~*~ Ruk gaya kahin ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on February 16, 2011, 09:15:30 PM
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Kehne ko toh yeh jahan roshan bada hai,
Bas main hi har taraf andhera dekhta hoon..

Jabse bichdi hai tu alam kuch aisa hai zindagi ka,
Har shaks main bas tera chehra dekhta hoon..

Aj jan liya kay ghum zada sirf tu nahin ‘Khamosh’,
Hasti ankhon main bhi dard gehra dekhta hoon..

Pehle tere dil tak mera poncha behad asan hua karta tha,
Aj tere dil kay aas paas anjaanon ka pehra dekhta hoon..

Kal tak teri ankhon main mera chehra dikha karta tha mujhe,
Mager aj kisi aur kay naam ka jhanda lehra dekhta hoon..

‘Khamosh’ jana jata tha zindagi ko raftaar se jeene kay liye,
Par aj jo tu nahin saath toh apne apko tehra dekhta hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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pankshivam
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 09:27:36 PM »

Nice One Rahim Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
keep writing  Thumbs UP
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 11:35:31 PM »
Quote from: pankshivam on February 16, 2011, 09:27:36 PM

Nice One Rahim Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
keep writing  Thumbs UP



Teh teh dil se shukriya Pank bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2011, 05:37:12 AM »
wah Rahim dost bahut sachhi peshkash --
kya kahen aapki bayani ko...
seedhe lafzom me dard aur sachhai ka bakhoobi bayaan.
daad dil se
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2011, 11:10:34 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on February 17, 2011, 03:08:25 AM
Kya Baat Hai Rahim Bhai
Aaj To Subha Subha Tabiyat Hi Mast Kardi Aapne
Wah Bhai Wah Kya Hi Khub Likha Hai, Yeh Lines To
Mujhe Badi Hi Pasand Aayi, Bahut Bahut Khub.

Dad Hi Dad

Bahut Waqt Pahle Aisa Hi Kuch Likha Tha
Aaj Phir Aapko Parhkar Yaad Aa Gaya Woh
Waise To Isse Post Kar Chuka Hun Main
Aaj Phir Aapki Nazar Kuch Lines Kar Raha Hun
Umeed Hai Aapko Pasand Aayega Galti Maaf Ho...~

Kabhi Chadte , To  Kabhi Dhalte Hue Suraj Ko Dekhta Hoon
Main Bas Yun Hi Apni Zindagi Ko Guzarte Hue Dekhta Hoon

Waqt  Ke  Haathon  Ho  Chala  ,   Ik  Majboor  Shaksh  Hoon
Hr Roz Yun Hi Apni Tamannaon Ko Marte Hue Dekhta Hoon.

Dard-o-Ghum Ke Milne  Par  Koi  Bhi Ranz Nahi Hai Mujhey
Bas Ek Inhe Hi To, Apne Bure Waqt Main Saath Dekhta Hoon

Har Woh Cheez Jo Mujhe Lagi Thi Kabhi Pyari  Door Ho Gayi
Ab Jo Bhi Lagta Hai  Pyara Bas Use  Door Se Hi Dekhta Hoon.


Humesha Shad o Aabad Rahiye...


~Shihab~
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhai..
Kya kahoun bas dil bhar aya apki daad paa kar..

Aur kya lines likhi hai apne..
Wah wah wah wah aur wah..
dard bahaut dikhta hai inn main..
khoob..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2011, 11:11:46 AM »
Quote from: nirala on February 17, 2011, 05:37:12 AM
wah Rahim dost bahut sachhi peshkash --
kya kahen aapki bayani ko...
seedhe lafzom me dard aur sachhai ka bakhoobi bayaan.
daad dil se
Apka teh teh dil se shurkiya Nirala dost..
Yunhi saath dete rahiye..!
Khush rahiye..!
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Anshumali
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2011, 12:18:37 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on February 16, 2011, 09:15:30 PM
Kehne ko toh yeh jahan roshan bada hai,
Bas main hi har taraf andhera dekhta hoon..

Jabse bichdi hai tu alam kuch aisa hai zindagi ka,
Har shaks main bas tera chehra dekhta hoon..

Aj jan liya kay ghum zada sirf tu nahin ‘Khamosh’,
Hasti ankhon main bhi dard gehra dekhta hoon..

Pehle tere dil tak mera poncha behad asan hua karta tha,
Aj tere dil kay aas paas anjaanon ka pehra dekhta hoon..

Kal tak teri ankhon main mera chehra dikha karta tha mujhe,
Mager aj kisi aur kay naam ka jhanda lehra dekhta hoon..

‘Khamosh’ jana jata tha zindagi ko raftaar se jeene kay liye,
Par aj jo tu nahin saath toh apne apko tehra dekhta hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~



Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression .... dil se daad !!!
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2011, 01:57:19 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on February 17, 2011, 12:18:37 PM
Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression .... dil se daad !!!
Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2011, 03:30:48 PM »
kya baat hai rahim....
tooooooooo.. gooooood...
bht bht khoob....
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2011, 03:42:26 PM »
kamaal ke ehsaas hai dost--
behad umda poetry
lajawaab peshkash dear.
ekdum dil ko chuu gai--
khus rahiye
sukriya
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 05:06:37 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji behad umda repply kiya hai shihab ji..
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 07:12:18 PM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 17, 2011, 03:30:48 PM
kya baat hai rahim....
tooooooooo.. gooooood...
bht bht khoob....
Teh teh dil se shukriya Priya di..
khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2011, 07:16:30 PM »
Quote from: killbill on February 17, 2011, 03:42:26 PM
kamaal ke ehsaas hai dost--
behad umda poetry
lajawaab peshkash dear.
ekdum dil ko chuu gai--
khus rahiye
sukriya
Teh teh dil se shukriya Killbill dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 17, 2011, 05:06:37 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji behad umda repply kiya hai shihab ji..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2011, 07:19:52 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on February 17, 2011, 05:50:15 PM
Maafi Chahta Hun Bhai Mere Irada
Aapka Dil Dukhana Nahi Hausla Badana Tha
Aur Bahut Bahut Shukariya Aapka Tahe Dilse
Shukar Guzar Hun Main Ki Aapne Meri Nakaam
Si Koshish Ko Is Qadar Pasand Farmaaya...

Aap Bhi Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Arey ap maafi mat mangiye..
mera matlab tha dil khush hojata hai apki daad
paa kar..
Khush rahiye..!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2011, 07:50:08 AM »
Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai Bahut Mast Likha Hai Aapne
Excellent
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