Saamne tab tum aa jaana......!!

by Talat on July 15, 2006, 05:11:16 PM
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«Reply #150 on: November 14, 2006, 05:39:45 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"
Chale The Shauk Se HuM Tohfa-E-Wafa Le Kar,
GaMon Ne Loot Liya NaaM Aapka Le Kar,

Ye Aag Ghar Ko Lagi Hai To Kya Taajub Hai,
Gayi Thi Roshni Mujh Se Mera Pata Le Kar,

Sitarein Moond Le Aankhein To Kitna Achha Ho,
Jhuka Hia Wo Mere Chehre Par Iltija Le Kar,

Jo Haar Jate Hai Manzil Unhe Nahi Milti,
Kisike Paas Na Ja Harf-E-Iltija Le Kar,

Mere Badan Ko Sajaya Gaya Hai ZakhMon Se,
Main Kya Karunga Koi QeMat Qaba Le Kar,

Ye Shehar Pathar Hai Yahan KiMat Nahi Dil Ki,
Kahan Khade Hai Janaab Aap Aayna Le Kar...
* * * * * NM


Wow, very Very Nice..

Especially Talat, Bahut acha Likha hain.
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Talat
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«Reply #151 on: November 14, 2006, 06:20:22 PM »
Very Nice Bhondu.......!!

Thank You Mr. Aaditya for your kind appreciation.
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«Reply #152 on: November 20, 2006, 05:10:49 PM »
Kaise ye raat kategi kaha se hamara chaand dikhega,
Raat ke saath andhkar bhi bebasi ka aalam laya hai,
Palke bhi nahi kholte darr hai kahi aansu na nikal aaye,
Kyunki is baar ka mausam bhi lekar maatam aaya hai ...
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«Reply #153 on: November 30, 2006, 01:43:32 PM »
Nice one !!!
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«Reply #154 on: November 30, 2006, 02:43:19 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Kaise ye raat kategi kaha se hamara chaand dikhega,
Raat ke saath andhkar bhi bebasi ka aalam laya hai,
Palke bhi nahi kholte darr hai kahi aansu na nikal aaye,
Kyunki is baar ka mausam bhi lekar maatam aaya hai ...


bahut aacha likha hai jhl ji mazza aa gaya...

jo pyaar hi aana huko peeth dikha raha hai
isliye mausam bhi aapna matam mana raha hai.
dil chehre mein humko kabhi dikhta tha chand
aaj wo chehra hi humara dil jala raha hai.
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«Reply #155 on: November 30, 2006, 03:20:18 PM »
bahoot khoob Talat, Dost kavi ji and JHL ji
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«Reply #156 on: November 30, 2006, 05:42:51 PM »
Thanks Pooja...and good one Bhondu !!
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«Reply #157 on: December 02, 2006, 03:15:58 PM »
Quote from: "majid"
nice allll lage raho....

Mar ke jeena seekh raha hoon

Mang ke pana seekh liya hai

Pa ke khona seekh raha hoon

Sabar ko zad-e-rah bana kar

Kanch pe chalna seekh raha hoon

Phirte phirte sehra sehra

Pyaas ko peena seekh raha hoon

Marham to rakhna na aaya

Zakham kharochna seekh raha hoon

Jeene ke hain ajab taqaze " jaan "
Zinda rehna seekh raha hoon

Madhoshi ne bahut sataaya

Hosh main rehna seekh raha hoon

Barson guzre phir bhi ab tak

Man se bichdna seekh raha hoon

Dar kar zehar ke pyaale se

Sach ko chupana seekh raha hoon

Rote rote auron par

Khud pe hansna seekh raha hoon

Gham ne mujh ko bahut hai khaya

Ab gham khana seekh raha hoon

aIs pe hairan hota hoon bahut

Kartab kya kya seekh raha hoon



bahut aacha likha hai majid ji.. ekdum dil ko chu gaya .. isiliye kuch bhi likh nhi raha hu kahi ye behtaeen ehsaash kuch bigar na jaaye.
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«Reply #158 on: December 03, 2006, 01:11:21 PM »
Very nice Majid...Bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #159 on: December 03, 2006, 05:16:37 PM »
Thanks a lot everyone for appreciating my post ...
Good one all ...
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«Reply #160 on: December 03, 2006, 05:23:23 PM »
Dil ko koi bhi rasta yaha se na dikhaai diya,
Paas jab jana chaha to ek shor sunaai diya,
Maatam tha  wo kisi mohabbat ki vidaai ka,
Ispe humne bhi apna sehra khushi se lutaai diya ...
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«Reply #161 on: August 28, 2007, 06:51:35 PM »
Very nice JHL Usual Smile

Dil se jo nikle, ab koi rasta nahin
Jaane kyun aankhon main
ab koi basta nahin
Udaas lamhon ka karb
kuch itna saha hai
zakhm bhi mera ab rista nahin !!
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«Reply #162 on: August 28, 2007, 06:53:31 PM »
wah kaya baat hai....

Jakahm ab khud hi khud ko samjha dete hai
Dard ki dastak ko kahin ander chupa lete hai
Roti ankhein kahti hai, bas ab aor nahi
Siskati raat ko roj kuch aise hai thapka dete hai....
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«Reply #163 on: August 31, 2007, 01:15:45 PM »
Thanks Pooja....Good one again
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«Reply #164 on: October 03, 2007, 09:35:30 AM »
zakm ab khud ko samjhane lage hai.
dard ke ka her ek vaar seh jaane lage hai
nikal jaati hai ek cheek asahneeya banker
jab wo humko yaad aane lage hai .
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