Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal:Shayri-E-Dard

KOYAL46

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Meine aaj ek naya prayog kiya hai.....harr line mai words ek he letter se shuru karne ki ek koshish ki hai.....Shaayad pasand aaye.....will wait for comments....

Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....

Nayan se Naaraaj neend
Swapah sab sakuchaye se
Ruthee Ruthee Raat rahe
Par Pyaas pyaar kee pale

Nishthur nayan neer jhare
Preet kee pale peer priye
Dil dilver deedaar ko dahay
Aaja aankh-adhar ab adhir

Ranjeeshein rukshat ho rahi
Khawaab kay khajaane khule
Sunheri subaah sapne sajaaye
Ruthee-ruthi raat reet-jaaye


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2011, 06:58:09 AM »

aahhaaaaaaaaaaa gud work koyal....maza aaya ye style padhkar.....waise bhi tumhari poems me freshness hoti hain aur ye to aur bhi fresh hai morning dew drops jaise......
bht mast lagi mujhe to........
mastammmmmmmmm mastttttttttt


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2011, 01:39:22 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 02, 2011, 06:53:59 AM

Meine aaj ek naya prayog kiya hai.....harr line mai words ek he letter se shuru karne ki ek koshish ki hai.....Shaayad pasand aaye.....will wait for comments....

Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry ... KOYAL Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ..... Clapping Smiley

khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2011, 01:57:11 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 02, 2011, 06:53:59 AM

Meine aaj ek naya prayog kiya hai.....harr line mai words ek he letter se shuru karne ki ek koshish ki hai.....Shaayad pasand aaye.....will wait for comments....

Acha koshish hai sweetu...bahut khoob...


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2011, 03:37:47 PM »

"
baat baat bewaqt barse
dildaar e deed deewaana tarse

mann mera masti me
chahak chahak chandni chahe

ujjal ujjal ujjli ulhaas sa
ulajh ulajh uljhaata jaye

dekh dekh deewana dil
tadadap tadap tadapta jaye

sundar sughad sital sa badan dekh
bahak bahak bahakata bebas

naaz nakhre nasheele nain
chitwan chanchal chhodd chale chal chala chal--:) Usual Smile

"
ufff dimaag ka dahi ho gaya iss azeeb se kosis me:( sad5

nirala ke bas ki baat nhi aisa likha---:(
koyal sahiba behad khubsurat likha aapne
dada le lo ji
"
thanx


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2011, 04:15:51 PM »

Quote from: nirala on January 02, 2011, 03:37:47 PM

"
ufff dimaag ka dahi ho gaya iss azeeb se kosis me:( sad5

nirala ke bas ki baat nhi aisa likha---:(
koyal sahiba behad khubsurat likha aapne
dada le lo ji
"
thanx

He he he mast hai nirala ji..hey koyaliya tune mast trend shuru kiya hai gud going main bhi koshish karungi apne dard bhare andaz mein aesa hi kuch likhne kaa..per thode waqt baad..keep up the gud work...


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ANAAM

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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2011, 05:30:41 PM »

superb poem Koyal....ek dam ek naye andaaz mai..... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 02, 2011, 06:53:59 AM

Meine aaj ek naya prayog kiya hai.....harr line mai words ek he letter se shuru karne ki ek koshish ki hai.....Shaayad pasand aaye.....will wait for comments....


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 12:46:48 AM »

wah kya baat hai Niralaji aap bhi chha gaye.....mast likha hai.. Applause

Quote from: nirala on January 02, 2011, 03:37:47 PM

"
ufff dimaag ka dahi ho gaya iss azeeb se kosis me:( sad5

nirala ke bas ki baat nhi aisa likha---:(
koyal sahiba behad khubsurat likha aapne
dada le lo ji
"
thanx


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2011, 04:17:25 AM »

Quote from: nirala on January 02, 2011, 03:37:47 PM

"
ufff dimaag ka dahi ho gaya iss azeeb se kosis me:( sad5

nirala ke bas ki baat nhi aisa likha---:(
koyal sahiba behad khubsurat likha aapne
dada le lo ji
"
thanx

NIRALA JI AAPKA LIKHNE ME AUR MERA AAPKI POEM PADHKE SAMJHNE ME DIMAG KA DAHI NAHIN CHHAACH BAN GAYA.......
PAR MAZA AAYA ISE PADHNE ME...GUD WRK JI KEEP GOING THIS WAY


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nirala

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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2011, 04:23:05 AM »

hahaha--
dhanyabaad.
agr samjh gaye ho to mujhe b samjha dena aap.


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Re: Ruthee Ruthee Raat ....Koyal

«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2011, 05:55:47 AM »

wah Kukku koyal--bahut mazedaar likha tumne.
achha laga bahut.. Usual Smile

4 saal baad mai bhi kosis karunga aisa :-p
sukriya


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