!!Rulaa aayi!!

by amrita on July 02, 2005, 05:17:15 PM
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amrita
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Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2005, 05:22:36 PM »
hey too gud...Amrita..................................... .............
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2005, 06:01:26 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..



wonderfull amrita............bahot  accha  likha  aap ne...........  tongue3
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2005, 07:00:13 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..

Tu Meri Rooh Ko Jo Tarpa Kr Lout Ayi
Qabar S Phir Aik Awaz Ki Goonj Ayi
Tu Kahan Hai Aaft e Jaan Chal Di
Kia Teri Nahin Mouat Hai Abhi Ayi
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rohit30002
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2005, 07:02:17 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..



It's very nive amrita
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2005, 07:08:36 PM »
Very gud one Amrita................................nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aman Sarhadi
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2005, 07:34:27 PM »
Fatang Amrita...bahut hi khub likha hai..............
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2005, 08:14:47 PM »
Aab Jo Hai Mere Ghar Mein Shaam ayi
Tere Sapnoon Ko Bhi Hai Saath layi
Tu reh Gayi Hai Kahin Duur
lekin Teri Khusbu Tera Pyaam Hai Layi
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2005, 12:23:40 AM »
Bichdaa hoon aaj us s tu Buhat Us Ki Yaad ayi
Lekin JabBhi woh Ayi Mujhay Rula ayi
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2005, 04:12:35 AM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..


ye kaisa rishta hai tujhse mera,.....

k tere aane se dil ashQuo se bhar jata hai,...

rona chahta hu tere kandhe per sir rekhker,....

magar teri khushiya dekhker wo chup ho jata hai,......
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amrita
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2005, 02:08:03 PM »
thanks niki........waheed..........faree........rohit... ..aman....thy........tushar......
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2005, 02:13:18 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..



Hey it was too good Amrita ...
I dont have words to express my feelings for this ...
I really appreciate this post ...
Well done and keep it up ...
Hope to see more from you ...
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2005, 07:45:43 PM »
You WelCome.......................................... .................... Amrita ji
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amrita
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2005, 07:21:38 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..



Hey it was too good Amrita ...
I dont have words to express my feelings for this ...
I really appreciate this post ...
Well done and keep it up ...
Hope to see more from you ...


thank you sooo much hate...
even i dont have words to express how thankful i am that u appreciated this post and really no one ever has appreciated me so much..
thank you once again and i hope u always like what i post and i dont let you down...
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 07:26:00 AM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Saath nibhane ke liye zindagi mein uski badi dair se aayi
usse toh mil na saki,toh kabar pe uss ki phool hi chada aayi

chali aa rahi thi ashq bahate hue,ki mere dil se uski awaaz aayi
aye aafat e jaan mujhe kya kum rulati thi,aaj meri rooh ko bhi rula aayi..


Its really nice Amrita and keep it up dear !!!!! Usual Smile
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