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«Reply #75 on: June 19, 2006, 05:00:08 PM » |
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khamoshi ki sadaen mujhe pukar rahi hain
na chahte hue bhi har dhadkan thamti ja rahi hai
lagta hai ki aaj mein kahin chala jaun
tod dun sare bandhan aur khamoshi me kho jaun
meri wafae.n aaj bewfai si lagne lagi hain
kya kasoor tha mera jo ye duniya mujhse jalne lagi hai
maine bhi do pal maange the pyaar k zamane se
kya itni si khwahish ek jurm bada ban gayi hai
koi jawaab de aaj mujhe ki kya meri chahatein jyada thi bahut
ya fir meri zafao.n me wo pyaar bhara jazba na raha
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«Reply #76 on: June 19, 2006, 08:58:58 PM » |
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mein apne kadmo ki aahat sun nahi paa raha hun
lagta hai ek zinda laash hun aur chale ja raha hun
meri saanse kyun mujhe mehsus nahi ho rahi hai
aisa kya hua hai aaj jo meri tanhaai mujhme chur ho rahi hai
harr ghadi to apne wajood se ulajhta raha hun
aur aaj jab jaan par ban aayi to galti mehsus ho rahi hai
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«Reply #77 on: June 20, 2006, 03:28:41 AM » |
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bahut khub Nitiesh...............
ek shakas hai woh jo khamosh reh kar bahut kuch keh jaata hai
pyaar hi pyaar bhara hai uske seene mein
har waqt hansata ,muskarta nazar aata hai
uska dil hai mom ka bana ,par woh khud ko pathar dil batlata hai
hans ke seh leta hai woh har sitam ko,dusaro ke dukh le jaata hai
apne ghav bane hai uske nasur,per woh dusro ke ghav sehlata hai
chunata hai woh apni palko se dusaro ke aansu
aur hans ke har dard ke zaher ko pee jaata hai
duniya kehti hai usko sitamagar
per mujhe uski rooh mein khuda nazar aata hai.......
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«Reply #78 on: June 20, 2006, 06:59:54 PM » |
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ghar k dwar par jo diya rakha hai wo aaj bujhne laga hai
hawaon ka kafila mere ghar ko chukar nikalne laga hai
pehli baarish ki boondein mere aashiyane ki chaat se tapakne lagi hai
meri bebas masoom si beti bhook se bilakhne lagi hai
haath hain aaj fir is barish me tang mera
na tan par kapde hai na ghar par hai jalta chulha mera
har ghadi meri patni mujhe ghoor k dekh rahi hai
uski akhri saanse dawa ki boond ko taras rahi hai
itne mein zor se ek bijli si chamakti hain
mein aasman ko dekhta hun par kuch nahi hai wahan
jab nazre ghar k dwaar par padi to sakpaka gaya
ek sahab meri tasveeren utar rahe the
jab chamak kam hui to dekha ki wo insaan ja chuka tha
chalo aacha hi hua ek baap ki bebasi dusre baap ki rozi roti to ban gayi
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«Reply #79 on: June 20, 2006, 07:04:47 PM » |
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its superb aacha laga yeh kuch alag sa likha hua .......
very nice .......ek dard hai in lines mein jo pad ke mehsus hota hai
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«Reply #80 on: June 21, 2006, 03:51:09 AM » |
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lo aaj fir se koi ghav dil mein ubhar aaya
kya koi dard thaa jo meri aanhko se chalk aaya
lage hue they logo ke chahere per naqab is kadar
ki mujhe is mein koi chehara saccha nazar nahi aaya
manzile badalti rahi meri ta -umar
per mera dil pyaar ka rasta badal nahi paaya
patharo ka shehar hai yahan koi nahi hai tera
yeh fir unse nazare mila ke mera dil ek ghav aur kyu le aaya
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«Reply #81 on: June 21, 2006, 12:03:40 PM » |
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thanx ranjana ji and nice reply
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«Reply #82 on: June 21, 2006, 12:11:51 PM » |
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agar hota ye mumkin to hum zindagi ki har sham tere naam likh dete
agar hota tu mera yaar to ye gunaah hum bar baar kar lete
agar khuda ke samne rone se sun li jati mannate
to hum apne ghar ka pata yaar mazzar kar lete
agar hatho ki lakeero me chupa hota hai mukkadar sabka
to hum khanjar se tera har zarra haatho par tammam kar lete
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«Reply #83 on: June 21, 2006, 12:25:30 PM » |
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shukriya Nitiesh ..........bahut khub likha ......
