*Ruksat__________Baadal -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: December 02, 2008, 05:12:13 PM »

bahoot khoob Li lbro... kaya baat hai... Apki shayri to ajj kal din doguni rat choguni kamal dikha rahi hai...

Khush raho aor likhte raho...


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«Reply #16 on: December 02, 2008, 05:14:48 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 05:12:13 PM

bahoot khoob Li lbro... kaya baat hai... Apki shayri to ajj kal din doguni rat choguni kamal dikha rahi hai...

Khush raho aor likhte raho...

Shukriya Didi Jaan,.
Ke aapne Hamaari Shayari Padhi,.
Aur Pasand Bhi Kiya,.
Aap Ke Saath Rehkar Kuch Seekhne Ko Milta Hai,.
Yunhi Saath Dete Rahiye,.


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«Reply #17 on: December 02, 2008, 05:19:34 PM »

Rishta Unse Hume Hi Nibhaana Nahi Aaya,.
Unpar Apni Chahatein Jataana Nahi Aaya,.

Bheeg Gaya Farsh, Maaf Kar Dena Doston,.
Kya Karte, Hume Muskuraana Nahi Aaya,.

Yun To Saare Gham Uthaa Raha Tha Khamoshi Se,.
Dil Ka Dard Kisi Ko Bataana Nahi Aaya,.

Tum Kabhi Meri Haalat Dekhkar Afsos Na Karna,.
"Azeem" Ki Barbaadi Ko, Ye Zamaana Nahi Aaya,.

_________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #18 on: December 02, 2008, 11:05:05 PM »

Nice Baadal Ji Applause

Bhule hue chehre ko kyon tum yaad karte ho
Unke diye gaye zakhmo ko kyon hara karte ho
Duniya wale yun hi rai se pahaar bana dete hain
Unhe chup kar ke kab tak hum rakh sakte hain


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«Reply #19 on: December 03, 2008, 05:35:06 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 02, 2008, 05:10:06 PM

Waah Bohat Badhiya,.
Baadal Ji,.
And Pooja Sis,.

Meri Kismat Mein Wo Nahi Tha "Doston,
Phir Use Paane Ki Khwaish Mein Jeeta Raha,.

GAansoon Dikh Jaate Mere, To Saare Shehar Me Gham Hota,.
Ye Sochkar Main, Andar Hi Andar Aansoon Peeta Raha,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-

bahut hi khoob bahut badia jaan ji Clapping Smiley

Baadal


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«Reply #20 on: December 03, 2008, 05:36:41 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 02, 2008, 05:19:34 PM

bahut hi umda jaan ji wah Applause

Baadal


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«Reply #21 on: December 03, 2008, 05:38:38 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 02, 2008, 11:05:05 PM

Nice Baadal Ji Applause

Bhule hue chehre ko kyon tum yaad karte ho
Unke diye gaye zakhmo ko kyon hara karte ho
Duniya wale yun hi rai se pahaar bana dete hain
Unhe chup kar ke kab tak hum rakh sakte hain

thanx harish ji

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bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Applause

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #22 on: December 03, 2008, 05:56:20 AM »

wonderful baadal ji Applause

n nice reply u all pooja ji , janasheen ji Applause

mein gam se ghabra gayi thi shyd
khud se khafa ho gayi thi shyd
samajh na paa rahi thi kya hoga anjaam
kaise chal paungi bina kisi ki ungli thaam

par kadam badhaya jo chalne ko meine
sekdo haath saamne aa gaye the mere
khush mein us waqt beshumaar thi ho gayi
jaise fir mujhe ek nayi duniya thi mil gayi

lagi sochne gar jo kadam na badhaya hota
to kaise is jeevan ko samajh paya hota
is shrashti(duniya) mei yahi do to mele hain
jisme khushi aur gam k jhamele hain

jeevan se meine bas itna hai seekha
khushi aur gam mei bas chalna hi hai seekha
mat soch baadal aaj kaun tujhse hai bichad gaya
ye dekh k usse tera naata zindgi bhar k liye jud gaya

najar ka kya hai dhoka de hi jaaygi
par yaad to zindgi bhar saath nibhaygi
us khuda k ghar to har kisi ko hai jaana
par baadal usse pehle apna farz hai nibhana

zindgi mili hai to jeena ise haske
gam mile agar to larna usse dat k
jis tarah andhera hamesha kaayam nahi rehta
us tarah gam ka hamesha saaya bhi nahi rehta

bas ant mei yahi mein keh paaungi
yaad rakhna khushi ko har pal saath nibhaygi
ghir ka gamo k andhere saaye mei bhul na jaana
isliye dost hamesha khushi ko hi apnana

baadal ji lagta hai ham kuch likhte likhte jyada hi likhte chale gaye
par agar aapko kuch bura laga ho to pls maaf kar dena par jo samajh mei aaya jo baat dil se nikli bas wahi likhte gaye


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«Reply #23 on: December 03, 2008, 05:59:50 AM »

it just so amazing...I wish I could write something even some where close to it...and all the replies r also so gr8...'mashallah' Applause


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baadal102

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«Reply #24 on: December 03, 2008, 08:06:42 AM »

thanx a lot bhawna ji

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 03, 2008, 05:56:20 AM

wonderful baadal ji Applause

n nice reply u all pooja ji , janasheen ji Applause

bahut khoob bahut hi umda bhawna ji Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #25 on: December 03, 2008, 08:07:20 AM »

thanx a lot bulbul ji

Baadal


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«Reply #26 on: December 04, 2008, 12:11:36 PM »

Shukriya,.
And Nice One,.


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