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Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2006, 05:20:01 PM » |
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kya baat hai talat ji
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2006, 05:44:58 PM » |
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bahut khoob Talat ...
jab dil ka dard kuch tham jaaye
aur aas ka bhi deepak bujh jaaye
mere labo per tera naam aake fir ruk sa jaaye
saamne tab tum aa jaana......
jab andhare mujhe darane lage
sab taraf ek maausi si chhaane lage
dur kahi koi dard ka raag sunaane lage
aur meri awaaz tumhare dil tak aane lage
saamne tab tum aa jaana..........
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2006, 06:17:40 PM » |
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wah.. bhaut khoobsoorat talat ji n ranjana ji ... =D>
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2006, 03:04:42 AM » |
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shukriya jeet.........
jab dekho tum kuch accha likha hua
toh sirf WAH WAH!! se kaam mat chalana
utha lena tum bhi apni kalam
aur bina likhe yahan se mat jaana
kuch lines aur add karke is mehfil ko jo ho aage badana
saamne tab tum aa jaana........ :D :D
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2006, 01:56:34 PM » |
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Thanks Phoenix, Ranjana, and Jeet ! and very well written Ranjana !!
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2006, 02:05:11 PM » |
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=D>!
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2006, 04:48:32 PM » |
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Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Simply Beautiful Talat ... Bahut hi khoob tarike se shabdo ko sambhala hai ... Keep it up ... |
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2006, 04:49:15 PM » |
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Else everyone have also written well here ...
Keep it up all ...
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2006, 04:52:28 PM » |
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Aa gaye hum teri saanso ke rukne se pehle,
Aa gaye hum teri palke sharm se jhukne se pehle,
Aa na sake teri doli ke uthte waqt par,
Aa gaye hum tera aangan bachane aandhi ke phukne se pehle ...
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2006, 04:21:28 PM » |
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Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Wah Jabardast Creation hai Talat ji..... Ek thi Kahani Pyar ki.....
Jisme thi harr Ghadi Sanam ke InteZaar ki......
Kehti thi woh kabhi humse......
Jab Chaho tab hume Paana.....
Zindagi na de jab Saath mera toh tum Saamne aa jaana.....
Ab karein kya jab wahi hume bhoola baithe hai.....
Hum Seene se Gum toh woh aur kisi ko Dil me basaye baithe hai......
Aye Khuda Na jaane yeh kaisa Saawan aya hai......
Tere hote bhi dekh harr Phool aaj murjhaya hai..............!!!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2006, 11:02:30 AM » |
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Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Bohat khoob Talat... |
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2006, 11:55:07 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Neer, JHL, Gaurav and Aryaan for the appreciation !!
Very nice JHL and Gaurav !!
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Bharat
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2006, 02:55:57 AM » |
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Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!
Talat, Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!! ranjana, JHL and B_Shayar, All.....very nice work !!!  |
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«Reply #14 on: July 27, 2006, 01:03:24 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Bharat !! and very nice reply !!!
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