SAAHIL:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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LEHRON KO SAAHIL KII CHAHAT RAHI UMMRA BHAR
AUR JAB MILI SAAHIL SE TOH SAAHIL BHAR GAYA

SAMANDAR HATAASH, LEHREIN UDAAS, KII YEH KYA HUA
MILE HUM SAAHIL SE TOH SAAHIL KIDHAR GAYA

BADE BHOLE THAY SANAM MERE MUJHE DUBOYA BHI
AUR KEHTE RAHE SABSE KII SHAYAD MILNE SE DAR GAYA

WOH LAUT JAB,TOH DIKHI SAAHIL KII NISHANIYAAN PHIR
DOOR JA K DEKHA TOH BOLE SAAHIL NIKHAR GAYA

BADA ROYE ,WOH NA MILKE HUMSE AUR HUM OONKE BIN
KISSII NE POOCHHA OONSE RAAZ TOH BOLE "SAAHIL" MAR GAYA


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_Vicky_

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2009, 01:54:03 PM »

Dara hi Dete Ho Yaaaaaaaaaar Salil Bhai.. Kaise kaise Title rakhte Ho..

Bahut Dard Hai Yaar aapki Is Poem Me.. Last Line to waqai kuch der ke liye Udaas kar gai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob..

**~** Mann **~**


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thegrimreaper

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2009, 05:07:49 PM »

marvallous Applause


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Roja

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2009, 05:09:40 PM »

Subject change karo uffff...Sach mein tension sa ho gaya

Waise aapne bahut accha likha hai dear. but subject change karo. abhi bi
shock dil se utra nahi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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poppoetry

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2009, 05:14:34 PM »

Sach me saahil ji....aapne to dara hi diya....title padhte hi......oh God..

Likha to aapne bilkul lajwaab hai lekin title.......isse pahle hamari tarah sabko shock lage...plz......change the title


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punam

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2009, 05:22:37 PM »

Saahil bhaiya sach me kya title chuna huuu...dard bhara bahut acha likha lekin mujhe title bilkul acha nahi laga...kuch aur rakho...


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salil2002

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Re: SAAHIL MAR GAYA

«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2009, 02:20:57 PM »

Quote from: Mann on August 04, 2009, 01:54:03 PM

Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 04, 2009, 05:07:49 PM

marvallous Applause

Quote from: Roja on August 04, 2009, 05:09:40 PM

Subject change karo uffff...Sach mein tension sa ho gaya

Waise aapne bahut accha likha hai dear. but subject change karo. abhi bi
shock dil se utra nahi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Quote from: poppoetry on August 04, 2009, 05:14:34 PM

Sach me saahil ji....aapne to dara hi diya....title padhte hi......oh God..

Likha to aapne bilkul lajwaab hai lekin title.......isse pahle hamari tarah sabko shock lage...plz......change the title

Quote from: punam on August 04, 2009, 05:22:37 PM

Saahil bhaiya sach me kya title chuna huuu...dard bhara bahut acha likha lekin mujhe title bilkul acha nahi laga...kuch aur rakho...

vicky bhai , roja dear,grimreaper,pooja dear and punam sis bahut bahgut shukriya.....doston yeh title main raaste main gungunaa raha tha toh yeh shayari dseemaag main aa gayi ab agar main yeh title badalta hoon toh yeh achcha nahin lagta.......aur isi bahaane yeh jaan kar khushi huyi kii meri maut par kucch log toh dekhne aayenge hi bahut bahut shukriya

maut se kya darna yaaron ek roz jab yeh aayegi aayegi
tum laakh rokne kii koshish karna yeh mujhe le jaayegi

DOSTON TITLE CHANGE HO GAYA HAI


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madhuwesh

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Re: SAAHIL

«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2009, 11:28:25 PM »

Really touching poem Saahil ji,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft

:clap:excellent


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sbechain

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Re: SAAHIL

«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2009, 05:25:09 AM »

ACHCHA LIKHA HAI SAAHI JI Applause


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salil2002

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Re: SAAHIL

«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2009, 11:01:03 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 05, 2009, 11:28:25 PM

Really touching poem Saahil ji,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft

:clap:excellent

Quote from: Sheba on August 06, 2009, 05:25:09 AM

ACHCHA LIKHA HAI SAAHI JI Applause

thanks a lot sheba dear and madhu dear


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