Saamne tab tum aa jaana......!!

by Talat on July 15, 2006, 05:11:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 27, 2006, 08:01:12 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Jab aas ka suraj dhal jaaye
Bekhwab meri har shab jaaye
Jab dil ye bojhil ho jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!

Jab kho jaaye meri muskaan
Saara jag ho jaaye anjaan
Jab tadpe mere jism-o-jaan
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!

Jab anchal bheegne lag jaaye
Dill seene me machal jaaye
Jab yaad kisi ki tadpa jaaye
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!

Jab dil ka dard thamne sa lage
Aur jyot aankhon ki bujhne lage
Jab saanse dheemi hone lage
Saamne tab tum aa jaana...!!


kabil e tarif talat ji :D
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«Reply #16 on: July 28, 2006, 04:11:56 PM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Shahid !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: July 29, 2006, 10:48:54 AM »
good work all
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«Reply #18 on: July 29, 2006, 11:34:52 AM »
wah kya baat hai sab ka ....bahut khoob rang jamaaye hain iss section mein......its really good
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2006, 11:43:26 AM »
very nice TALAT, RANJANA, JEET, BHARAT, JHL
bahut aacha likha hai.........


mere sir ko jab na mile meri gardan ka sahara
saamne tum aa jana......
jab saanse thamne si lage dil dubne sa lage
saamne tum aa jana.......
mere kashmash ki si zindgi se jab thakne laga kadam
saamne tum aa jana......
aur koi dua nahi meri mere khuda se bas ek baar
saamne tum aa jana.....
dur ho jayenge sare gile mit jayengi sari duriya
bas ek baar samne tum aa jana.......
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«Reply #20 on: July 29, 2006, 05:04:15 PM »
shukriya vikas .....bahut khoob likha aapne

jab gum se hum sirr uthana chahye
apne dukho ka mataam manana chahye
apne gile shikve tumhe sunana chahye
tab tum saamne aa jaana ....

tasvur mein hum tumse jaane kya kya kiye
per haqikat mein kuch keh na paaye
jab dil ki baat hum apne hontho per le aaye
toh saamne tab tum aa jaana .......
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«Reply #21 on: July 29, 2006, 05:12:32 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
very nice TALAT, RANJANA, JEET, BHARAT, JHL
bahut aacha likha hai.........


mere sir ko jab na mile meri gardan ka sahara
saamne tum aa jana......
jab saanse thamne si lage dil dubne sa lage
saamne tum aa jana.......
mere kashmash ki si zindgi se jab thakne laga kadam
saamne tum aa jana......
aur koi dua nahi meri mere khuda se bas ek baar
saamne tum aa jana.....
dur ho jayenge sare gile mit jayengi sari duriya
bas ek baar samne tum aa jana.......



Vikas,
Thank you.

You also have written very well !!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #22 on: July 29, 2006, 05:13:23 PM »
Thanks a lot everyone for appreciation ...
Rest all have also written well here ...
Keep it up all ...
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«Reply #23 on: July 29, 2006, 05:19:56 PM »
Mujhe zindagi bhar chahna hi uska kaam tha,
Ab kyu khatm na jaane ho gaya kaam uska Huh?
Maikhane to sabhi bandh the us shaam ko,
To kya aansu se bhara hua tha jaam uska Huh?
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«Reply #24 on: July 30, 2006, 01:25:39 PM »
Thanks Sam, Anitha and Vikas !! Bohot achcha likha hai Vikas, Ranjana and JHL !!
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«Reply #25 on: July 30, 2006, 01:34:29 PM »
Abhi aur sehne do mujhe ye dard-e-judaai,
Aankhon main bhi kuch ashk hain baaqi
Dil toota hai, kuch aur tukde ho jaane do
Kuch aur shab aansuon me bheeg jaane do
Magar jab main khone lagoon apni hasti
Aur in labon pe reh jaaye ek dua tarasti
Tab der na karna ae mere humawa.......
.................Saamne mere tum aa jaana !!!
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«Reply #26 on: July 30, 2006, 02:21:30 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"

jab gum se hum sirr uthana chahye
apne dukho ka mataam manana chahye
apne gile shikve tumhe sunana chahye
tab tum saamne aa jaana ....

tasvur mein hum tumse jaane kya kya kiye
per haqikat mein kuch keh na paaye
jab dil ki baat hum apne hontho per le aaye
toh saamne tab tum aa jaana .......


bahut aacha likha hi ranjana ji, aur.. talat ji apne bhi bahut aachi post likhi hai...

jub aakela dekhker tanhayee satane lage.
jub aapke pyaar per bhondu mit jaane lage
jub paharron ki chotiyon se badal takrane lage.
aur.. humare armaan toot ke bikher jaane lage.
saamne tum aa jaana....

jub zindgi ka suraj paschim mein dhalne lage.
jub teri yaad mein hum had se zada jalne lage.
jub mere dard ko dekhker dard  rone lage.
jub zindgi maut ka aanchal chune lage....
saamne tum aa jaana.....
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«Reply #27 on: July 30, 2006, 04:35:01 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Sam, Anitha and Vikas !! Bohot achcha likha hai Vikas, Ranjana and JHL !!


Thanks a lot Talat for appreciation ...
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«Reply #28 on: July 30, 2006, 04:35:52 PM »
Too good Talat and Bhondu ...
Keep it up both ...
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«Reply #29 on: July 30, 2006, 04:41:25 PM »
Jab dhadkane dil ko chhodne lage,
Jab khuda maut ki aur raahon ko modne lage,
Jab aansu aankhon palko ko khojne lage,
Jab sabr bhi apna dum todne lage,
Tab saamne tum aa jaana ...
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