ab aansu nahi behte hamare na hi aankhe nam hoti hai
kuch dard diye hue hain unke aur yaado ke kuch moti hai
jindagi naam hai hansane ka aur rone ka shayed
phoolo ke saath saath kaante bhi toh hote hai........
koi sapna ho subeh ka toh shayed hum yaad rahe tumko
hum toh woh lakeere hain un haatho ki jo ho ke bhi sach nahi hoti hai
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«Reply #84 on: June 21, 2006, 12:32:44 PM » |
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mere haatho me tere naam ki lakeeren bhi thi kabhi
par na jaane inn haatho ka sath kab chod gayi
tu shayad mera muqadar tha hi nahi kabhi
chalo aacha hi hua jo ye lakeeren bhi manzil ko pa gayi
aaj hum tanhai me baith kar apne haatho ko dekhte hain
to lagta hai ki ye khanjar bhi kab tak sath dega mera
tum to ek suhani shaam si thi meri zindagi mein
kya hua jo suraj hi waqt se pehle dhal gaya
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«Reply #85 on: June 22, 2006, 01:38:42 AM » |
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na mitne dena tum apne diye ghavo ko mere dil se
yeh woh nasaur hain jo teri yaad baar baar karaate hain
ehasas kara dete hain yeh mujhko tere kiye vaado ka
aur bhar dete hain mere dil ko dard ke jehar se
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«Reply #86 on: June 22, 2006, 06:13:18 PM » |
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tumhari siskiyan in kaano ko abhi tak yaad hai
tumhara wo raat bhar mujhe jaagana yaad hai
socha tha koi mukaam pa jaenge hum
par yun badhawas thokare khana abhi tak yaad hai
har koi gila karta hai hamse iss zamane mein
par tera wo mujhko bewafa bulana abhi tak yaad hai
kya karta agar koi poochta mujhse meri haalat ka sabab
par tab bhi teri yaadon me khoye rehna abhi tak yaad hai
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«Reply #87 on: June 23, 2006, 01:44:15 AM » |
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aap yun mere dil per hain chhaaye hue
ki hain meri raato ki neende uday hue
karwate bhi kal tang aa gayi hamse
ki hum rahe tanha aapki yaado ko seene se lagaye hue
ek dard tham- tham ke rista raha raat bhar
hum gum rahe tere khayalo mein gum yun apne ko bhulaye hue
siskiyaan leti rahi meri saasne tere begair
hum bethe rahe bas tere aane ki aas lagaaye hue
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«Reply #88 on: June 23, 2006, 08:01:40 PM » |
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har zakham apni kahani kehta hai
har lamha apni rawani kehta hai
tum mujhe tanha chood kar chale gaye
par aaj bhi ye kamra hamari kahani kehta hai
tumhe shayad laga hoga ki mein kahin gum ho jaunga
kya kabhi socha tha tumne ki falak bankar dil mein ubhar aaunga
ab koi dawa nahi hai iss dard e dil ko mitane ki
agar hadd se guzar jae dard to dekh lena tasveer mere anjaam ki
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«Reply #89 on: June 24, 2006, 02:03:11 AM » |
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aaj fir dil dard se bhar utha hai isko kaun mitaaye
fir wahi tanhai ka aalam ,fir hain wahi kuch udas se saaye
kaun mere behete aanasu ko ab apne dil mein chipaaye
kaun mere uljhe se sawalo ko fir se ab suljhaye.....
sard hawa ke jhonke hai aur shaam ke dhundle saaye
mera zakhm fir se hara ho ke kyu dard de jaaye
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