aaye
kyu bitayai hamne saari umar teri yaad mein
kyu na ham tujhko bhul paaye .........
dube hai teri yaado ke sagar mein kuch is tarah......
ki hamko nahi aache lagte hain ab bahaaro ke saaye
ab dubenge ya bachange , yeh toh hame bhi pata nahi
par jaana thaa kahi aur, na jaane ham kahan nikal aaye..........
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2006, 06:12:17 AM » |
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bhulana chaha unhe par bhula na sake,
chahkar bhi kisi aur ko apna na sake,
yeh teri duaon ka hi asar hai,
ki kisi aur k dil mein mukam pa na sake
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2006, 06:24:42 AM » |
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dub gaye hain dil ke armaan
waqt ka dariya gahara gahara
yun toh hai kitne rishte naate
fir bhi yah dil tanha- tanha
jindagi hai rait si jalati
mera jeevan sehara -sehara
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2006, 05:30:25 PM » |
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dub gaye hain dil ke armaan
waqt ka dariya gahara gahara
yun toh hai kitne rishte naate
fir bhi yah dil tanha- tanha
jindagi hai rait si jalati
mera jeevan sehara -sehara sehraon mein gul khila sakte hain hum udass chehron ko hasa sakte hain hum phir na kehna akele ho raaho mein tum ek dost k liye khuda se takra sakte hain hum |
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